After Awakening, Mr. Lu's Pampered Paper Man Ran Away

Overall it's good, but the relationship develops too quickly, but I can still understand it as a short story. But the ending, I felt, was a bit unfinished, and it ended abruptly, so it was a bit inexplicable. I think I could write one or two extra stories to enrich the story (definitely not what I wanted to see). One is about the heroine in the real world, and the other is about returning to the game time with the hero. This will be more fulfilling. (The above is just my personal opinion)

#Her in the Parallel World# The brave but unlucky boy from another world was unexpectedly "raised" and his various indicators could only break through the norm. It's a love story across worlds, and it's a short story, so the emotional line is very quick. The male protagonist runs in both directions, and the female protagonist is also "disliked" by Heaven for all her good deeds. The most pitiable thing is the overlord who is based on the male protagonist in the parallel world. He suddenly wakes up, but is forced to "sleep" all the time. I finally woke up and ran to the other side as soon as I opened my eyes. I thought that even though he was a boss, he could do this. Finally, my dear, the hero's mother came to visit [crying] and asked a lot of super questions. —— A short sweet pet article, not too long

It's been a long time since I finished reading this. I was waiting impatiently when I was chasing another book by the author. I wanted to see if the author had written anything else, but I found that I had already finished reading this one. The subject matter is very new. It's quite interesting and not ridiculous at all.

It's great to watch, but the ending is a bit sloppy. I hope to add some extras from the real world and the game world.

It's nice to look at, but there are some pitfalls that haven't been filled in (why the male protagonist can travel into the game world)

It's super pretty! ! ! It's so rare to see such high-level writing in Tomato! ! The emotional development is delicate and the characters are full and three-dimensional. It's really good! ! Plus I love this genre so much, it's so exciting! ! !

I've finished watching it. It's sweet, the development is quite natural, and the relationship is more daily, without many sweet love words. The whole text is centered around male and female speakers. There is no deputy CP, and there is no affectionate male and female protagonist. The female protagonist is independent and smart, and the male and female protagonists are both action-oriented. This kind of relationship is quite real. I like the ending very much, the male and female protagonists are both sober. Looking forward to the author's new work!

It's a bit funny, but the relationship develops a bit quickly. After all, the sweet text is normal.

It's quite interesting, relatively warm, and the water is long and the flu is long. 3 Points of sugar🍬, it doesn't feel particularly sweet. How can I put it, it just doesn't feel like a deer bumping into each other. The male and female protagonists seem like an old married couple lacking a little passion. In the daily series, although the plot feels exciting, the writing is relatively bland. There are some small holes, whether they are dug or not filled will not affect the plot. For example, what are the roles of this season used for?

Emmm I love watching it👀 but it's a pity that the plot is so fast [shy]

Ah ah ah ah ah, the author will update quickly [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Sweet article! The male and female protagonists are relatively independent! The character design is also very good, I really like this kind of mutual respect, but the Son of Heaven is really a bit of a tool hahaha. A very short article, highly recommended by book famine!

The ending is a bit rushed

Sweet article, there is no misunderstanding. If you have any questions, they will be clarified quickly. Game parallel world

It's okay. The setting of the electronic pet is that the heroine doesn't spend much money. I'm jealous of her 1 billion.

It's a nice little sweet story, but the ending is a little rushed.

Ahhh, it looks so good. Why is the rating so low? Highly recommended. It has a content and character that is different from other novels.

It's a nice and novel novel. It feels like the person on the piece of paper has strayed into reality [sends my heart][sends my heart]

It's a very interesting book. The setting is novel and the plot is not sluggish. Everyone is basically straight to the point. The author's usual little humor also runs through the whole text. I'm lazy and generally don't like to comment, but it would be a pity if everyone missed such a lovely book because of the low score! [Laughing]

Beautiful, super beautiful!

Good, good, good looking

Very novel and beautiful [love]

Beautiful, sweet love

It's beautiful, it ended so suddenly

It's very interesting. If there is a sequel, the ending would be too hasty.

Not enough, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's all good, but I'm quite curious about the story after entering the real world [face covering]

I love it so much woo woo woo woo

It's nice, but the ending is a bit rushed, isn't it?

You can write about life in the real world