A Top-Tier Horror Dwells Within Me

The beginning is very ordinary. Why don't you start by trying to get the protagonist to hate the Bureau of Investigation? You start directly and his life is threatened. If you don't find a chance to get it back, you get beaten. How can a normal person make such a mistake? If he didn't have the ability to live forever, he would have died early, and the ending was so outrageous, no one would be willing to read it. I don't know whether the third golden chapter is true or not, and no one would be willing to read it just from the beginning.

The quality is okay

My wife is so pretty