Double Penetration: Starting from Picking up a Cultivator Girl in the Toilet

It's interesting. I hope the author can fix the pitfalls and pay attention to details. There are many things that are problematic if you consider them carefully. The novel is slow to pick up in the early stages, but is more humorous in daily life. The male protagonist is set to be a poor child with a superior IQ.

This book is well written, the author's writing skills are very good, the characters' introduction, characterization, speech and behavior are all thoughtful, and the details are well taken care of. The multi-perspective problem that is difficult to take into consideration in a time-travel novel has been well solved by the author's writing skills. It is actually a book that can be read. I guess the current rating is so low that it scares away readers, so give it a five-star rating to make a profit. There are also some shortcomings, for example, the protagonist is too [hard-working]. In today's online writing environment, a self-disciplined scroller is not very likable, and it is difficult to have a sense of belonging. The first time I read the 170 chapters, I thought I could finish it before reading it. Now I seem a little worried that the low score will cause the author to miss the word count and finish the book.

The first time I watched this type of movie is that there is a time-travel gate, but the first time I watched this kind of movie, it was also inter-travel, where people from two worlds traveled through each other. , I have also seen a door that allows two worlds to pass through each other, but it is just one door. This is the first time I have seen this kind of multi-person journey between two worlds. Well written, looking forward to the update. The author should be the first to write this kind of thing. Well written, looking forward to the update. [Praise]

The writing is good and high-quality, and it is a big-scale fantasy novel. It is a rare double-crossing and group-crossing. The male protagonist is smart and calm, with a firm mind. He kills decisively and casually, and does not act sloppily. It's amazing! Absolutely amazing! This book will be a hit

Overall, the early writing is pretty good. The setting is similar to the Naming Technique of Night, and the characters' personalities are well highlighted. However, the plot is a bit average. If this book is placed in a paid book, it may not be able to read anything. If it is placed in a place like a tomato, it will be quite powerful.

I have read so many books, and this is one of the rare ones that I feel like leaving something behind after reading it. There are no cliche plots or embarrassing toe-tapping scenes. The writing is very real.

The story is novel, the language is fluent, and the narration is true. Everyone lives in fear and full of calculations, but there are also many tearful aspects. The male protagonist lives a bit miserable life but is very self-reliant.

This book is the only one I am following in Tomato. The author has a good writing skills, unlike other mindless books. The setting is also quite novel. Each character is vivid and has his or her own personality.

The plots are interlocking and attractive. I wish I could watch more episodes every day and look forward to the next episode every day. The main character is affectionate and righteous, but maybe because he lost his family when he was young, he is still a little slow towards feelings.

It has never been confirmed that the male protagonist is a high-grade spiritual root, right? Even the sect leader, the great elder, didn't really check it, so why did he assume that the male protagonist had a high-grade spiritual root and not a heavenly spiritual root?

It's well written. It would be even better if it had a single female protagonist. If it wasn't a single female protagonist, it would be bad. I would like to give the author a suggestion: indicate in the introduction whether you are the heroine or not. Otherwise, later on, if others think it is different from what you expected, they may give you a low score.

I feel that the setting of this time travel is a bit like "The Naming Technique of the Night", it's nice to watch

This book is quite good to pass the time. It's hard to find good Tomato books. I think there are very few that catch your eye. If you are short on books, you can get into it. The writing is quite mature and the plot is not boring at all.

The story is very interesting, and we should follow the author's rhythm, unhurriedly and methodically. It can be seen that the author is very careful in his conception. It has depth, highlights, and the ups and downs of the plot to make it enjoyable!

The author writes well, the prose is fluent, and all the characters are three-dimensional and full. It is a rare novel that I read without skipping a beat. The plot development is very logical, and the emotional lines are not abrupt or embarrassing.

It's nice to watch, it's a very novel subject matter, and the author has a great sense of character creation. After all, it's easier to write a setting with multiple female protagonists. So far, I feel very good in every aspect. Good cheers for the author.

It seems pretty good so far, unlike other novels where the female protagonist looks down on the male protagonist at the beginning and misunderstands the male protagonist in various ways. Xiao Jiu Mengmei is dumbfounded. Although she fails to achieve anything but fails, she is very powerful and responsible for her comedy.

It's very interesting, the kind that makes you watch it all the time and can't put it down on your phone. The protagonist is portrayed in a real way, and he doesn't grow up all of a sudden like someone who was taken away from him. It's a gradual process, and the things that happen and the changes are in line with the standards.

The narrative is relatively solid, the writing is good, the storyline can be seen to have been carefully thought out, and the updates are stable. The disadvantage is that the plot progresses slowly, is too bland and lacks excitement, and it is not that comfortable to watch.

The subject matter is relatively new in Tomatoes and the writing is okay. The plot is average, but solid. There are no obvious contradictions between the various settings, and they are explained clearly. The soul control insect has a bit of a bug. Why is it an academy-style plot again?

I quite like this kind of slow pace. Everyone has different preferences. If you like fast-paced reading, then read refreshing novels. This modern plot is quite a daily adventure. As for the world of immortality, it depends on whether the author is preparing to cultivate immortality or a technological duel.

How to put it, it is a mixed world of urban daily life and urban cultivation. There is no conflict between the two sides and they complement each other. Both the male and female protagonists are quite interesting, at least in my current opinion. Worth a look

It's great, very immersive, the writing is very good, keep up the good work, I don't have to pick, it's funny when it should be, and it's delicate when it's delicate. It's very talented. Come on, author.

I really like Xiaojiu, the funny girl next door, who is the best at eating and breaking up the house, a bit like the early 02.

The setting of Su Xiaojiu is very similar to that of a white-haired lolita. She is dull and not very capable but has a bad temper. The other one has the style of a cool senior.

It's a good read, but there aren't many words. It's painful to wait for more. The characters and plots are very good. It's a pity that the author's writing is so good. I was scratching my head while reading it.

It's quite exciting. The details, the inner portrayal of the characters, and some psychological and realistic changes are all very real and very immersive. Very good

The writing is very good, the content is very substantial, and it is a lot of fun. It is worth reading. The plot of the story is exciting and the beauty is flexibly portrayed. It is worth recommending to everyone.

It's really good to watch. I highly recommend it. It's a conscientious work that is still being serialized, but this decision is novel, touching and funny, sad and philosophically comforting. It's really great.

The characters in this novel have rich inner activities, distinct characters, and vivid images of the environment. The content of the novel is also very rich, fascinating, and very immersive.