Generation B: You Have an All-Reaching Intelligence Network in the Cultivation World

I've almost finished reading it and let me share my thoughts: I won't go into too much detail about the advantages, the writing is comfortable, the plot is smooth, and it's not surprising that it has a strong sense of immersion and is not abrupt. From my point of view, the shortcomings may be: the connection between the text and the text is not very good, and there are a few things here and there (of course it may be foreshadowing?); There are too many narrations, which are a bit fragmented, but it may be to explain the identity and background of the male protagonist, so it is understandable; my emotional outburst and expression are a bit flat, giving me a light feeling, no feedback, and no strong emotions such as guilt and resentment. I don't understand it a little, after all, the senior brother fell in front of me like this, this should be a breaking point? However, I personally have a high acceptance rate, the article is quite good, and the author has a very good attitude. It also comes with delicious fan fiction, so I must give it a five-star review!

I think this book is worthy of praise👍👍👍👍The author is really good at writing! Whether it's the plot, the characterization, or the smoothness of the writing, it's absolutely superb. Everyone shows it to me!!! Here are my highlights: The first is the issue of sense of substitution. I think there is absolutely no need to worry. Because I feel that it is impossible to find someone with the same personality as yourself in terms of sense of substitution. Some people may like mediocre and ordinary you, while others may like you with outstanding abilities. I feel like this cannot be unified. I have played many B games and literary games in Zuowen, and I have read Otome Xiang's articles in ML B games. I feel that the real sense of involvement is not based on your personality in the article, but on whether the behavioral motivations you make in this environment are in line with the current environment, and whether the behavioral logic of your actions is in line with what is needed at the moment. Anyway, it is inseparable from the influence of the environment no matter what. (No matter how firm your personality is, your emotions, attitudes, behaviors, and opportunities all need to be transitioned, so I think appropriate psychological description and attitude are necessary. The author does this very well, and does not ignore the facts and logic too much. Self-directed psychological description, but it is not bland, like some dummy descriptions of you who inexplicably fall in love without being able to promote the plot) So I feel that the sense of substitution is not good. , It's just that you simply don't match the character, instead of carefully studying the motivation of this article, whether it is the actual behavior you did when you crossed into this article, because you can't imagine what kind of behavior you will do when you cross into this article (because ideals and reality are different, people will only beautify themselves). The author just skillfully grasped the balance between the two, so that you don't think that even if it is not in line with the character, it is logical!! Whether you start from the logic of the environment or your own emotional logic, you must have a certain logic! The second is the content of the article. I think the content of the article is very fluent, with just the right points. It is not trivial, but it does not have too many flowery words, and it is very comfortable to read. The most important thing is! He doesn't have any embarrassing romance or tacky redemptive ideas! It can be said that there is a little twist and a little surprise! Moreover, some of the supplements and foreshadowings are also very appealing and very beautiful. Then there is the characterization. Needless to say, I haven't seen so many fresh male protagonists in a long time, not the traditional badass male protagonists. Sunny puppies, domineering young masters, wet men, etc. Are all very popular nowadays (it's not that I don't like to eat, it's just that the characters are too simple, like eating fast food, without complex experiences and descriptions. Such flesh-and-blood characters are not born from the plot, but to create such a character. He does not need to consider whether it is connected to the plot, as long as he is this kind of character) The characters in this book just have some different characteristics, and the male protagonists also have their own complete experiences, which is perfect Finally, I have to talk about the shortcomings. Well, yes, it may be a little tiring to read, because there are some places where I feel that I have reached this point inexplicably... (Oh, I am serious here. In fact, you can see the plot logic, so maybe I read it faster and don't want to waste my brain to study it in detail) In fact, there are really no big flaws. I can only say that I am nitpicking. It is a really good book. Everyone should read it! I think your character could actually be more complete. How should I put it? The author doesn't have to worry about writing too much and not having a sense of empathy. I think if you want to write about your experience with the male protagonists well and think more about you, I think it is essential. If you can't reflect your characteristics that are different from the world after time travel, it will make me feel that your bond with the male protagonists is a bit inexplicable. . In short, it is indeed difficult to grasp this point, but if you don't think about it so much, it is a particularly good book!!! Also, I am very much looking forward to the plot of Da Xie. I personally like this old and mature male protagonist very much, and I also like non-traditional villains. It will be very good to have such a complex character to get along with us. . . How to say oops! Anyway, I hope the author keeps writing!! I'm already in love with the author! Everyone, get in!

I just realized that I haven't given a book review in such a long time. Orz This can be considered one of my favorite original Otome novels in my life!! Long game! ) I'm really looking forward to continuing to create this day! (I hope this sentence will not put pressure on me during the day [sending my heart]) The humor in this article is well inserted, and the characters are very vivid. The plot is also good, but every time I see the update reminder button, I get a little nervous. The author is a real person. If you have any opinions, I will listen carefully to your suggestions. Kiss this wonderful girl😚 I am a stupid person and I highly recommend this book. However, different people may have different preferences, but I still hope that more people will read this book. 💕

It's so pretty and easy to follow! (*ˊᵕˋ)✩︎‧₊I like every male protagonist very much! The teacher shaped it so well! And he also produces his own fanfics! Must be five stars! (⑅˃◡˂⑅)

Everyone opened their mobile phones and immediately typed in the four words "Otome is awesome" Good writing, high quality, and a good immersive experience. Highly recommended. The character creation is more three-dimensional and interesting, not just an empty shell of a persona. The rhythm is soothing and it has the feeling of flowing water, very delicate and soft. Why does such a high-quality Wen Buhuo 😢 Goddess dare to suddenly add hundreds of chapters? It scares me to death (I'm kidding, go at your own pace) Otome is awesome(｡ì _ í｡)

👍 What I like most is the writing and character creation. They are very interesting and vivid, and the sense of immersion is very good. I even produced the pictures myself. Every character is very three-dimensional and unique, I really like this style. If I have to say a shortcoming, it is that the plot is a bit bland at the moment. I look forward to the follow-up development😚

Very good!! It's very rare that there is no description of appearance and body shape. It's more or less the same as before. The teacher's skills are so strong... The male protagonists are also about the same length. It's so popular. Teacher, please update it🥹

From the beginning, I thought it was a kind of heartwarming daily novel, which is a bit mediocre, but the author's writing style is good, and I can whet my appetite. Starting from the "annihilation of the family", the turning point comes, and this is where I think the exciting part begins. Come on, author, you can write more plot twists and turns to attract readers more 💕

Ah, mainly because I read through the comments and there are some opinions that are different, so I'm going to comment. It has a good sense of immersion, and is suitable for those who like group portraits, fairy tales, martial arts, and ancient romance themes. The plot is fine, but I can't think of a writer who puts his heart into his creation and then deliberately criticizes something. Only when Da Xie came to the sect to cause trouble, I felt that the line of sight was cut and I was a little confused. I felt that the plot was a bit confusing, but if I sorted it out, there was no big problem. My big suggestion is to write what you want to write with firm conviction and don't pay too much attention to some changes. Because there are thousands of people with different views, it is easy to lose touch with your creation after listening too much. Just remember your opinions, but you don't necessarily have to adopt them. Happy National Day^

It's good-looking and funny, but the typos in some places are a bit too confusing, and there are also some places where I feel like I've missed a few words and it's not very smooth to read. Secondly, I think the author can write less about my little actions and psychology. In fact, when I see some of the words the male protagonist says, I can feel that he is serious, but "I" don't seem to understand, which makes me feel a little aggrieved. Overall, it's okay, it looks good!