S13: from Begging Anchor to Grand Slam

The LOL competition is well written and detailed. The protagonist's personality is also good. (The author's last LOL love line was so poisonous that I gave up the book. I hope I will write less in this one, even if I write it a few more times and take it with me. The author should think more about the love line and the character's perspective, and don't just substitute your own ideas. Without the icing on the cake, it is easy to become a rat.) Author, please update. ☺️☺️☺️Write less emotional lines🙃If you can't, write more brotherly love. ☺️☺️☺️Please. It's really better not to write if you write poorly [cry][cry][cry] No, the last star still has to be awarded in batches. Just now I took another look at the emotional lines in the previous book that looked like shit. Wow. Please write more about brotherly love. Don't write emotional lines! ! ! It's good if you write a few dialogues between the protagonist's fans that the protagonist doesn't know! ! ! It's also good to write about protective fans that the protagonist doesn't know about! ! ! Don't write love scenes! ! ! Don't believe you! ! ! ! How can I put together a long review for the author to read? ! ! ! Don't really write a love line. You can just set the stage for it when it's almost finished. You can start a side story and write it however you want! ! ! ! I can't stand it anymore! ! ! What a piece of shit. But the writing within the game is okay. [Smile]

Although there are only a few chapters now, I have the protection of the old book. I will give the new book a five-star rating first. [Learned] I'm not worried at all about the game, it's a lot of good-looking stuff, but in other aspects I think you should think it through before writing it. Don't let the confusing things like Zhang Jun Baixuan's apprentice appear in the previous book. Either don't write it, or write it in full. I'm not afraid of you making friends, accepting apprentices, and falling in love. At least you can write the whole plot in a comprehensive and reasonable way. ☕ After reading it, the writing is still so wonderful, the vividness of the competition, and the detailed analysis are the best. However, other scenes outside of the competition are still so unclear that they are not much better than the previous book. But after all, this is an e-sports article, so it's enough to write about the competition well. It's the same as a one-stop gift collection. I look forward to the next book. [Learned]

The old author guarantees the quality. I have finished the last book and it is time to continue. Come on, come on. Finally, I wish the child a speedy recovery

It's good to read, but Liang Chen's book has whetted my appetite. After reading other e-sports articles, I always feel that everything is a bit inferior, and there is a shortage of books. Fortunately, you have started a new article again [Send heart] But you didn't give any warning when you started a new article. If I hadn't clicked on the author's homepage one day on a whim, I wouldn't have found any new articles. [Learned]

The content is wonderful. The author has been a king for 10 seasons. The last book has already made him a god.

Familiar wild king, familiar taste, familiar five stars

Review first and then read, it won't be a bad idea if you have some background information

Okay, I have an old book to guarantee that the quality of this book will be better than the last one [angry]

A very nice e-sports article

Not bad, good, highly recommended

@Pas Come on, I've read the first one almost twice. I originally thought you would continue to write about alliances. If you write about cultivating immortals, I can't wait any longer. Fortunately, you didn't give up.

Seeing that al has entered the finals, I thought that there is also a holy gun brother in this book, so I will leave a review [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

Dip beans, so cool! It is recommended to skip the heroine part directly. The author likes to write about romance, but it is really terrible [Petrochemical]

Anyone who doesn't play in the league thinks it's good to learn, and I really think it's a good e-sports article, unlike some gods that are outrageous at the beginning. It's step-by-step, and the reinforcements and tactics are well written. It's not like some articles that feel too watery, and it's really not a bragging. It's 7000+ hours and is recommended. Brothers who are new to the game can do it. I also hope that the author can maintain his level. I've read more than 300 chapters in one day. I hope there will be more updates, otherwise I will keep reading [laughing]

An insurmountable colossus, a wall that can never be climbed over. Congratulations to Faker for winning his fifth championship trophy for the second time in a row... LPL, no matter whether it is an all-China class or not, can't beat T1 in the S competition head-on. Ten years later, that man can still defend the championship again. I really don't know what to do. Even if I beat Faker in the novel, I won't feel any happiness, because after watching the game for so long, I really feel more and more that the Chinese can't beat him in LOL... My league will end this time, and I will never pay attention to any league events again. Congratulations again to T1 for winning the championship!

Very good e-sports article. Although I don't play LoL, I really like the cloud experience.

The author has nothing to say when it comes to writing competitions. The details are almost the same as the previous one and it is relatively comfortable to read. However, the emotional line still needs to be polished as in the previous book. Just write more of this kind of thing and don't suddenly have a female apprentice like the last book. This and the e-sports competition in the previous book can be said to be successful in Tomato. If the author really can't write the emotional line, he can slowly fade it. If he can't write it, we won't touch the emotional line in the next book [face covering] E-sports competition can be seen on Tomato. There are really few articles with such details and comfort, so I still hope that this book can get better and not be like the previous one, because the love line collapsed directly in the later period. Although it was made up for in the later period of the last book [face covering] Come on, the love line needs to be polished. In summary, the love line in Tomato is a rare e-sports article. It is a bit unsatisfactory, but book friends who don't like the love line or can't stand the love line in this book can just skip the daily game. The game is also very interesting and there is no big problem [face covering]

For a web novel, the pace is good, but the foreshadowing is obvious and some routines are a bit repetitive. But the rhythm is really good, one wave after another. What is taboo in Shuangwen is to repeat a rhythm. The life shown now is mixed with the main melody.

The best alliance article I have ever read. Just like the author said, sometimes when I write, I feel like these things are really happening. As a reader, I sometimes feel the same way. The various descriptions of the characters in this book are all too real, and the descriptions of the competition, combined with various stickers, are also very graphic. Perhaps the only shortcoming of this book is the emotional description, which is a bit exaggerated and not like normal people. Also, the description of everyone in SKT at the end of the finals was a bit distorted. There is really only this little flaw, and everything else is perfect. It was a pity that I didn't continue writing about the two and three championships. Then I thought about it. In the novels I had read before, the two and three championships were not easy to write. Writing about the regular season or the playoffs would be a bit slow. If I only wrote about the World Championship, there would be no foreshadowing and I would not be full of emotions. This ending is really just right. Looking forward to the author's new book

Some people may think that the beginning is not good, but I think it's okay. It's just an introduction, and there's nothing bad about it. Some people have read a lot of novels and subconsciously thought it was a bloody plot, but it's not. The main plot is relatively compact from the end, and the author has a very deep understanding of the alliance and the plot is also very good. It can be said to be Tomato's top alliance novel. If you like alliance novels, I really recommend you to read it. It is very good-looking. Except that the author has updated too little, please add more updates.

The writing of the competition is really good, but the emotional part of the plot is really a bit toxic. The author may have considered the part where the female protagonist takes advantage of the heroine in both directions, but I personally feel that it is better to mention it in one stroke. The e-sports article should either ignite passionate battles, be more relaxed and happy in daily life, or include pretending to slap the face for revenge, etc., And I don't want to be too bloody. It's an emotional entanglement. I wanted to read it more relaxedly. If I didn't want to relax, I read a literary novel. I originally wanted to finish it, but after seeing this, I thought that's it. I can only say that I'm not from the same place. Everyone has different points of view, and it's difficult to agree on. Thank you for the wonderful description of the e-sports competition. I hope the author will get better and better. Come on, there is a long way to go. See you again!

I read it from the previous book. It was really good. The emotional lines other than the apprentice and the heroine in the previous book were indeed a bit toxic, but the author knew how to listen to the readers' opinions and stop it in time. I think it's really good. However, this one has some toxic points that some people say are really not toxic. After all, you have written novels. Magic is nothing at all. In reality, there are many people who are more magical than this. I finished reading Tong Tian Dai last year and finished this one this year. Compared with the previous book, I personally feel that this one is better written, especially the emotional line. I feel that the author has been taken away from me, but the writing is so normal. The character creation in some chapters is also very nice. I dare not say that about other games, but in the League of Legends section, the author is the well-deserved number one among the works in recent years.

From the first book, the author is full of details. One thing is that the daily plots should be more silly and lively. Of course, the author's own writing rhythm should be considered. Just a few suggestions.

I just read about a hundred chapters, and I was inspired by it. I just finished reading the author's last e-sports novel and followed it. I feel that the author's writing this time is more boring. I mean the overall feeling of reading this novel is more boring. The protagonist of this book has a very cold personality, a bit like the male protagonist in some dramas. To act, he only needs a handsome poker face, no expressions, and he just reads the lines like he is reading a text [laughs evilly]. The supporting characters in the book are more profoundly written than the protagonists. Someone once said that in a dog-licking script, the protagonist is the licking dog [Thinking]. As for the e-sports article, I made this dumpling just for the sake of vinegar. The author's dumpling is pretty good. There are still many things I haven't read yet. I'll talk about it after reading it [Chigua]

Come on, the author, your writing is very good. With your plot speed, I think I can continue writing until fist GG. Okay, stop writing those emotional lines, don't write about girlfriends, dads, etc. Thank you [face covering] [face covering] [face covering], just leave me only a memory of the game [crying] [crying] [crying], -1

I have read thirty chapters, and based on the level of the first thirty chapters: it is ranked in the top five among all the e-sports articles I have read. First of all, this setting is very novel. It is not the old three of genius boy, system, and rebirth, but a long, long professional dream. This makes me very touched. Who likes e-sports writing and doesn't have a career dream? And the emotional line is also very comfortable to look at, and it is well grasped. Nothing too little, nothing too much I have read relatively little so far, only about thirty chapters. I read another novel a long time ago when I was in junior high school. The protagonist's team's top laner's status was very unstable when they were playing in the LPL, but they still achieved redemption when facing powerful opponents. In a disadvantaged situation, his Mondo TP went to the opposite house and withstood the damage of five people and demolished the opposite house to complete his own redemption. I was very passionate and excited when I watched it, and even got so excited that I shed tears. I hope that the emotional drama will be greatly strengthened, and the emotional aspect will not only involve falling in love. There is also blood, passion, and dreams! Let me first state that I am not trying to sensationalize. I have read chapter 30 so far, and I feel that the author's emotional drama is really good! But I read that most book friends in the comment area have completely opposite views to mine. They all think that the emotional aspect is a weak point. My humble opinion is that people read too many fast-paced fast-food novels. When they encounter good novels, they don't know how to taste them. They just want to have fun. So after reading dozens of chapters and a hundred chapters, should I just leave it on the bookshelf to gather dust? I have read thirty chapters so far, and I feel that this novel is the best one among the Tomato authors who has written e-sports articles, and it is a qualitative leap compared to the author's previous e-sports article. As far as I have only read thirty chapters so far, if this novel can lay a lot of groundwork, such as relationships, competitions, storylines, and character emotions, and write more than five hundred chapters, it will definitely become a god! ! ! ! ! ! It's the layout of Tomato's e-sports articles! ! ! !

After reading it, I was very emotional. It was the first lol novel that I followed until the end. I don't know why, but this book has a unique appeal. Maybe it's because I read too many other cool e-sports stories. I either helped s7uzi win the championship or went to edg to help the factory. How many people did this book lwx qiuqiu Guozi brother care? Old guns, several of these people have left the game, but this book seems to really come alive for them. I really seemed to see such a FPX team defeating T1 in the finals, breaking the curse. Sometimes I also think, if LPL really has such a bandit, then Can he find the right teammates and defeat t1? But in any case, I am happy for the fpx of this book. I hope that if there is such an all-Chinese class that wins the championship, I can return to this book and tell the author that the book you wrote has come true. There is really such an all-Chinese class that has won the championship.

The article about the alliance game that is exciting from the beginning has written out everything we want. What has not been realized in reality is satisfied from this book. It's not so brainless. The early and mid-term games are even more passionate. It borrows several famous scenes from the league. It's not too long-winded. It's recommended. Compared with another e-sports article "Peak Moment", it is a little less interesting in spirit, but overall it is still very good. 4.5⭐

This is the author's second e-sports book, and the quality is guaranteed. The season lasted a year, spring split, MSI, summer split, S13, and basically never lost a single game, always 2:0, 3:0. The male protagonist is a super commander + jungler, has great operational ideas, has never lost in punishment, and has the top say in the team. He is the BP, selects teammates, and decides tactics. After winning the championship, he was too strong and was targeted by fists, but he adjusted at the speed of light and continued to crush and win. Even fists publicly admitted that he was strong, and he was worth hundreds of millions a year. There is no team change, teammates cooperate, managers and coaches make pendants, and there are no villains who slap in the face without brains. There are some atmosphere trolls in the barrage, but the slap in the face is instant, and the commentary is all done by the male lead. If there are flaws in this article, the quality of the non-competition scenes in this article is very average, and the description of getting along with my girlfriend is also boring. You can skip it directly and just watch the plot related to the real club and ranking.

I can give it five stars at the moment. I hope that in the future, the protagonist's things other than e-sports can be written more fully. I also want to mention that it does not mean that love and love are necessary to highlight the fullness of a character. There are many points that can be written. ——————Dividing line—————— As the saying goes, "If it were a novel, it would have ended here." What I hope is to see the continuation. It should not be completed just for the sake of completion. What I am looking forward to is the continuation in the extra chapter. Here's what I want to say to the bandits In the finals of the All-China Class S competition, I defeated t1 head-on, a one-year grand slam, bandits! You have successfully stood at the top of your world's LoL e-sports circle! Your next opponent is time. I hope that in some days in the future you can recall your words from back then, "Don't try to be a broadcaster" to later, "Congratulations to fpx!" And be as calm as water. You can do it, as you said, "I'll prove it to you." It's not that we don't want to see heroes grow old, but we are afraid that heroes will no longer be as high-spirited as they used to be, as if they have seen themselves forced to compromise and smooth themselves out in society.