Entertainment: the Weakest Becomes the King

It's a new author, and the overall writing is pretty good. When I read books, I'm more picky about the number of words between lines and sentences. This book made me feel quite comfortable. The language is plain and humorous, without the excessive exaggeration and brainlessness of other articles. Come on.

It feels good, but the pace is too fast. Although it's nice to go faster without dragging, it still feels like I'm speeding [laughing and crying] However, overall it is very good. I have watched more than half of it, the design is not too outrageous, and the entire plot is still well-tracked. Just like the rhythm of participating in the competition and the actress Pan Xin, one is a bit too written and overly foreshadowed, and the other is too impulsive, too fast and rough. However, it seems that Pan Xin is not very good at writing this section and just finish it quickly, which is still okay. However, the timeline of the protagonist needs to be extended a little longer... His songs are like wholesale. They are taken out all at once, which is very abrupt. Although it is very refreshing, it is not suitable! Perhaps it's an exaggeration to say that it's a matter of settling down, one song hitting the charts in January, and paving the way for an album at the end of the year, let alone a top-notch first song! ! ! I would like to declare that this is the fastest-paced entertainment novel I have ever read, but the timeline is very slow. At the same time, the plot of the article does not feel like it is broken at all, it is just too fast to be accepted. I feel that the author can polish it a little. The entire outline is well designed and the connection is very good. He can refine it a little and incorporate more content into it, such as: finding inspiration for the arrangement, integrating various new instruments into the development of the song, or experiencing and discovering some storylines, etc., To introduce new songs, and also serve as the reason why the protagonist wrote this song, so that it is not so abrupt. I feel like the author has tried writing in this direction, but it's still too shallow.