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Help, ah, I really love this setting, whether it is the succubus bloodline, the illness, or the protagonist's desire for knowledge and hidden madness, help, it totally pokes my xp.

The author's writing style is getting better and better. Although I haven't finished reading the article, I was really surprised by how he created the protagonist in the early stage. The protagonist is not born a bad person, he has also been kind, but reality does not give him the opportunity to continue to be kind. As the article says, love is once again a step late. The transformation of the protagonist is not just a few words about what torture he suffered, and then blackmailing the newspaper office. Instead, it uses the plot and the protagonist's resistance and efforts again and again to survive, leading to the bottom line being lowered again and again until there is no turning back. Maybe it's because I've been exposed to some sadistic writers before, so I felt sorry for the protagonist. When the protagonist killed a person who had never harmed him, or even treated him kindly, in order to cover up the truth, I really felt like abandoning the article. This is the first time that I have had the intention of giving up writing because of the well-written novel and the excellent characterization. The protagonist's kill completely blocked all his escape routes. My heart aches! It's obvious that I've arrived at Hogwarts and can start a new life. Why should we continue to investigate? I know that digging for the truth is what he should do. He did nothing wrong, he just stuck to his heart. In contrast, the protagonist has long since had no chance to stick to his heart.

I read it in one go. It is the best reading experience among the HP fanfics I have read so far. The author has great control over the plot rhythm. Dark text, but not disgusting, but sad and exciting! From the beginning to the present, the plot has been full of ups and downs, with a terrible start. Between the crisis of life and death, Vega's huge potential bursts out, and he struggles with wits and courage, showing a wonderful life. The writing is smooth and easy, the details are fully controlled, the characters are vivid, and the personal settings are logical and novel. Five-star recommendation. I hope it will be as wonderful in the future. I would like to praise the author greatly. Your work is really excellent!

Super super nice! ! ! ! Super hit me xp! ! Sick beauty! ! It's still a succubus, I just screamed! ! ! The protagonist really only wants to pursue power. He is not a virgin, not brainless, and is super skilled. It's not perfect, there are small flaws, which will only make me crazier! ! The only update is too little! ! Big! Ten chapters a day, okay! ! Not a hundred chapters! !

A really unexpected book The male protagonist is decisive in killing, no Holy Mother (I really like it) and no cp It's a little bit rough in the early stages, but the black magic is pretty easy to use. The psychological journey is well described and very engaging. I hope the protagonist will always be black and not whitewash [blowing kiss]

Near the end, the writing was a little rushed. I feel that the author wanted to create a stimulating, exciting, and immersive atmosphere. I personally think there is still a lot of room for improvement. Before this part, the author's plot is relaxed and orderly, and the details of his brushstrokes are perceptible, injecting fresh souls into the characters in the book, making them no longer flat but plump and touching. Especially the portrayal of the protagonist Vega is very successful. A protagonist who is deeply poisoned by darkness, but has to stay with the abyss, abandons the traditional novel character of the sage White Lotus who "comes out of the mud and remains unstained", but is based to a certain extent on the possible psychological journey of a normal person after suffering inhuman torture and persecution by dark forces, creating a "Vega" who is deeply loved and hated. Such a protagonist's personality actually has the function of screening readers. Some readers can't stand that the protagonist in the book is not a representative of love and justice. Some readers despise the protagonist's cruel killings and even his behavior of directly repaying morality. There are even some readers who feel that such a character is too far away from reality because of the nature of the mysterious world where the protagonist pursues knowledge. However, this novel is still recognized by the vast majority of people. This is because the protagonist "Vega" is not just a one-sided image in person or on both sides, but a three-dimensional, full, multi-faceted, real and palpable person who was reborn from the ashes in the darkness. Since there is no way out under the light, he breaks through the abyss and carves out his own life. All the actions taken by "Vega" have sufficient reasons and sufficient core motivation. The core point is "survive", which is also the key to the outstanding image of this character. Therefore, when "Vega" had to kill Alberto, the teacher who cared about and trusted him in order to continue to hide his identity and obtain the potion and even the magic stone to extend his life, most readers, although sad and emotional, could still understand this action. This is because the character "Vega" has a strong enough character core and a rich enough character core to support such a full and realistic image. I hope the author can continue to optimize his writing rhythm. Although the climax of the plot does require a tense and exciting atmosphere, it does not mean that the description of details is no longer important. Sometimes, it happens that seeing the big from the small and highlighting it from the side can be more touching and fascinating. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] I hope the author will continue to write excellent works [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's beautiful. I'll come back if you like. It's the first time I've read such a good article The character of the protagonist is really interesting to me. Dear author, please update quickly ! ! !

Really pretty! The male protagonist is really... He is a strong recommendation anyway! [Send heart][Send heart][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][ Like][Like][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned ][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's really beautiful [sending heartfelt wishes] There was a feeling of loss at the end, and I felt a little unfair for Vega. He was no longer the original teacher Chen, and even Vega himself could clearly realize that he and he were no longer separated. It feels so pity... He could obviously live an ordinary, ordinary life and be an ordinary person. Dumbledore's "love" also came a step too late, and Vega had almost no way of turning back at that time [almost crying]. The author handled the ending really well! I couldn't think of how to end it at first. Should I write about Vega finally succeeding in unifying the world? Or will everyone despise you if your plan fails? I was even afraid that it would be unfinished! [Hold face][Hold face] But the author really handled it very naturally, not so exaggerated and unrealistic, but at the same time, it also allowed Vega to get along harmoniously (there should be no problem with this word... Right?) With the people he used to be. The form of the church makes me feel that everyone has been brainwashed. [Grief] This form is like everyone is gradually turning into a puppet, and Vega and Riddle are the few who retain their own thoughts. [Hang face] I can't tell you exactly what I'm thinking, maybe it's just to feel sorry for all the wizards? But this is Vega's own business, as long as he is happy [admiration] (just my personal opinion, I don't mean I don't like it) Finally, I super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super love the author [admiration] Jie Fen!

Everyone believes me when reading this book. It is really very logical. Weijia is a primary school Chinese teacher who traveled to the world of Harry Potter. At first, he just did what he had to do just because he was alive. Gradually, he began to pursue knowledge and believed that knowledge is the truth. Until the end, his heart was also controlled by knowledge (I really liked him and Riddle) Later, he acted for a year and learned knowledge from Nicolas Flamel, then worked hard and tried hard to get the Philosopher's Stone. Beep~ (I don't want to spoil it). Finally, he created the church (I don't want to spoil it) to make the wizards supreme over the people of the world (you can watch the rest for yourself). All in all, this is a highly recommended book. It took me a long time to read it, but I didn't expect it to end so quickly. Really, I used the 14 hours of viewing as a guarantee Vega, everything he did was to keep him alive Living is the foundation of everything. I believe that anyone to that point would do this. His extremeness and his interpretation made me truly understand this character, his vivid image, and his personality itself. I'm really looking forward to the author's next book. The author has organized the scale, logic, and framework of the entire world in a very compact and orderly manner (that is, very logical), and he can think deeply about the explanation of magic and science coming from the proteins in their bodies. That really shocked me (I am not good at biology, so I can't understand that part) I'm really looking forward to the extra chapter now, and how the author will completely and perfectly summarize this world.

The overall feeling of the book is good, the protagonist should not have CP, but! As we all know, if you don't have cp, you can just fuck casually. The protagonist is a sickly beauty, but she is very strong and a little shady. It really makes me feel shy [XP]! The rating of the book will be improved later. Don't think that because the rating of the book is low, you won't read it (๑´∀`๑)

It's really, really, really good to read. I've read so many articles, and the first one I read was about the protagonist being a bad guy. Although in this article, I don't think the protagonist is a real bad guy, but this book is an article I read from the perspective of a real bad guy. In fact, I honestly feel that if the protagonist had not been caught by the dark wizard at the beginning and had not time-traveled into this person, I really feel that the subsequent story might be true. It's just like ordinary fan fiction, it just makes me think it's awesome, and then I forget about it. Then you will have a deep impression that because of his unfavorable start, he was unable to take the right path mentioned in the article and could only take the kingship in the subsequent series. And after reading this book, I really lamented once again that I really felt that Dumbledore's care was a step too late, and after reading later, I really felt that if Dumbledore hadn't been there at the beginning, it would have been repeated testing. The protagonist may really say that what happened before was forced, and he may really reconcile. Then the protagonist will stand on the right side, and then fall for this story, and those people who were originally going to die in the story line, and then achieve a truly perfect ending. But it's that step, it's this step, it feels like it's this step, this story line branches directly to another ending. In fact, I will have a feeling in the later stage. In fact, the protagonist may have been driven crazy by the dark wizard at the beginning, but in the end, he may really be willing to sink into darkness. But the story in the extra story is the story in the teacher's basement. When the protagonist kept torturing the teacher, the teacher finally lay on the ground, feeling like he surrendered. I think being a dog is better than falling under that curse. I suddenly felt that it was true. Based on this, maybe the protagonist was actually crazy from the beginning. After all, a really powerful wizard with a long timeline could be tortured like that by this curse. The protagonist is just one. People who don't live very long and experience not very good things get involved with strangers and suffer them. I think it's strange even if I don't seal it, and I immediately feel that what happens next is really reasonable, that's what it feels like, and it feels like what the protagonist is doing is really completely impossible, just to predict what he will do next. Many articles are about what to do next, and there are actually some small clues. In this one, I really didn't see it. And I feel that the protagonist's behavior later is not a bad guy. After all, he is not as cruel as the noseless one. But who knows what the protagonist is thinking~ And if you really haven't seen it, hurry up and watch this for me. I really didn't skip any of it. It's really amazing.

Super good-looking. Vega's growth process is full of twists and turns, but at the same time, you can also clearly feel his spiritual growth. He is not the kind of superficial heartthrob. Even without the blood and ability of a succubus, Vega will still become a powerful and confident wizard, who is very interested in alchemy. The expansion of the book is also very interesting. The idea of using religious beliefs to cover up wizards is really unexpected. Although the ending is a bit rushed, it is still a very good book. Vega redeemed himself in the end. You must be happy all the time. Vega, the author, please give it a try [laughs]

This book opened up a new world to me! [Sending Hearts] There is actually a HP article! But it's really good to watch, the plot logic is also very good, and the protagonist's character is also very outstanding! I am very much looking forward to the completion of this book ~ I will definitely recommend it to everyone. I will really feel pity if someone has not read this book [Adoration]

Really nice to look at. I can't describe this book in my words. Although it is said to be an extension of Harry Potter, I feel that there is not much that actually uses the world of Harry Potter. It shocked me. This is the only fanfic I have read so far and it is my favorite.

Well, I think it's very beautiful. I don't know what kind of review I should write, but I really like Wei Bao's character. The author really brought this person to life. I really love him. Also, I feel sorry for Wei Bao's childhood experience, but if he had not had this experience, he would not have become such a person. He might have a mediocre and happy life, but this is not Vega. Although it is said to be free of charge, I still want to take it. Hehehe, to be honest, Weibao is a heartthrob. Also, the author's XP is my XP. I love the author [sending my heart]

It's very real, very good-looking, the male protagonist is miserable, and he's not a villain from the evil and chaotic camp, he's a neutral chaotic guy. He is willing to deal with you gently as long as it does not threaten his life and safety, and he will not hurt anyone without reason. I haven't read the original work, and the plot of this article is almost complete at the beginning of the original work. After watching the ending, I felt happy. When prayer was in vain, he redeemed himself. After reading the extra episode, I felt melancholy. No one redeemed him, but when given the opportunity, he chose to redeem his mother from the control of his family of origin. Rather than saying that he is a villain, it is better to say that he is trying his best to survive. I don't think he is bad at all, but I think he is very gentle and always feels guilty for his kindness.

I really like Vega's white-cut black feel, and I feel like he and Tom Riddle have some CP tendencies.

To be honest, after reading the author's first book, I feel that the author is really good. He can write a character very vividly, as if it had really existed. It is like using the pen in his own hand to create life and inject soul into the character.

The ending is really great. Vega accidentally came to the HP world. He died at the beginning. He struggled to survive step by step. He relied on his wisdom and acting skills to gain strength, life, and dignity step by step. He escaped from the clutches of the dark wizard, broke away from the shackles of Riddle, and broke from Dumbledore's control. He was finally able to live peacefully and freely.

This no-CP novel is the best among HP novels. I really rarely read Wusi's CP articles, but this one is particularly good. It basically uses the HP world as the background, but the original characters are completely OOC-free and very logically developed. The protagonist's image is very full and three-dimensional, and the plot development is sometimes unexpected to me, but it is very logical and very interesting! ! ! Highly recommended! ! !

For someone like me who is used to eating whole grains, I was very happy. It was my first time to see a doctor, and it became my XP unknowingly. I like Vega's growth and transformation very much. He often makes mistakes and thus gains a lot of memory. The story has ups and downs. The scene of hiding from Dumbledore made my heart skip a beat. . . The author's theoretical knowledge is sufficient, and his understanding of magic is also in place (I can't quite understand it anyway... I just feel it's awesome). He talked about biology for a while, chemistry for a while, and even talked about particles. He died suddenly in the first grade of junior high school.

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I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I really want to see everything revealed in the end. The male protagonist is a great magician, apprenticed to the first and second generation Dark Lords, he can kill the curse at the age of eight, he is a master of Occlumency, and he is extremely smart. This is the script of the chosen villain to rule the world in my mind!

I am really looking forward to this novel and have been saving it. As soon as it is finished, I will come over and take a look. The main thing is that if you follow it during the serialization, what should you say? Half chased, half forgotten. (Based on my experience of following two or three books, I can't remember them at all. The ones I'm reading now are all finished [crying]) I particularly like the protagonist's character as a villain. Succubus villain Shota or has long hair? The buff stack is full, I love this setting [Adoration] I don't want to read the kind of sunny and cheerful novels with big protagonists these days. I've read too many of them. I just want to read the gloomy and dull crazy-publishing type, preferably without CP! (I don't want to see couples with couples at all. I've seen too many couples with two guys. Some of them are almost the same as couples -_-||) The only beauty of the male lead is the best. No CP = just fuck as you like. Mainly, you can do it safely and boldly. If you have CP, I really don't want to talk about it. (I was following a serialized novel at the time. I thought it was a story with a female protagonist, but not long after the male protagonist came out, I guessed that he was a senior brother... I hated it so much. The story with a female protagonist was instantly downgraded. I didn't want to read it. As a result, it has ended now, and I don't even want to read it.)

Really pretty! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh just not enough. God knows that I saw the old yin bs playing tricks on each other. Such an exciting moment ended abruptly, and only the reminder button was left. My heart is really desperate, I want to watch it so much, I want to watch it, I want to watch it, I want to watch it, I am the king of urgency, I am really anxious and I want to watch it ヾ(༎ຶД༎ຶ)ﾉ

Really good, my type. Logical and not brainless.

I just discovered that [petrification] seems to have never happened to me. . . The language of this book is natural, has certain connotations, is not lacking in interest, and the plot also has many new ideas. I was in a relatively comfortable state while catching up on updates. It's over [grieved], I will read it again [almost crying] (this book is really my heart treasure [sending my heart])

I love the sickly villain so much [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration] Dark flow, logic is online, the protagonist is not whitewashed (shouldn't be whitewashed?) From the beginning, he fights the life and death of the dark wizard, and then hides in front of Dumbledore, and is almost exposed when he is about to succeed. The logic is reasonable, and the plot is full of twists and turns. It can be regarded as a high-quality HP fanfic. The only problem is that it's not enough to watch. I'll update it soon. I want to update it [crying][shy][shy][shy]

The author is great and the writing is really beautiful! The characters are well written, I like them, and the ending is great. When the protagonist's identity was almost discovered, I was almost scared to death! It's been really ups and downs- ̗̀(๑ᵔ⌔ᵔ๑)