After Awakening, the Paper Doll Doted on by President Lu Ran Away

Overall it's good, but the relationship develops too quickly, but I can still understand it as a short story. But the ending, I felt, was a bit unfinished, and it ended abruptly, so it was a bit inexplicable. I think I could write one or two extra stories to enrich the story (definitely not what I wanted to see). One is about the heroine in the real world, and the other is about returning to the game time with the hero. This will be more fulfilling. (The above is just my personal opinion)

It's been a long time since I finished reading this. I was waiting impatiently when I was chasing another book by the author. I wanted to see if the author had written anything else, but I found that I had already finished reading this one. The subject matter is very new. It's quite interesting and not ridiculous at all.

#Her in the Parallel World# The brave but unlucky boy from another world was unexpectedly "raised" and his various indicators could only break through the norm. It's a love story across worlds, and it's a short story, so the emotional line is very quick. The male protagonist runs in both directions, and the female protagonist is also "disliked" by Heaven for all her good deeds. The most pitiable thing is the overlord who is based on the male protagonist in the parallel world. He suddenly wakes up, but is forced to "sleep" all the time. I finally woke up and ran to the other side as soon as I opened my eyes. I thought that even though he was a boss, he could do this. Finally, my dear, the hero's mother came to visit [crying] and asked a lot of super questions. A short sweet pet article, not too long

It's super pretty! ! ! It's so rare to see such high-level writing in Tomato! ! The emotional development is delicate and the characters are full and three-dimensional. It's really good! ! Plus I love this genre so much, it's so exciting! ! !

It's great to watch, but the ending is a bit sloppy. I hope to add some extras from the real world and the game world.

It's nice to look at, but there are some pitfalls that haven't been filled in (why the male protagonist can travel into the game world)

I've finished watching it. It's sweet, the development is quite natural, and the relationship is more daily, without many sweet love words. The whole text is centered around male and female speakers. There is no deputy CP, and there is no affectionate male and female protagonist. The female protagonist is independent and smart, and the male and female protagonists are both action-oriented. This kind of relationship is quite real. I like the ending very much, the male and female protagonists are both sober. Looking forward to the author's new work!

Emmm I love watching it👀 but it's a pity that the plot is so fast [shy]

It's a bit funny, but the relationship develops a bit quickly. After all, the sweet text is normal.

It's quite interesting, relatively warm, and the water is long and the flu is long. 3 Points of sugar🍬, it doesn't feel particularly sweet. How can I put it, it just doesn't feel like a deer bumping into each other. The male and female protagonists seem like an old married couple lacking a little passion. In the daily series, although the plot feels exciting, the writing is relatively bland. There are some small holes, whether they are dug or not filled will not affect the plot. For example, what are the roles of this season used for?