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This is really easy to be honest, but it's too short, just like the author [shy][shy]

How does it look like a sex change? There doesn't seem to be any problem replacing her with him.

Changshu Arnold thought of the outline nodes, and Sun Xiaochuan wrote the plot.

Seriously speaking, this book has the smoothest emotional treatment among the books I have read. Except for the classic female channel at the beginning, which cannot be avoided, I think the psychological description of the characters has reached an above-average level in Tomato. The look and feel of the characters is not stiff, the transitions are not abrupt, and the level is good. This book is much better to read than a bunch of others in the same genre, and it doesn't give you a lot of stomachache when you read it. It's just that I found that the author doesn't update much anymore. I don't know if I should abandon it, so I'd like to give it a good review and encourage it to be updated. Only by continuing to update will there be traffic. Come on, author, I also gave away three free gifts today.

It's pretty good. I like the characters very much. Maybe it was more straightforward before I left the clan, but I felt it was a bit slow after I left the clan. But it may be that the author wants to describe the characters and emotions more delicately. Please do your best to update. One more thing. Most of the books in Tomato these days are either reborn or time-traveled or the system doesn't understand the most. It seems that without these, I can't write. I feel very speechless and I really don't want to read it. So when I encounter a good book, I try to read it as much as possible. It may be different from the introduction, but it may not be the time yet.

Not bad, but I didn't see the green plot they mentioned (if Master has someone he likes who can be considered green, then I have nothing to say) I read novels a little differently than ordinary people. I don't look for pleasure when reading novels. I just want to read the plot of the novel and how it makes me feel. I have been reading books for more than ten years, starting from romance novels, then to ancient fantasy urban x-gods and x-sages, then to Japanese light novels, and finally back to domestic online novels. Nowadays, the mainstream novels are all about the male protagonist being invincible, and it is difficult to bring any real feeling. Those male protagonists are not that invincible and even a bit weak. People think that the male protagonists are repressed and abusive, but I find them quite interesting. To give a not-so-pleasant example, after reading the brainless Wudi Shuang novel, it is like urinating, and it is over as if nothing happened (no one will deliberately remember the experience of going to the toilet, right?) But those novels that are not brainless are like eating a meal. This meal can be good or bad. If you eat a good one, you will have endless aftertaste, and if you eat a bad one (here, I severely criticize the green article), you will feel nauseated for several days.

The writing is good, there are no logical flaws, but the plot is too short to develop. However, based on what is written in the introduction, you can probably guess how the male protagonist became ruthless. If the author can persist in writing, it will be considered a good idea.

As long as it's not poisonous or awesome, Master, just don't give it to others.

I'm afraid this master can't be cleansed. She is the biggest BOSS in the book so far. All the threats to the protagonist and his party come from her. I feel that the main plot is that the protagonist's harem group and her gangsters are dealing with her while dealing with her, secretly accumulating strength to form the Fugu Rebellion. The purpose is to give the protagonist freedom... In the past, she was also a possessive control freak. She was also extremely mentally unstable. Many people had a crush on the protagonist. All the women in her life have died because of her jealousy, and they have suffered a heavy debt of blood on their hands. Whether it is the master sister, the heroine's sisters, or even the protagonist himself, he lives on thin ice under her threat almost all the time. Even the junior brother who seems to be the culprit is actually just a tool she uses to control the protagonist... Not to mention she is doing it because of love. Once her appearance is reduced and her gender is changed, you will understand how disgusting and terrifying this master is in a minute...

It's not bad. The logic is basically smooth. I'll give it a four-star rating first and wait and see. I'll change it later if it's not right.

The writing is very good, the logic is online, and the details are well handled. As far as Tomato is concerned, it is very good.

The writing is good, but the early stage is a bit stiff, and Bai Xiaoxiao's falling in love with the protagonist is also a bit stiff. But overall, compared to Tomato's other stereotyped mindless cool articles and mindless harems, the character creation is still good. The plot line of the Bai Family Tianji League is pretty good. The layout of the plot to attack the snowy mountain and escape is good, but the emotional line is really average. However, it makes sense that the cute girl falls in love with the handsome doctor after losing her memory. The plot at the beginning is actually a bit shocking... But it's not bad in the fantasy module where master-student love is prevalent. However, how to shape the image and status of the protagonist with dual identities of "adopted son" and "tool" in the mind of the master is a difficult problem. It was unclear in the early stage. Maybe I swallowed everything in the process of watching and didn't understand why the master's attitude towards Chen Yan changed (this change is really inexplicable) As for the other characters, their characterization is just okay. The senior sister has the warmth of a caring elder sister. The fourth senior sister rarely appears, and is just a girl who likes to gossip. As for the younger junior sister, there is some content in the front, but basically no content in the middle. I look forward to improving it in the future. However, the characters that have appeared so far are pretty good. The cute and adorable Xiao Xiao, the sarcastic but kind-hearted aunt Wang, and the scheming but injured monk Bai Ruyi. Overall, it has flaws, but it is one of the few intelligent articles in Tomato. I give you a five-star rating for encouragement, and I look forward to the author's improvement in writing and polishing the plot. I hope the author will make money every day and be in good health.

It's good to watch. I haven't finished it yet. Looking forward to it.

Quickly push the plot, I want to see the old woman being severely humiliated by the male protagonist [laughs]

Great, Shi, we are saved.

I thought you stopped updating on November 6th, but suddenly you updated again, only to realize that you didn't even give a good review [thoughts]

It feels good, the writing is very good, but the title can be changed. At present, it seems that it has nothing to do with Wuqingdao [Adoration] [Face-palming] But it is understandable, it should be the later content. Anyway, the author, please keep updating [Adoration] [Adoration] and abuse Gu Qingyan well

I really like the emotional description of this novel, and the knife is acceptable. The low score may be due to the fact that this kind of series is easy for people to dislike. The indecisiveness of the protagonist may lead to low scores, but I still like this novel. I hope the author can bring a better plot [Adoration]

The rhythm is just right and the writing style is soothing. It's a good book worth reading [Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good and the pace is moderate. I am looking forward to it very much. Come on, author! ,

I don't know why the rating is a bit low. Maybe it's because it hasn't been published for a long time. I think it's okay. I'm satisfied to see this kind of book on Tomato.

I feel pretty good after reading seventy chapters. Is the current low rating because it's not exciting enough or because it's a new book? [Hold face][Hold face]

It's pretty good. The pace should be faster. I'll wait and see when I get fatter. Come on author

He really... I cried to death [almost cried]

It's great for me!

Not bad, good writing. 😊[Like][Like][Like]

It's pretty good. Will you accept it, senior sister?

It's very well written, I hope the author will stick with it

The writing is good, but the pace feels a bit slow. When will Master Sha attain enlightenment?

I haven't seen such a good-looking novel in a long time. Good luck to the author＾0＾~