Target, the First Person to Cultivate Immortality

I really like the character of the heroine, and the plot is also good. It's a matter of my personal preferences. No matter what novel I read, I don't really like the ambiguity of the protagonist with too many emotional lines. Personally, I feel that Mu Yuzhong and the heroine are more compatible, but after watching the extra episodes, it always feels weird, as if something is missing... After reading it again, I felt that the ending wanted to please all readers, but it also made people feel uncomfortable.

Beautiful, very beautiful I hope Mu and Zhong will be together with the heroine in the extra episode. Who can resist a loyal dog who can self-pua? "And why doesn't she bully others but only me? So after all, she still likes me."

Very healthy Our Yao Zhi is a proper eldest heroine, decisive in killing and quick-witted, cute and ambitious. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhsiesness-grows flowering, and especially likes the heroine's pretense... Ah, Vajra Babi is so cute, her brother looks like a male mother hahaha There is also a girl who likes to chat with Yao Zhi. She is so cute. I really like this kind of person who is real and has no bad intentions. She and her little licking dog have a good time. Also, the original female lead was named Yao Zhi Xiaowu. She was pretty good and matched up well with the original lead actor! The friendship between the girls is particularly good. It's so warm and cute to see Yao Zhi, the original heroine and the cute little friends acting in unison! Finally, Yao Zhi and cute little poor Jian Xiu Mu are very good at eating, they are two very nervous people!

This is a really refreshing article. It's not aggrieved, it's not pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, it's not simple and low-key. If she had to give a definition to the Tao she cultivates. She thought it must be... Only me. Only think about yourself and act according to your heart. ——If there is no way for me in the world, then I will use my body as the way.

The heroine's character is so suitable for me! The businessman values ​​​​profit, and the heroine's performance is lifelike and arrogant. Every time she passes by the door of the King of Hell, she is full of passion. Drive passion. I hope that future writers will keep up the good work. Since you don't plan to write CP in the text, just go on with your career! Don't talk too much about the relationship between men and women, it will easily ruin the story. The known person who may be the male protagonist: Master, Chu Zhizhong (the original female protagonist's senior brother) should be gone! May I ask who the male protagonist of the author's extra story is?

It's so interesting that I read it in one sitting. It's so productive! I like this heroine so much. She doesn't procrastinate in doing things, she doesn't let the rabbit out of her sight, she does things steadily, she knows how to find a supporter, and she communicates with the master at all times, she doesn't act blindly, she doesn't hide the situation, and she is eloquent. I love her to death! I really like this kind of self-aware and powerful heroine, which is very friendly to my breasts! ! ! Finally, I hope to give Mu Yuzhong a lot of consideration! Whether you like a high-spirited young man or a love-minded one, there is no need to be too incompatible with a young husband and a big heroine. I have not seen so many novels where a woman is superior to a man in the world of cultivation. I hope the author will give it more thought, and Mu Mu is gifted with a sword! The strength matches, the appearance matches, the personality matches, the immortal couple who ascended together, and the descendants of Mad and the others. I hope the author will write a separate book [shy] instead of writing about their children in the next one~

It's good, not too bad at the moment, the writing style is quite humorous, and the heroine and the original heroine finally have a normal relationship in a book. The character of the heroine is quite interesting to me, I like it very much. As for the supporting characters, although Wang Mingxi is a tsundere character, I don't like it very much, but I don't hate it either. He fell in love with and killed the heroine and then became convinced. His personality is reckless, impulsive, and clear stupidity. I feel that this is the most unlikable character now. After all, the villains are all offline.

The world is bustling for profit Help₍₍ ง(*Ӧ)ว ⁾⁾The character who lives by profit and has a bottom line is really cute! ! Kneeling ball update｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡ Gift Quote: Unintentionally romantic, fall in love with yourself.

I particularly like this book🤧 I have read a lot of this type of book. I can say that this one is really unique. The character of the heroine is very similar to my taste. This kind of profit-oriented character is very interesting. She is very confident and wanton. I feel like a lot of novels are inexplicably matched up with the original heroine, but the interaction between Ning Han and Yao Zhibao is so loving😙 and Xiao Mu's emotional line is really too cute\(//∇//)\ and very real! This scenario is not ruled out at all! Some heroines in non-CP movies are also very beautiful and strong, but they always feel weird. Now I finally understand how it is possible for such an outstanding person to have no admirers! ! 🤤I want to be sister Yao's dog. . The setting of Weidao is also very touching. It fits the temperament of the heroine and the title of the book very well. However, I have a few suggestions. I don't know if I read it too fast or something. I feel that the pace of the article is a bit fast and the plot is too crowded (but it does not affect my enjoyment at all..) I'll remind you to update it at the end haha😚 I really like this book on Tomato when I see this kind of article. Maybe it's because the heroine's name gives me a sense of intimacy (.? The online name I've been using for a long time is Ning Zhi hahaha. Then I was stunned for a moment when I saw the heroine's name was Ning Yaozhi😋 Anyway, I really like it. I can't express it in words, but I was very excited when I saw it halfway through. The setting really struck a chord with me. 😣

I can't do it with only 7.4 Points, so give it a try! I am following all three books [crying] I like every one of them so much. I follow them day and night. Each of the characters written by Da Da has its own characteristics and style, which really pokes me. Don't abandon this book. [Cry] [Cry] Friends who don't like it, please go out and turn left. The introduction is lightning-proof and you don't read it at all. There are always people who don't like it. Don't force everyone to like it. Don't dance around if you don't like it, which will affect other people's reading mood!

When I started reading the profile, my first impression was that interests come first. If it wasn't for interests, I wouldn't be able to make friends. Then found out it wasn't. The benefits may not be so obvious at the beginning. I even think of this as greed for money, but it will not only be paid on one side, but will be returned [original price exchange]. It may be more obvious later, but I haven't written that it is not a big problem. Another point is that I thought she might be a little hostile towards the original heroine at the beginning. Then I only read the introduction and so on. My first impression was that I was a bit too lazy to read it and it was a bit short. After looking at it later, I found that it was good, it could be regarded as for the benefit of the family, not very good, not very bad, it was a feeling of friends but not friends, and the family may have more interests, because the value increased, so it may have turned into a harmonious family atmosphere in the later period. This kind of atmosphere was strengthened by force, the feeling of friendship, the rising sun, the feeling of always walking in the positive (good direction). The final summary is that the disadvantage is that it is too short, well, I still want to keep it. As for the review of the book, it is worth reading. If I comment on it selfishly, I hope it will be a long article. I really love long articles about cultivating immortality. Oh, by the way, [original price exchange] was a typo. The original comment was [equivalent exchange] Also, before I read it, I actually read the author's comments and thought that the heroine was a cold-hearted character who could only be affected by profit, and she killed people quickly. After reading it, the contrast was still huge. Even if there are interests involved, but on the surface, I still pretend to be. I don't know if it's true or not. Anyway, I feel that I can pretend to be a little bit [as for my parents, I feel that it is true]. For people who are harmful to me, anyway, the author can basically remove all the ones that are detrimental to her and take revenge immediately. If you can't kill them right away, you can also make people suffer [and then secretly poke them and prepare to kill them]. It's a very cool article. If you like it, you can try it.

The protagonist is smart, has clear thoughts, and has luck. The master is not bad. The author writes well. Anyone who likes to read cool articles and is used to standing instead of 🧎 should read it! It's good-looking and you won't be offended by the main character!

It's more reasonable than the general fairy tales. Although it's a bit shorter, it's still a complete story. It's a pity that it has no cp but still has a little direction in the end. Then it would be great if all the extra chapters were collected and turned into multi-cp... But considering how to balance the multi-cp requires too much writing power, it's not bad now. One thing comes to mind. The sect that the heroine wanted to establish halfway did not succeed. She originally thought she would start a career, but ended up not caring about her half-demon identity anymore. It was a bit hasty not to fill the hole she dug.

Sure enough, Mu Mu is the best looking male protagonist. Who doesn't love a passionate and sincere young man? It's so exciting. Zhao Zhao and Mu Mu are really a perfect match. One is incomprehensible and the other is a straight shooter. I'm blown away.

This book is really good, and it doesn't follow the traditional sister-female competition formula. Not engaging in female rivalry is really a bonus, especially since the male partners' views on love are really in line with mine. It's my own business to like someone, and I don't need the person I like to respond. Of course, if there is, I will be very happy, but if not, then everything I have to do for him is my willingness. If you have to consider whether there will be any repayment even if you like someone, then it's not true love. There are also many concepts of the heroine, including her own solipsistic approach, which really irritated me. Many people would think this is selfish or arrogant, but I think what are people living for? Do you live for many trivial things but not for yourself? I personally believe that people live for themselves and care about their own thoughts, although in reality I cannot be as single-minded as the heroine who is so self-centered. But I really admire the heroine's approach and spirit. If I could live like this in reality, I wouldn't be so unhappy and hurt myself. There is actually nothing wrong with being selfish in life, at least that's what I think. (Personal opinion: If you don't like it, don't comment. If you don't like it, don't watch it and don't reply [send your heart])

To be honest, I like the heroine of this book very much. I enjoyed reading it. She is so handsome. But when I saw the table of contents at the back, the heroine's parents died and Mu's sword bones were dug up. It must have been for the heroine. He liked the heroine so much and felt sorry for her. The system took away the heroine's body. I couldn't stand it when I saw that one. I didn't like it very much. It's really weird. The heroine actually let the system take over her. I can't even read any book. It's so systematic that it turned into a shadow. I love this book so much. Why is it written like this?

It's super good-looking, and I particularly like the heroine's character. From the beginning, it was said that the heroine is the kind of egoist businessman, and then cultivates the solipsism, only respects me, is self-centered, judges good and evil for herself, and fights with God to carve out her own path. Even though there was a lot of adversity, she never gave up. He is the kind of person who plans strategies, is not afraid of death, and always adheres to the Tao in his heart. But I still like Mu Yuzhong [Love] the most, and I will always be impressed by the young man's most sincere and passionate love [Cry]. In short, I think this book is super good-looking, with clear logic, interesting plot, and ups and downs in the content. The plot line is very complete, and the characters are full and vivid [Like] "You don't know, he is very stupid, the stupidest person I have ever seen, but he is also the most sincere person in the world. Even though he knew that I was cold-hearted and selfish, he was still willing to hold his sincerity in front of me without asking for anything in return. Although he is extremely skilled, he is always willing to be bullied by me; a straight male swordsman with a carefree personality, who can accurately observe all my preferences; he loves me very much in his heart, so he never dares to belittle me..."

It's a good-looking, orthodox fairy tale. The heroine is highly talented, has good understanding, and has a great background. She is beautiful, strong-willed, grows up quickly, has many opportunities, and there is no brainless cannon fodder to stir up trouble. Of course, there are still necessary plot conflicts. The heroine and the original heroine are also kind and friendly. The character of the heroine is very lovable. She is decisive in killing while sticking to her principles, including the one against the original heroine, the master. The several characters surrounding the heroine are vividly portrayed, each with their own characteristics (a small beep, the heroine is a bit open, the cultivation is progressing smoothly and quickly, the setbacks and tribulations encountered are not described in detail, but the necessary nodes are still very complete, but the story is cool, that's all). All in all, it is quite good-looking.

To be honest, among the time travel and immortality system novels, the unconventional plot has the upper hand. The identity of the heroine is also a bit different from other novels. The original heroine is not a white lotus, nor is she a harem fish pond and a scumbag. This is really good. The world view of this article is a bit grand, the writing is also very good, and the description of emotional group portraits is also very good. There are no embarrassing places. The writing is really good. I think it will be a long time before it is finished. After all, there are many pitfalls in this article that have not been filled in. In addition, in the extra story, can master Yun Che Mu Zhizhong and Taoist priests come to CP? Hehehehehehehe. I have seen a lot of other articles, but the Taoist priest is especially looking forward to it. Hehehehehe

Like, each of Yao Zhi and the others are very clear-headed and are moving forward for their own Tao. They also have self-persistence in dealing with relationships. Senior brothers, sisters and fellow Taoists also have their own preferences. Everyone is working towards the immortal road ahead. They have distinctive personalities, or They may be shrewd, or timid, or timid, or scheming, or irritable, but it is these imperfections that make them more real. Each of them is on their own path to immortality, surrounded by friends, teachers, admirers, and their own opportunities and trials. They come from different places, but they will eventually reach the same end point. The best explanation for them is to seek immortality through different paths and reach the same destination. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's a good read, very good looking chapters, please update, two chapters a day is not enough

It's super good-looking. The heroine follows the solipsistic path, firmly believes in her own choices, is self-centered, and has a fairly correct outlook on life. She is not a little white flower, nor a white lotus, a little black, but not pure black, nor pure white. She has created a path for herself, and has been recognized by heaven. The heroine is in a book, in which the original heroine is also beautiful alone. The heroine and the original heroine grow up and shine together without male and female competition, and they also help the original heroine get rid of her love crisis. The master also dotes on her. The most important thing is that the master is like a father. He is not like those master-student relationships. When she is wronged, she will tell the master that her master is super powerful and will protect her. The master was as crazy as the heroine when he was young (but the heroine is even crazier, the most important thing is her mouth that makes people angry); the heroine's parents are also very good. They know that the heroine has traveled through time and is not their original daughter, but they are also really good to her. This novel has no cp. As of now, there are three men who like her. If they like her, they will guard her silently, will not block her way, will not be a drag on her, respect her, and love her. Nice! [Admiration] I vouch for the fact that my roommate has been single for 5 years. This book is good to read, quick to read, and is truly a story about strong women in a certain sense.

Before watching the extra story, I felt sorry for Mu Mu. I felt bad for Yuan Chu and I felt bad for Yun Che. After watching the extra story, I don't feel sad anymore (although there is no Yun Che, but there is God's will in the world), but I still feel sorry for my Mu Mu the most, and I love my Mu Mu the most. He is really good, and I like him so much. In real life, I would also choose Mu Mu. After all, I really like his passionate and sincere love. Yuan Chu is also very good. The characters in the book are full of characters and the plot is exciting. It overturns the previous relationship between the system and the host and becomes the opposite. It is unexpected but reasonable. Good-looking, love to watch, watch quickly, go for it

I read it in one night. For a picky person like me, this book is really well written. The personality of the heroine has never changed. The plot is exciting and there are emotional lines as the author said. The most important thing is that so far, there are no old bloody plots. It is better to do it for others than for yourself. It won my heart.

It's very beautiful, the emotions are handled very delicately, and the characters are perfectly created. There is no bloodshed or female rivalry in the whole story, but more about the creation of the characters' emotions and images. Finally, I hope this article will be a hit🔥🔥🔥🔥

It's a good book. Although the whole book is not long, it is quite rich in content. It also writes about things in the upper world. I like the master. The original heroine is also very good. I like Mu Mu and Yuan Chu. But regarding CP, I think no CP is the best choice. Otherwise, there will always be people who will find it difficult to understand. But if there is CP, I still like Mu. Mu Mu, after all, his true love is passionate and pure, transparent and has no regrets in life, and his death is so vigorous and makes people burst into tears. Alas, so I personally feel that the cold and noble character in the early Yuan Dynasty, and A Che's gentle and jade-like character are said to be a little darker, but they are both good. In short, it is hard to let go of the CP.

It's good-looking. First of all, let's talk about the master and apprentice. Linchuan really treats the heroine as his occasional pet. In addition, the plot and character setting have distinct personalities and some annoying characters, but they are not the usual fairy tales that run through many plots. The heroine has a bottom line, and the main story does not have a broken character. The most important thing is that unlike other literary Taoist couples who are either masters or senior brothers, this story is very good. Mu Mu really writes lifelike stories, and it is also good in the early Yuan Dynasty! There are just holes that have not been filled. The building that the heroine asked the half-demon to create, and Wanwanna, never appeared later. Everything else is fine. As for the extras, I can't say that the character design is broken. After all the previous battles, it seems normal to have some changes [thoughts]

Very nice! ! ! ! ! ! The character of the heroine is not sluggish at all, and the descriptions between her and the supporting characters are also very good. It is the kind of long-lasting relationship, not abrupt at all. The friendship and family relationships are very well described, so I couldn't accept the knife in the back [crying]. The emotional part was written so well that I couldn't bear to let everyone go equally, so I didn't read the knife part, but it is definitely good-looking! For a book, ups and downs are what make it attractive, and this is the case with this book (but I dare not read the rest [crying])

Cool! It's really cool! The heroine is arrogant and arrogant but not without a bottom line. The female characters are not purely competing for men. It is consistent with the description in the introduction. There is no "consumer fraud". The writing is smooth, the vocabulary is elegant, the characters have distinct personalities, and there is no good or bad.

Love the heroine so much! There is no tit-for-tat with the original heroine like in other novels. She is more decisive in her actions and her character is very popular with me [heartfelt]. Secondly, the plot. The various experiences of the heroine are not the kind of invincibility that can be achieved immediately with a golden finger. They are very attentive. Can the author add more updates? [Blowing a kiss] I'm waiting for updates every day [Sending Hearts] This book is the top 1 book on Xiuxianwen in my bookshelf [Love] [Love]

As the heroine of this book, Ning Zhao faced various challenges and injustices in the world of immortality. She did not choose to be a loser. Instead, she relied on her wisdom and courage to continue to survive in adversity, showing her strong vitality, and finally became a god. Zhaozhao met like-minded friends during his journey of cultivating immortality, and the system settings are also very novel. Anyway, this book is very interesting and I like it. The author has written very well. Finally, I added this sentence that I really like from the beginning of the Yuan Dynasty: "She is also a girl. She is not born to be so powerful, and no one is born to not need to be loved."