Lead Players to Create a Revolution in the Cyber World

After reading a few chapters at first, the creativity of this book is pretty good, which is pretty good for a platform like Tomato, which writes about repetitive topics. However, for some reason, the author's use of punctuation marks and line breaks are very strange. At present, it includes double quotation mark errors and some paragraphing problems. If the author is thoughtful and can revise it slightly from scratch, I believe more people will be willing to read it for a long time. Or if this book fails, you can revise the outline of the book and pay attention to layout and other issues to write a good story. Or if the author is willing to revise it from the beginning, he can write this as a promise in the introduction. I think it can also provide some people who are reading this novel for the first time with a reason to continue reading. Take a paragraph from Chapter 10 as an example. The gun rang out, bang, and the wolves fled in fright. "Ding Zhen, your adoptive fathers came in time, right?" Zhu Youjian jumped down from the garbage mountain and pulled Ding Zhen up. Can be changed to: "Bang", the gun rang out, and the wolves ran away in fright. "Ding Zhen, your adoptive fathers came in time." Zhu Youjian jumped down from the garbage mountain and pulled Ding Zhen up. For example, I think the two words following and handful in the original text both emphasize a smooth and coordinated state. Adding only one can improve the smoothness of the paragraph. And symbols can generally be added after double quotation marks, and when the double quotation mark appears at the end, a period must be added after the double quotation mark.

Like first and then read, make it a habit [laughs]

Ok, I like it very much. This book is also a perfect fusion of the 4th natural disaster and cyberpunk, and it does not have the same clichés and plots as always. It can be said that the author is very careful in this aspect, give it a thumbs up [Like]

Not bad, a bit of fun

Overall it's okay, just a little weird. Players play as the reconstructed Soviet Union in the cyber world. Even bald eagles and even small-time (labor-squeezing) players have joined in. The furry bear next door has not even seen a shadow in chapter 188, as if he has become invisible. When will you appear?

There are a lot of female characters, but they don't have a warm flavor and description. I don't know if there is a female protagonist. It seems that there is no female protagonist at the moment. [Thinking]

I give it five stars. It feels really uncomfortable when everyone speaks in a translator's voice.

The Fourth Disaster Cyberpunk. These two pieces + 1 piece made me think of the Mechanicum instantly.

Come on, get on top, I've long been dissatisfied with Cyber.

It's so interesting, I'm not very good at writing reviews.

Not bad, it's my favorite fourth natural disaster

It's pretty good-looking. The characters in the article are also very good. It doesn't have that plastic feel and players can directly add points. But there is a big problem. It's not too big or too small. The protagonist has to use technology to trade with the country every time he runs out of money. I don't feel that the article is interesting. Maybe I read too much. I feel suppressed, like the protagonist is forcibly suppressed by the author. It's a bit uncomfortable [laughing]

Well, it's a very good book, but why are so few people reading it, and the ratings are still low? But even so, I will still read it to the end! (As long as the author writes well)

I read Chapter 8 of this book. To be honest, the background of the book should be the world view of cyberpunk, but I don't know why. I always feel that the author's description is more like the background of a post-apocalyptic wasteland novel.

It's still okay, but it's not recommended to use your brain while reading.

Come on! I like reading this kind of novel

Very nice book that made my head spin

Okay, okay, that's it, right? Let's go straight to StarCraft. The Zerg are all out. I just want to ask a question, how do you fight in space?

Kids, run, there are no plots like those in Night City.

It looks so good. In summary, farming is fighting, farming is fighting, farming is fighting

If you add CV-6, I will give it five stars.

The boat ride on land is gone, the thousands-mile raid is gone, what else is left? Bring the core to a place where they can't hit,

Very good, the content really impressed me

Not bad, come on author

It feels pretty good-looking

Why is such a beautiful book not popular? !

Personally, I feel pretty good, but it's still a bit toxic, but still acceptable.

It looks good, but it looks like a cyberpunk

Author, here comes the five-star review you want.

Why is it so good-looking? I think the story is very touching, and Shadows of the Past is particularly well-crafted.