Rebirth, Awakening Super S-Level Telekinesis at the Beginning

Let's get started. Five stars were originally given to geniuses, but your writing style is a bit like a running account, and the plot is a bit cliche. When I saw the admissions section, I felt that the back part was very different from what I thought. But when I looked at the back part... My dear, has this routine been written firmly? It's really annoying and I have no desire to watch anymore.

Does the author know about Jianwan? Jianwan is shaped like a pill, which means sword. It is sharp enough to cut iron like mud, and soft enough to wrap around a finger ring. The so-called Jianqi silk is to use magic power to stretch the sword ball into hair-like filaments. It looks soft, but in fact it has huge magic power to penetrate the sword wire. It is not only extremely sharp and can seal the throat when blood is seen, but also has the magic power to break the restriction of the enemy's magic weapon. The so-called differentiation of sword light is to use extreme magic power to change the rules of local space, so that the sword light can appear in several spaces at the same time, disappearing and appearing, making the enemy unable to detect and trace. Moreover, the lethality is accompanied by a space tearing effect, and those who hit it will be killed instantly. You can develop Long Yuan in this direction and use your mind power to turn it into mind threads at will, adding effects such as soul-killing, life-destroying, and void-breaking. Damage report [you fine product] [you fine product] [you fine product]

The author is very easy to talk to. If you tell me any mistakes, they will be corrected immediately [smile] It seems that some changes have been made before, and the sentences are much smoother. Like 👍

It's okay, single girl (not watching stallion)

Good. . . . .

In the first four chapters, you can already tell that the writing style is low-level and demeaning.

The author is very good. Your opinions are reasonable and he really listens.

It's so confusing and the plot is so boring.

The character of the protagonist is okay. At least Sofa did it decisively. There are some flaws in the plot. Things happen wherever you go. Pay attention to this aspect. The rest is fine.

Not bad, come on

Wry smile, four-star installment

None of the characters are normal people. You can't watch it again for fear of getting infected.

[Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]