Diary of the Development of a Husband-Controlled Empress

The writing skills are very good. According to the current progress, it can be seen that the author wants to write a very long story, so either the author can keep his heart and endure the loneliness, because the readers do not have that much patience;

It's good to watch, but the plot moves too slowly. I want to eat the knife quickly, and then watch the next heroine to eat the knife again [laughter]

To be honest, there is a Cthulhu style here, a flesh-and-blood style, a bit like "The Breeding Manual of the Tentacle Girl", where flesh and blood are used to enhance one's strength. The heroine's image is not portrayed deeply enough. She needs to be bolder in flesh and blood.

The content is okay, but the focus of the novel is a little different from what I imagined.

It's beautiful, but why is there no one there?

Not bad, just a little short

The idea is great, but the writing still needs work