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The System Arrives When the Protagonist Grows Old and Becomes a Protector.
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Looking for Various Anime Fan Fiction, Preferably with More Words
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Naruto (A Great Book That Was Buried)
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Ball Naruto Fanfic! No Harem! ! No Heroine Is the Best!
Original protagonist, no harem! ! Or it would be better if the male protagonist concentrates on his career and there is no female protagonist, thank you! !
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This is the most detailed Naruto fanfic I have ever seen. The author must have spent a lot of time researching the information. It deserves a five-star rating.
I've finished reading it now, and I'll summarize it. ① In line with the character of the original work, in my opinion, it is not a completely independent product born of OC Minato ② In line with the original combat power, there is no obvious cheating. For example, Minato did not directly learn the eight-door armor worn by Matt, but he learned the physical skills, which did not obviously violate the principles of a normal person. ③It conforms to the original plot and is written completely according to the original plot. The timeline is normal.
Keep up the good work, it's still very beautiful^ω^, but this is just my personal opinion [Like] Wow, you changed your writing?
There is not a single bad point in the plot for me. Please support the author with five stars [Blow a kiss]
So far, I haven't found any surprises. Overall, it's not the Su Shuang style, but it's about hard work and deserved results. The writing style and story structure also show that the author consulted a lot of information before writing. Good review!
When I came back, I found that the book was gone. If you know the reason, just kick me and I'll put an eye in it.
It's pretty good. There is no OOC at the moment. The author is also very serious about the setting. There are very few stories in Tomato that don't have conspiracy theories.
There are few Naruto fanfics that I think are reasonable and good-looking. I like Minato very much. I feel that Minato's character and work style in this article are very consistent with the original work. The author is also quite rigorous. If there are any problems, they will be corrected immediately. I look forward to a different plot in the future.
Excellent Naruto fanfic! The author pays great attention to the settings. In terms of plot, he adds reasonable development and situation to Minato's story based on the original work. At the same time, he maintains the length of the drama and intersperses it with delicate and warm daily life and joyful interactions. I like to watch it. Slow-burners and readers who like Namikaze Minato really shouldn't miss this good book [Note] Although the title is Namikaze Minato's Grandpa, the protagonist is 100% Minato. The Minato written by the author is dazzling and confident, which is really very likable. Please continue to maintain this level of updates and work hard (bow) Come on, author [sending heartfelt wishes]
Respect the original settings, there are not too many messy wild settings, Tomato Naruto is the best, I like Naruto's no-brainer
The writing is indeed good. It would be better if Yang Chao had more roles. If Yang Chao is just a worker who can predict the future, it would be really cool. But if he can increase his power and then give feedback to Minato, wouldn't he be another Kyuubi and Naruto? Even stronger than them, almost as strong as the sky. Judging from the current situation in Yang Chao, the best way to improve strength is to absorb natural energy. And after success, not only will his own abilities be greatly improved, but he will also be able to develop the sage mode for Minato. And who stipulates that souls cannot use chakra? Chakra is originally based on the energy generated by the body and soul, and the soul is a type of chakra. This was well explained when Minato sealed Kyuubi in the original work. When he sealed half of Kyuubi's soul, Kyuubi's upper limit of chakra was also cut in half. And Kyuubi can activate Kyuubi mode. Then why can't Yang Chao create his own model and a new immortal model? (Note: Sage mode is a mode activated by absorbing natural energy, while Kyuubi opens a special mode unique to Naruto and Kyuubi) These are all completely feasible methods that can bring about a huge improvement in Minato's abilities.
I feel like this old man is useless
The research is rigorous and the writing logic is very good. I really like the Fourth Hokage, I hope it will have a good ending! In this story, Minato is the protagonist, and the time-traveling Yang Chao is a supporting and auxiliary character. Book friends, don't get me wrong, this is not a traditional time-travel novel where time-travelers show off their power, so don't feel that it doesn't meet your expectations just because of this.
Time and space ninjutsu, in cities with the samsara eye, should be the characteristics of the samsara eye. Develop sealing techniques, chakra gold elixirs, complete life evolution, techniques for the soul, etc. Is it possible to make the techniques in the sharingan eyes become techniques that other people can use?
There seems to be something wrong with the plot. Tobirama should still be alive during the second ninja battle.
Isn't it him? Why was it removed from the shelves? Such a beautiful book, the author is also rigorous, and Minato is also consistent with the original work. I really don't understand those who took it off the shelves.
The protagonist has a low sense of presence, but this can only be said to be a style problem, not a book problem. The image of the Watergate mission is also very good. The whole book is slow-paced. It is definitely very good to read the pictures and have fun in your leisure time.
The writing is not great, but it is definitely not bad. The plot is relatively stable, although it has less excitement, but there are almost no poisonous points. The setting and character performance do not deviate too much from the original work. I feel like my requirements are quite low.
The book is very nice. The plot is well connected and all details are perfectly restored. Even many things that people don't notice are within the scope of the author's attention. Of course, the biggest advantage of this book is that it tells us that in the real world, ordinary people cannot become masters or even invincible by changing places, so it is best to hold on to your thighs. [Cover face] It just lacks a little explosive point. The plot has been laid out so far, and it's almost time to start beating the drum and charging.
No, it was taken off the shelves after being kept for a few days? [Cry]
I haven't watched it for a few days. Why did it get taken off the shelves?
It's not that if you keep raising it, it will disappear [crying]
After raising it for a few days, when I came back and read the book, it was gone.
The subject matter is novel, it is very comfortable to watch, and the rhythm is maintained very well. Although Yang Chao is currently playing a big role in assisting Minato, I still hope that the protagonist will have better abilities in the future. In other words, the protagonist of this book is actually Minato [Read more]
The subject matter is really novel, and the author has also looked up a lot of information. Very well written, loved it
The writing is smooth and not too poisonous, which is considered very good in Tomato [Like]
Well, I listen to books, so the reading time may not be enough, but for now I think it is very good. After listening to it, I feel that I still have something to say. I look forward to the author's next chapter. A very good novel. I feel that the rigorous plot is a high point. I am looking forward to the emotional line between Minato and Kushina [Sending Hearts]
I really enjoyed reading this book, I hope the author can get it back
I didn't pay attention for two days, so why did it disappear?
A rare Naruto story from Minato's perspective (New Minato Chronicle) (Mist), the setting is really complete and detailed, and the [Pure Blood] Award () [Blowing Kiss]