Otodai: You Have a Tongtian Intelligence Network in the World of Immortality

I've almost finished reading it and let me share my thoughts: I won't go into too much detail about the advantages, the writing is comfortable, the plot is smooth, and it's not surprising that it has a strong sense of immersion and is not abrupt. From my point of view, the shortcomings may be: the connection between the text and the text is not very good, and there are a few things here and there (of course it may be foreshadowing?); There are too many narrations, which are a bit fragmented, but it may be to explain the identity and background of the male protagonist, so it is understandable; my emotional outburst and expression are a bit flat, giving me a light feeling, no feedback, and no strong emotions such as guilt and resentment. I don't understand it a little, after all, the senior brother fell in front of me like this, this should be a breaking point? However, I personally have a high acceptance rate, the article is quite good, and the author has a very good attitude. It also comes with delicious fan fiction, so I must give it a five-star review!

I think this book is worthy of praise👍👍👍👍The author is really good at writing! Whether it's the plot, the characterization, or the smoothness of the writing, it's absolutely superb. Everyone shows it to me! ! ! Here are my highlights: The first is the issue of sense of substitution. I think there is absolutely no need to worry. Because I feel that it is impossible to find someone with the same personality as yourself in terms of sense of substitution. Some people may like mediocre and ordinary you, while others may like you with outstanding abilities. I feel like this cannot be unified. I have played many B-games and literary games in Zuowen, and I have read Otome-oriented articles in ML B-games. I think the real sense of involvement does not depend on your personality in the article, but on whether the motivations of your behavior in this environment are in line with the current environment, and whether the behavioral logic of your actions is in line with what is needed at the moment. Anyway, it is inseparable from the influence of the environment no matter what. (No matter how firm your personality is, your emotions, attitudes, behaviors, and opportunities all need to be transitioned, so I think appropriate psychological description and attitude are necessary. The author does this very well, and does not ignore too much facts and logic. Self-oriented psychological description, but it is not bland, like some dummies who inexplicably fall in love with your description without being able to promote the plot) So I feel that the sense of substitution is not good. , It's just that you simply don't match the character, instead of carefully studying the motivation of this article, whether it is the actual behavior you did when you crossed into this article, because you can't imagine what kind of behavior you will do when you cross into this article (because ideals and reality are different, people will only beautify themselves), the author just skillfully grasped the balance between the two, don't let you think that even if it is not in line with the character, it is logical! ! Whether you start from the logic of the environment or your own emotional logic, you must have a certain logic! The second is the content of the article. I think the content of the article is very fluent, with just the right points. It is not trivial, but it does not have too many flowery words, and it is very comfortable to read. The most important thing is! He doesn't have any embarrassing romance or tacky redemptive ideas! It can be said that there is a little twist and a little surprise! Moreover, some of the supplements and foreshadowings are also very appealing and very beautiful. Then there is the characterization. Needless to say, I haven't seen so many fresh male protagonists in a long time, not the traditional badass male protagonists. Sunny puppies, domineering young masters, wet men, etc. Are all very popular nowadays (it's not that I don't like to eat, it's just that the characters are too simple, like eating fast food, without complex experiences and descriptions. Such flesh-and-blood characters are not born from the plot, but to create such a character. He does not need to consider whether it is connected to the plot, as long as he is this kind of character) The characters in this book just have some different characteristics, and the male protagonists also have their own complete experiences, which is perfect Finally, I have to talk about the shortcomings. Well, yes, it may be a little tiring to read, because there are some places where I feel that I have reached this point inexplicably... (Oh, I am serious here. In fact, you can see the plot logic, so maybe I read it faster and don't want to waste my brain to study it in detail) In fact, there are really no big flaws. I can only say that I am nitpicking. It is a really good book. Everyone should read it! I think your character can actually be more complete. How should I put it? The author doesn't have to worry about writing too much and not having a sense of empathy. I think if you want to write about your experience with the male protagonists well and think more about you, I think it is essential. If you can't reflect your characteristics that are different from the world after time travel, it will make me feel that your bond with the male protagonists is a bit inexplicable. . In short, it is indeed difficult to grasp this point, but if you don't think about it so much, it is a particularly good book! ! ! Also, I am very much looking forward to the plot of Da Xie. I personally like this old and mature male protagonist very much, and I also like non-traditional villains. It will be very good to have such a complex character to get along with us. . . How to say oops! Anyway, I hope the author keeps writing! ! I'm already in love with the author! Everyone, get in!

Very good! ! It's very rare that there is no description of appearance and body shape. It's more or less the same as before. The teacher's skills are so strong... The male protagonists are also about the same length. It's so popular. Teacher, please update it🥹

It's so pretty and easy to follow! (*ˊᵕˋ)✩︎‧₊I like every male protagonist very much! The teacher shaped it so well! And he also produces his own fanfics! Must be five stars! (⑅˃◡˂⑅)

Everyone opened their mobile phones and immediately typed in the four words "Otome is awesome" Good writing, high quality, and a good immersive experience. Highly recommended. The character creation is more three-dimensional and interesting, not just an empty shell of a persona. The rhythm is soothing and it has the feeling of flowing water, very delicate and soft. Why does such a high-quality Wen Buhuo [Cry] Goddess dare to suddenly add hundreds of chapters? It scares me to death (I'm kidding, go at your own pace) Otome is awesome(｡ì _ í｡)

From the beginning, I thought it was a kind of heartwarming daily novel, which is a bit mediocre, but the author's writing style is good, and I can whet my appetite. Starting from the "annihilation of the family", the turning point comes, and this is where I think the exciting part begins. Come on, author, you can write more plot twists and turns to attract readers more [Sending Hearts]

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It's good-looking and funny, but the typos in some places are a bit too confusing, and there are also some places where I feel like I've missed a few words and it's not very smooth to read. Secondly, I think the author can write less about my little actions and psychology. In fact, when I see some of the words the male protagonist says, I can feel that he is serious, but "I" don't seem to understand, which makes me feel a little aggrieved. Overall, it's okay, it looks good!

Highly recommended! Especially those who love watching the cultivating immortality genre, don't miss it [Blowing Kiss]

I read another book for a while before moving it here. The reading time is not quite accurate, but it is very yummy! The writing is very smooth and easy to follow, and the feeling of immersion is good. I feel like the whole story has just begun. I give it a five-star rating first. I am looking forward to the follow-up development. I want to eat Da Xie Xiao Xie Shura Field👉👈The output of the author and teacher's double cultivation of literature and painting is very delicious, and I will be full😋(Finally, Senior Brother Qinghe, I miss you... Senior Brother, Senior Brother...

Very nice😋😋😋 It's been a long time since I read a fairy tale. My cultivation is a bit unclear.

Very delicious writing and plot😋It's just too short and not enough to watch, boss (knock on the bowl)

Okay, okay, it's very beautiful. The author can also draw. He is a master of both literature and painting, and the paintings are also very beautiful! ! !

Shocking and delicious, super immersive [shy]

The writing is very good and the writing is smooth. It's been a long time since I found a Xiuxian Yi that I like. [Blowing Kiss] The author doesn't need to belittle himself.

I really like this kind of writing. It's not boring to watch. The plot is ups and downs. It's pretty good, but there are very few wrong sentences for now.

Okay, okay, it's very delicious and has a good sense of substitution. There is no peach wood in the comment area, so the review is solid.

Nice! Recommended, it feels very immersive!

It's so delicious that everyone comes to eat it!

The writing style is very good, the description is delicate, and the sense of substitution is strong. Men also like the portrayal.

Invincible Spiral Ascension is delicious. I like everyone so much. Come and see them all. Don't miss it if you pass by.

Super pretty, Otome cow! ! ! I like this writing style, it's super easy to relate to, the plot is great, the author is a goddess! ! It smells so good!

Good-looking and good-looking. Already read it seriously 🥺