Lin Yu arrives in a cyberpunk world riddled with danger.
Mutants, ferocious beasts, barbarians, and alien civilizations are all eyeing it hungrily, eager to invade.
And in this world, getting stronger requires forming contracts with members of the opposite sex.
What's more, a man can contract with multiple women.
Years later, Lin Yu stands at the pinnacle of the universe and looks back at those behind him.
He tells everyone:
“I formed contracts with so many women solely to increase my strength.
It was all for the Alliance.
Do you know how much energy it takes to deal with women from all these other civilizations every day?
Do you know how much I've sacrificed for the Alliance?
Enough about that.
The Queen of the Goddess Civilization wants to discuss something with me.”
It's too general. The robot girl is just a tool. The meaning of existence is that it is stronger than the artificial one in the initial stage, but not as good as the artificial one in the later period. The training cost of the robot girl is too high, the development is slow, and there are too many things to do. It is not as convenient and powerful as the artificial one, and the artificial one at least has artificial intelligence assistance. Your robot girl is not as good as the intelligent exoskeleton armor. The subject matter is indeed attractive, but the content is true and it is difficult to describe it in one sentence. It's really irritating that you keep insisting on social issues. The background of the world is already crap, and you still talk about this and that, but you don't mind it. The poison test is completed and the review is completed Summary: Low recommendation
Let me make the first comment. As for the poison, I personally don't feel there are many, nor is it too poisonous. It is within my personal acceptable range. The content is pretty good so far, but the number of words is too small, and the plot is not good or bad yet.
Fast food? And it gives people the feeling that you have to cut yourself off at any time. The first poisonous point, the body shape of the mecha is not described in detail. The second poisonous point is that the battle scenes do not have any elements of mechas (such as cannon bombardment, jet displacement, weapon switching, etc. I don't know how to write this point. You can play Armored Core 6 or a domestic unlocking machine) The third poisonous point is that the plot progresses too quickly, the characters are not developed and the settings are messy.
The author's writing is a bit anti-human. I'd better use punctuation marks to show what the system says, otherwise it will look like a narration. Also, use punctuation marks to show what the protagonist says. Don't use it here and don't use it there. It's really uncomfortable.
There has been no plot about the machine girl since entering the ruins, and the name was not even mentioned. I read dozens of chapters and still didn't see it. I was convinced, what is the title of your book? The protagonist doesn't need a robot girl to transform, right?
Now that the troops are self-respecting, food and grass are a big problem. We must prepare for the worst. The land resources of the station are poor. It is best to turn the hometown in the rear into a semi-recruitment and semi-agricultural city, so that veterans can take care of themselves and cultivate the new generation. I see you wrote about battleships. I wonder when the protagonist will update his equipment.
It's just Xiaobaiwen
Ouch, ow, ow, it's okay, I want to eat meat, eat a lot of meat
I have only read a few chapters, and there are two obvious data errors in it. I won't say anything about your poor plot arrangement, but you can make mistakes just by copying what you have written before and then again later. This attitude is disgusting.
You're fighting too casually, you look so lonely