Harry Potter: The Third Dark Lord Turns Out to Be Frail

Help, ah, I really love this setting, whether it is the succubus bloodline, the illness, or the protagonist's desire for knowledge and hidden madness, help, it totally pokes my xp.

The author's writing style is getting better and better. Although I haven't finished reading the article, I was really surprised by how he created the protagonist in the early stage. The protagonist is not born a bad person, he has also been kind, but reality does not give him the opportunity to continue to be kind. As the article says, love is once again a step late. The transformation of the protagonist is not just a few words about what torture he suffered, and then blackmailing the newspaper office. Instead, it uses the plot and the protagonist's resistance and efforts again and again to survive, leading to the bottom line being lowered again and again until there is no turning back. Maybe it's because I've been exposed to some sadistic writers before, so I felt sorry for the protagonist. When the protagonist killed a person who had never harmed him, or even treated him kindly, in order to cover up the truth, I really felt like abandoning the article. This is the first time that I have had the intention of giving up writing because of the well-written novel and the excellent characterization. The protagonist's kill completely blocked all his escape routes. My heart aches! It's obvious that I've arrived at Hogwarts and can start a new life. Why should we continue to investigate? I know that digging for the truth is what he should do. He did nothing wrong, he just stuck to his heart. In contrast, the protagonist has long since had no chance to stick to his heart.

I read it in one go. It is the best reading experience among the HP fanfics I have read so far. The author has great control over the plot rhythm. Dark text, but not disgusting, but sad and exciting! From the beginning to the present, the plot has been full of ups and downs, with a terrible start. Between the crisis of life and death, Vega's huge potential bursts out, and he struggles with wits and courage, showing a wonderful life. The writing is smooth and easy, the details are fully controlled, the characters are vivid, and the personal settings are logical and novel. Five-star recommendation. I hope it will be as wonderful in the future. I would like to praise the author greatly. Your work is really excellent!

Super super nice! ! ! ! Super hit me xp! ! Sick beauty! ! It's still a succubus, I just screamed! ! ! The protagonist really only wants to pursue power. He is not a virgin, not brainless, and is super skilled. It's not perfect, there are small flaws, which will only make me crazier! ! The only update is too little! ! Big! Ten chapters a day, okay! ! Not a hundred chapters! !

A really unexpected book The male protagonist is decisive in killing, no Holy Mother (I really like it) and no cp It's a little bit rough in the early stages, but the black magic is pretty easy to use. The psychological journey is well described and very engaging. I hope the protagonist will always be black and not whitewash 😘

Near the end, the writing was a little rushed. I feel that the author wanted to create a stimulating, exciting, and immersive atmosphere. I personally think there is still a lot of room for improvement. Before this part, the author's plot is relaxed and orderly, and the details of his brushstrokes are perceptible, injecting fresh souls into the characters in the book, making them no longer flat but plump and touching. Especially the portrayal of the protagonist Vega is very successful. A protagonist who is deeply poisoned by darkness, but has to stay with the abyss, abandons the traditional novel character of the sage White Lotus who "comes out of the mud and remains unstained", but is based to a certain extent on the possible psychological journey of a normal person after suffering inhuman torture and persecution by dark forces, creating a "Vega" who is deeply loved and hated. Such a protagonist's personality actually has the function of screening readers. Some readers can't stand that the protagonist in the book is not a representative of love and justice. Some readers despise the protagonist's cruel killings and even his behavior of directly repaying morality. There are even some readers who feel that such a character is too far away from reality because of the nature of the mysterious world where the protagonist pursues knowledge. However, this novel is still recognized by the vast majority of people. This is because the protagonist "Vega" is not just a one-sided image in person or on both sides, but a three-dimensional, full, multi-faceted, real and palpable person who was reborn from the ashes in the darkness. Since there is no way out under the light, he breaks through the abyss and carves out his own life. All the actions taken by "Vega" have sufficient reasons and sufficient core motivation. The core point is "survive", which is also the key to the outstanding image of this character. Therefore, when "Vega" had to kill Alberto, the teacher who cared about and trusted him in order to continue to hide his identity and obtain the potion and even the magic stone to extend his life, most readers, although sad and emotional, could still understand this action. This is because the character "Vega" has a strong enough character core and a rich enough character core to support such a full and realistic image. I hope the author can continue to optimize his writing rhythm. Although the climax of the plot does require a tense and exciting atmosphere, it does not mean that the description of details is no longer important. Sometimes, it happens that seeing the big from the small and highlighting it from the side can be more touching and fascinating. 💕💕💕 I hope the author will continue to write excellent works [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's beautiful. I'll come back if you like. It's the first time I've read such a good article The character of the protagonist is really interesting to me. Dear author, please update quickly

Really pretty! The male protagonist is really... He is a strong recommendation anyway! 💕💕👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍[Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned ][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]👍👍👍👍👍👍 ]👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

It's really beautiful [sending heartfelt wishes] There was a feeling of loss at the end, and I felt a little unfair for Vega. He was no longer the original teacher Chen, and even Vega himself could clearly realize that he and he were no longer separated. It feels so pity... He could obviously live an ordinary, ordinary life and be an ordinary person. Dumbledore's "love" also came a step too late, and Vega had almost no way of turning back at that time 🥺. The author handled the ending really well! I couldn't think of how to end it at first. Should I write about Vega finally succeeding in unifying the world? Or will everyone despise you if your plan fails? I was even afraid that it would be unfinished! [Hold face][Hold face] But the author really handled it very naturally, not so exaggerated and unrealistic, but at the same time, it also allowed Vega to get along harmoniously (there should be no problem with this word... Right?) With the people he used to be. The form of the church makes me feel that everyone has been brainwashed. [Grief] This form is like everyone is gradually turning into a puppet, and Vega and Riddle are the few who retain their own thoughts. [Hang face] I can't tell you exactly what I'm thinking, maybe it's just to feel sorry for all the wizards? But this is Vega's own business, as long as he is happy [admiration] (just my personal opinion, I don't mean I don't like it) Finally, I super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super love the author [admiration] Jie Fen!

Everyone believes me when reading this book. It is really very logical. Weijia is a primary school Chinese teacher who traveled to the world of Harry Potter. At first, he just did what he had to do just because he was alive. Gradually, he began to pursue knowledge and believed that knowledge is the truth. Until the end, his heart was also controlled by knowledge (I really liked him and Riddle) Later, he acted for a year and learned knowledge from Nicolas Flamel, then worked hard and tried hard to get the Philosopher's Stone. Beep~ (I don't want to spoil it). Finally, he created the church (I don't want to spoil it) to make the wizards supreme over the people of the world (you can watch the rest for yourself). All in all, this is a highly recommended book. It took me a long time to read it, but I didn't expect it to end so quickly. Really, I used the 14 hours of viewing as a guarantee Vega, everything he did was to keep him alive Living is the foundation of everything. I believe that anyone to that point would do this. His extremeness and his interpretation made me truly understand this character, his vivid image, and his personality itself. I'm really looking forward to the author's next book. The author has organized the scale, logic, and framework of the entire world in a very compact and orderly manner (that is, very logical), and he can think deeply about the explanation of magic and science coming from the proteins in their bodies. That really shocked me (I am not good at biology, so I can't understand that part) I'm really looking forward to the extra chapter now, and how the author will completely and perfectly summarize this world.