The End of the World: the Long Road Home

After seeing the plot of the first chapter and seeing time travel, I had 90% thoughts of abandoning the book. Because I am tired of this kind of setting that is thrown out randomly just to avoid suspicion, too many subsequent works will not develop the plot around the time travel at all. This also means that the author himself is not willing to spend more time on the sense of reality of this book. It is just a filler article that keeps piling up routine plots. However, after reading it with the intention of at least reading the first chapter of the story, I found that I almost missed a good book due to the prejudice I had developed from reading too many other inferior works. First of all, the author definitely has a rigorous and thorough plot outline. The plot develops at a very comfortable pace, and the connection between different plot chapters is also very smooth, making people unable to help but finish it in one go. Secondly, although it is not a double protagonist, it is at least a main line and a secondary line. The dual-line narrative skills are very strong. You can substitute which line depends on which line, and people will not have the idea of skipping the chapter. The most exciting thing is the sense of reality. The author has conceived a complex and grand world view, but does not blindly throw out fanciful settings. Instead, it is very realistic and immersive step by step from the perspective of the protagonist, depicting various stories of a mature, complete and real modern society that suddenly faces a supernatural disaster. It's true that the author said it's not fun. There are almost no plots in this work that involve pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger, and being slapped in the face. The protagonist's golden finger doesn't have the ability to upgrade him to fight monsters and travel through the doomsday. But if you are a reader who really cares about the plot, you can see a lifelike world unfold in front of you bit by bit, follow the protagonist to slowly uncover the core mystery of the world, and recycle the foreshadowing laid out before, can there be a more enjoyable reading experience than this? The work cannot be flawless, and the plot development cannot be to everyone's liking, but give it a chance and don't miss a work that you may be very fascinated by.

On the Tomato platform, this is a good book. In fact, on any online writing platform, its quality is high enough. I have never liked to rate writing because it involves too much personal emotion. Just like there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people, what one person thinks looks good may not necessarily look good to others. But halfway through reading it, the book reviews included in the book became increasingly impatient with the author and the protagonist. I would like to share my thoughts. For readers who like cool writing, the character creation in this book is too bad. The protagonist looks useless, without the wit to predict everything, and without the ability to turn on his powers at any time. He is as small as all humans, like you, like me, like anyone else. The protagonist is very mediocre, so mediocre that it feels like you can do it even if you come. In the online world view, there are too many stories in which the protagonists become gods, many of them are the same, and many of them are lackluster. In a society where gods are created, it seems that it has become intolerable for ordinary people to be the protagonists. But again, because the protagonist is an ordinary person, the highlight of this book is highlighted. The author's writing style is above average among novels of the same theme. There are no overlying lines, no vulgar plot, and no facial expressions of character creation. Every action and language of the character is realistic and fits the personality. "Why didn't he go?" "Why did he do this?" "Why did he have feelings?" This is so because it is about humans, not gods. The stereotype of the protagonist should not be that he has the halo of the protagonist, but that he is the protagonist if he survives first. We should not be harsh on a person. We shouldn't be harsh on anyone.

So far, the plot is tight and logical, and there is no problem. It is not a cool novel, and there is no excessive cheating. The protagonist has a strong sixth sense. It's a book worth reading, and I look forward to updating it soon. Big cheers for the author~

The setting is great, the dual plot is also very interesting, the character description is very delicate, the growth line is complete, and the plot arrangement is not particularly bloody. It is worth watching. The following are the shortcomings: 1. The protagonist's early growth is too slow. It can be seen from the comments that many readers cannot read the story of the protagonist's growth. 2. The male protagonist is just a passer-by and has almost no use for the story (the end of the world and salvation). He can be divided into three parts: wanting to go home, finding a girlfriend, and the third part is a bit inexplicable after finding a girlfriend. He knew very early on that the world was bound to be destroyed, and that it would be destroyed soon, but the actions he took were to take things as they came. 3. Putting the stories of the female lead and the male lead in two different novels does not affect the integrity of the story, because the interaction between the two is pitiful and unnecessary. 4. Shi Yan's turning point is very blunt, as many friends have said. 5. For apocalyptic articles, the generation, impact, and resolution of the apocalypse that readers expect. However, the perspective of the first protagonist can only see the second point, which creates a separation (the first protagonist has nothing to do with salvation, and there is a lot of foreshadowing, leading to the belief that the protagonist is the key to solving the apocalypse). I feel like it would be better if this was the perspective of the third protagonist. Of course, the author of this book seems to be unable to control this writing style. Or, as mentioned before, it would also be good to only write the apocalyptic survival story of the first male protagonist. Looking forward to the author's next work

This book is really a twist to the extreme. From the beginning, I always thought it was about traveling through a different world, but Meng Wei's message at the end really shocked me. The following dozens of chapters are really getting more and more exciting, and the plot is also progressive. Another one that I can't get over is Su Xuemeng. She was portrayed very well in just three short chapters. The final ending really shocked me and left me unable to calm down for a long time. I couldn't even believe it was the ending. And I also thought that the male protagonist was kind enough to save her. I wouldn't say anything, but her ending was really tragic. Especially when the trafficker told her about her miserable situation, I couldn't believe that it was something a human being could say. Of course, this incident also became a turning point in Li Jiqiu's growth. The author said that it was the first time he wrote it, but the author wrote it very, very well and the characters were very vivid.

So far, this is the best book in the Doomsday series. There are no fancy superpowers or weird systems. An ordinary person struggles to survive in the apocalypse and grows step by step. The two main lines are closely intertwined and interlocked. At the end, I realize that there is such a big hole in front of me. Once the hole is filled, everything makes sense. Some unreasonableness and entanglements turned out to be foreshadowing. After the two lines were merged, they all made sense. It was very reasonable. I read it in three days as a bookworm for fifteen years. It is a masterpiece. The only warning to the author is that you must remember that the pure love god of war almost buried you. Remember not to gasp next time, otherwise, 🔪 you may not be able to take it back after you go out.

——Spoiler warning It's a very good story. I won't go into too much, but I'll just say that I think it's the most interesting part – dual-line narratives are quite common, and I already thought so. But when I saw the end, I discovered that this line is a "timeline". This setting is really unique. I believe most readers have had questions when watching it: Why did Meng Fang never interact with the protagonist in the early stages? It stands to reason that the protagonist and Shi Yan have this special ability, and their names will definitely reach Meng Fang's ears. When I finally gave the answer, it really gave me the same goosebump-inducing shock I had when Luo Ji said the dark forest theory when I was watching The Three-Body Problem. All my questions were answered at this moment. There is no doubt that if you can read it, this is a very good story. I hope the author can continue to work hard and create more excellent works that make people think.

It's been a long time since I stayed up all night reading a book. After reading more than half of it, I can only say that it's a rare good book in Tomato. Despite all the flaws, I give it five stars! How awesome😋👍🏻 In fact, this novel has a lot of flaws, very, very, very many, but overall, I still think the flaws outweigh the good points. The male protagonist is cowardly, stupid, and unpleasant, but very real, with many small thoughts and ideas, as if he is a real person, a three-dimensional character. Sometimes he is kind, sometimes cruel, sometimes cowardly, and sometimes reckless, but there are traces to follow. Unlike other paper character protagonists in novels, who create a character just for the sake of a bullshit character. There are many controversial aspects in the plot, but I think the most unacceptable part is Su Xuemeng's death. Many people probably can't stand it and leave. The plot is inexplicable and the male protagonist is inconsistent, which makes people feel frustrated. The appearance and death of Su Xuemeng are extremely abrupt. I think the author created this character to imply the disappearance of the kindness and innocence in the male protagonist's heart. Although the male protagonist has killed people before, even in the plot of the previous chapter where he met Su Xuemeng, the male protagonist killed 66 people, the male protagonist has never changed. In the three years since the end of the world, he has always been him, and his motive for killing can be said to be self-protection. But after Su Xuemeng's death, the silly and innocent male protagonist will completely cease to exist. He no longer kills just to protect himself, he kills others out of anger and displeasure. He has been completely assimilated into this apocalypse, and he has truly become a person in the apocalypse.

Write a concise comment for future reference. After reading it for a while, I felt that some parts of this book were very strange and poisonous. It can be seen that the author should have written it for fun. After all, the whole book is for my own enjoyment. It is actually quite good. Some paragraphs in the book are well written, the characters have some problems, and some developments are a bit inexplicable, just to advance the plot. Overall, the book is worth reading. I won't spoil the content in detail. Those who are interested in the framework should read less book reviews and think more about the plot of the book from their own personal perspective, so that they can accept it. Writing a tag should be able to filter readers, growth-oriented male protagonist + pseudo-group portrait + anti-war + single female protagonist I'll comment after watching it later After reading it, the book is not as good as I thought. The reason why I gave it full marks is that the main characters are pretty good, and I can accept it except for some poisonous points. The heroine is also very cute. The most exciting parts of the book are mainly in the middle and late chapters, and the main character has the most scenes in the middle and late chapters. The ending of the final text is also very romantic. After reading it, you still have some staying power. If you turn to this review, I sincerely recommend you to read this book. There are no suitable books to read in the book shortage. Oh, by the way, don't believe the last sentence in the introduction, it's not without its laughs (sweat) I leave you with the main content I can think of in this book in the form of labels for your reference. (Apocalyptic + growth-oriented male protagonist + single female protagonist + pseudo-group portrait + science fiction)

Very high quality😭 Although the male protagonist is an ordinary person, his growth along the way is vivid in his mind. Especially this plain and beautiful tragic knot is really touching. As a pure love god of war, the author also added a sweet side story. I really love you to death, author😭

The plot is very attractive in the first and middle stages, and the world view is well designed. The reversal in the middle and later stages is also unexpected and reasonable. However, I personally feel that the ending can be improved. Overall, the flaws are not hidden, and it is worth watching.

The overall plot is almost stable in the early stage, and there are some slight ups and downs in the later stage, but it is still stable. The overall story line is narrated separately in two time lines, which is very creative and very good. However, the finishing touch is at the end. If there is no ending, then just give it 3 stars. You can get it directly at the end. 4 Stars. It's a very good book. The overall rating of this book is low. If you are into this book, you must read it. It's really good. The characterization of the characters is particularly good, and the emotional mobilization in the later stages is also very good. The first and middle stages are passed quickly. In the later stages, the emotions can be obviously substituted. I encourage you to give it a 5-star rating. [Almost crying]

It is a soft science fiction novel, and the humanistic sentiments are also expressed throughout the article. My personal habit is to write a review after reading a book, but I am really at a loss for words for this book. The creativity is really good, and the thinking is also very good, especially the way of inserting narratives, splicing the two worlds together, making people lament that the most complex but also the simplest thing in human beings is the human heart.

It is a particularly good-looking doomsday novel with no supernatural powers. Although many people criticize Li Jiqiu for being too kind, this is the reason why I felt most immersed in it when I read it. People who have grown up in a civilized society cannot immediately turn into a beast even if the social order collapses. No one can predict the future. It is very true to make choices with foresight and hindsight. For me, the real apocalypse is to strip away the humanity in me, so I feel helpless and cruel when I see every person in the article who is struggling to survive being forced or actively losing their mind and becoming crazy. The relationship between Li Jiqiu and Ling Yunxiao develops naturally and respects each other, which is rare in male videos. Ling Yunxiao has her own growth line.

It's more realistic and well written, like Brother Wu's betrayal and Dr. Meng's indifference but not ruthless. I personally think that the poorly written part of this book is Shi Yan's final departure to another world. I personally think that Shi Yan's longing for home is too strong (but maybe he became like that after transcending) and the reason why Shi Yan entered the gray mist is that the hope for a miracle is untenable, because it is certain that there is a different world inside. What kind of miracle does he want, and does he want this passage to be stable? And these can be done by others. What he should do most at that time is to accompany his wife and parents. Maybe it's fate. Generally speaking, this book is definitely considered a good book on Tomato. The characters are not brainless and the plot is reasonable and smooth.

If you consider the author's purpose, this must be a perfect masterpiece. It started from the original intention of self-pleasure, and did not change its outline in order to make money online, and finally laid out a wonderful story. The advantage is that the writing is smooth and there is nothing stiff or awkward about it. The most important thing is that the foreshadowing can be basically recycled, and the two lines come together at the end, allowing you to experience the apocalyptic atmosphere and the protagonist's psychological growth immersively. Although there are many detailed issues in the evolution of the apocalyptic society, including science and technology, it can be seen that the author has thought about it, checked the information and read the book. This has exceeded 99% of online authors. Since this is my first time to write a long review, I have a lot of things to say about this book that I particularly love, the first of the new year. Naturally, I can't all praise it. From my personal perspective, the biggest problem is that the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is a bit too slow. In short, it is really rare to see such a work that I like very much on Tomato. I wish the author will write better and better.

Oh my god, I saw you 80 million years later. The two main lines finally intersected. I didn't expect that the two lines were at different time points. It was so shocking [I almost cried]. I didn't expect it at all. I have been wondering why the two lines have not intersected for a long time. Why didn't Meng Fang find Li Jiqiu? It turns out that the timelines of the two are not together. I feel like my head is going to explode. After 650,000 hours, when we oxidize into wind, we can become two adjacent bubbles on the same glass of beer, or two particles of dust nestled under the same street lamp. Does the author have any extras [almost crying]

The rare fine bran in tomatoes. I think some details and foreshadowing are well written. There are no surprises and the writing is very real. It is not enough to read. I highly recommend it.

It is really well written and can be submitted to the level of publishing science fiction novels. The content is very real, the narrative method is great, and the logic is self-consistent enough. There is the helplessness of ordinary people facing unknown disasters, and there is the mutual redemption of the male and female protagonists in disasters. Everyone in the book has their own ideas, goals, and codes of conduct. This is a very real and deeply rooted masterpiece. I really have to lament the tragedy before it can be deeply rooted in people's hearts forever [crying]

To be honest, this novel is really well written. It's not hard science fiction, but the beauty and despair described are quite relatable. There is no personal hero that lasts for seconds, and there is no forced happy ending that everyone is happy with. Even the golden finger setting of the protagonist itself is more reasonable. Especially the two timelines, when I saw the explanation, I was really applauded. Although there are some minor flaws, the flaws are outweighed, and overall it makes people want to read on. The last short science fiction novel that I felt was very good was "Titan No Voice". After being used to reading personal heroic novels, this book can be regarded as a breath of fresh air. I hope the author can write better works [got it]

Despite its shortcomings, it can be said that it is an excellent apocalyptic novel on any online writing platform, with a layer of sci-fi emotional writing. The writing in the early stages of this article is very good, and the literary and youth aspects are well grasped. In the middle and later stages, the writing style is a bit purely literary and youth, which can not be said to be bad. There are a few sci-fi imaginations that are not well explained. I was looking forward to a happy ending at the end, but I didn't expect that this ending was actually pretty good. The story of a little person in the apocalypse. The ending of the extra chapter is probably too sad and the author struggled to write a few chapters with warm endings. It is definitely a masterpiece among Tomato articles. The author was born thirty years later. This article could definitely have been serialized in a magazine in the 1990s.

It's very interesting and uses a lot of foreshadowing. Although there are many bugs in the dual-line development, the plot is still very gripping. The disadvantage is that many plots are torture for the sake of torture without any logic, and the writing is very abrupt.

Very real and very thoughtful. Writing two timelines at the same time was something I didn't realize for a while. (I thought Dr. Meng was also on the same timeline) there weren't many light-hearted and happy plots, so it was a bit depressing. But this book is a serious story, so I think it is perfect in a non-shuang writing. The only flaw is the emotional line. It feels too restrained [face covering] [face covering] and too saintly. If the emotional line of this book could be richer. That is also a masterpiece comparable to The Wandering Earth. Come on, author💪 [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates], I hope to see more good and more rigorous works [Love] [Love]

It looks good, it really looks good. Brothers, you must read it. The first dozens of chapters will make people feel "this is wrong", but after they react, they find that it is just a cognitive bias caused by incorporating the Chinese government in the real world (high efficiency, strong execution). The whole book is logically fluent and reveals the truth step by step. Even though it has been speculated for a long time, it is still shocking. It seems that he is really at a disadvantage because he is Tomato on the platform and does not follow the Shuangwen flow. Otherwise, it would be his turn to win the award from the so-called science fiction novels of the Qidian Genius Club that are covered in Shuangwen.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book like this that can tell stories and characters well. This is the first book on Download Tomato that I'm willing to write a review for! The apocalyptic novel is not about upgrading the system and killing people. The author's portrayal and thinking of emotions and human nature are really great. Finally, it is not a childish black and deep disability! The only pity is that I feel that the description of the gray screen is still lacking. If there is more plot of the protagonist surviving in the gray screen, I feel that it will be more full.

Very nice! And I feel like the author has decided on the ending right from the beginning. The final ending fits the development of the plot very well. Although he is a BE, the protagonist himself is just a grain of sand and cannot change the forward trend of the times.

It's great. To be shameless, this is the novel I've always wanted to write, but unfortunately I've been too busy with work and too lazy to write it, haha I really like this kind of novel that doesn't have any cheats and relies solely on itself. However, I feel that Tomato readers tend to read more interesting articles. I hope the author can keep writing. Come on! I've finished reading it. I highly recommend it to those who like doomsday stories. I really like Qiu Ling, the perfect doomsday leader and the light of humanity. It's a really great work. Not long ago, I also wanted to write a novel about myself. The final outcome is to detonate one's own planet to become the future Earth, and the legacy materials left behind slowly evolve into the current Earth. It is really touching to see that 80 million years later Although most readers of Tomato read cool articles, I still hope that the author will keep writing and maybe try publishing? Finally, I would like to make a simple review. The writing is rich, the characters are flesh-and-blood, and the concept is novel. It is absolutely a first-class work. Extras make up for the sadness of doomsday novels. Although the cruel ending is more realistic, literary works still like good endings.

It's super good-looking. It's not earth-shattering or mindless. Even the male and female protagonists only kiss in the end, but it's still very good-looking T^T. I haven't read a book about two people struggling to survive on their own for a long time. It's also the first novel I've read on Tomato. I originally thought I would read half of it and abandon it, but I couldn't help but read a little bit every day and finished it. I hope the author will release a similar new post-apocalyptic novel. Although the ending seems to be B, I still think this ending is the best.

The "science fiction novel covered with apocalyptic themes" I saw in the comment area describes it well. Many details in the book can make people think deeply. I originally wanted to talk about my feelings during the reading process, but I gave up the plan because I thought it would reveal the plot. I don't want anyone who has not read it to be spoiled by me. The content is absolutely beyond imagination. I have read the entire book in three days in a row.

Maybe it's not because of the cool writing, but the rating is not high. But I think the rating is definitely low for those who like this genre. This form of doomsday is relatively new. I really enjoyed reading it, and I highly recommend it to those who don't mind non-refreshing writing. I hope the author keeps at it, it's really good.