Original God: the Appearance of Holy Light Silver Water

Fortunately, it's pretty good. Please support it, but I have an idea, that is, maybe the two and three dimensions can be linked? For example, I came up with a small Easter egg CG. I saw the idea in Chapter 10. The protagonist replies to those people on the post bar. It can be placed in the Easter egg CG. The Easter egg is specifically a video. The protagonist is holding a mobile phone, and then the camera is zoomed in to the mobile phone screen. You can clearly see the message the protagonist replies, and the facial expressions of the protagonist are also captured. (Of course it is an easter egg independent of the plot. After all, Liyue does not have a mobile phone in the game) I think it's good to write like this. After all, it's all written in two or three dimensions. How could there be no linkage? There is a CP, male, added suddenly, please be careful before entering.

To be honest, when I first started reading, I really wanted to quit. In the first few chapters, the author's timeline jumped too frequently, or it was spoilers. Although the author said that the revealed plot was only the tip of the iceberg, it really affected the readers' reading experience. Later, the author also absorbed the readers' feedback and corrected this, and the subsequent reading experience was very good. The plot is well connected, the plot is rich, the content is very sweet, and the character creation is also in line with the plot. Worth recommending! Finally, the author has to work hard to write more words and keep updating so that it doesn't end [smile]

Fortunately, I brought my brain to read it, otherwise I wouldn't understand it.

Great! Although it was a bit confusing at first, I can still put it together after a little thought.

Super pretty! ! ! ! Come on, author! !

Nice! ! ! I hope it won't be so brutal.

The subject matter of the article is very good, but the level of swordsmanship is not good enough. It is clearly revealed in advance that this character is going to be knifed, so everyone is mentally prepared. The essence of a knife must be a hidden knife, hidden in the storyline and available for players to discover later. The second is the instant sword, which is beyond the player's expectation, such as Hoshino Ai's sword; or it may make the player vaguely feel uneasy, but not sure, Himeko in the last lesson; or it may be the contrast between the characters before and after, my Fufu... There is no need to let the player know about the conversation between Ying and Zhongli and the protagonist now. They can add a chapter or bury a hidden clue in the future. For example, the protagonist can find Zhongli first, and Ying and the player can just interrupt the conversation when they arrive.

Very nice, but a real knife

I woke up from the nightmare as I went to sleep from the nightmare. Death does not mean the end of evil, and rebirth does not mean the beginning of good. "Normal" people may be aliens, but "abnormal" people are normal people. They say the future is full of infinite possibilities, but looking back at the past there is only one way. Darkness is the main theme of the world, and light only temporarily covers it.

Dear author! (Write your resume and go to the high-end office building) (Push the door suddenly!) (Push the door!) (Push the door!) (Push the door!) (Push the door!) (Push the door!) (Push the door!) (Push the door! (Push the door!) (Push the door!) (Push the door 99 times and find that it is a revolving door!) I also want to say that it is very well written! ( Transform into an ape) (Grab bananas from passers-by) (Fly into the jungle) (Swing in the vines) (Swing in the vines) (Swing in the vines) (Swing in the vines) (Roar loudly) (Roar loudly) (Swing in the vines) (Roar loudly) (Swing in the vines) (Roar loudly) (Swing in the vines)

Are you going to compete with Fu Fu? All I can say is that you succeeded, please get Hang Qin back quickly! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

There's too much nonsense. I've always emphasized how awesome and beautiful the protagonist is and how bad the culture is, but the story is good and I can't let me suffer alone, so I'll give it a higher score.

Let me see the screams of the players as soon as possible.

I'm very upset, but we who play Genshin Impact are not so crazy. This book is the White Moonlight in my heart. I still want to say something. The light is lost in the darkness, Light is also born in darkness.

The concepts are completely different and there is no need to force them to agree. You look up to the sky with awe, while she worships and pursues the peak of power in the world. You uphold your conscience and are as firm as a rock; she pursues dreams of prosperity and seeks her destination amidst the flow of materialistic desires. You use love as a boat to ferry others and yourself, and your heart is enriched by it; she uses resentment as a blade to hurt others and yourself, and your soul is desolate in it. Since the state of mind is different, forcing friends is just to increase troubles; the positions are different, silence is golden, and few words can show your dignity; the cognitive gap is difficult to bridge, arguing is useless, only the labor of words. Therefore, we might as well let go of each other, let differences become the scenery, and allow everything in this world to have its own state and place.

It highlights the character and embodies the despair of a girl. It seems difficult, but it is certainly not easy. As for what happens next, it depends on the situation to avoid backstabbing me. So far it's pretty good, as for the knife. I don't think so, I think this is more like a girl before being redeemed. Many of the situations reflected in the book are like rescuing a desperate girl who is sinking at the bottom of the sea. I hope to see a gentle heroine sooner, after all, gentle girls are very popular! [You taste carefully][You taste carefully][You taste carefully]

It's very sweet. You write well, author. Where is the address? I'll send you something good

It was a bit confusing at first, but who would read a novel with their brains in mind? The author's writing style is improving, and his grasp of the details of the article is not bad. I hope the author can write some articles in the later articles that can attract readers, so that he can remedy the messy chapters in the previous chapters. I also hope the author will continue to work hard to get high scores!

It looks good, but the knife... Has no feeling at all

I haven't read much. This book written by the author is very suitable for my taste, but I always feel weird when I read it, so I want to say sorry to the author first. I won't finish this book, but I think the author should write it very well. Keep up the good work! (I don't know if my five stars are enough to respond to the author's efforts)

Okay, it's one of the best Genshin Impact fanfics I've ever read.

Why is the rating so low?

Brother, I think you may feel a little disgusted with what I say next, but I really feel that the author, can you increase your intensity? I think it's not sharp enough and even feels a little sweet.

What do you call a knife? Knife!

You will be realistic now and in the future, and there is no mark yet. Fortunately, I don't lose my mind when reading novels [Chigua]

It's good. Although some parts are a bit outrageous, it's generally good. The characters are well portrayed, especially in the first two chapters. There's a sense of Alicia's immediacy, a person who loves everyone, and a person who is willing to dedicate herself to everyone. The writing is really good. This score is given to the author. The specific reasons can be found in the book review of the passage about Beng 3.

The writing is very good, very exciting, the knife... Is also very cruel [crying]

It's okay. This seems to be the only popular article about Genshin Impact characters. Some of them are similar but most of them are original. It's just that the writing is a bit confusing. I think it's a preview if it's written in the future and now. Anyway, it's still readable.

The plot is okay, just talk about the future and the present when time changes. This kind of time change is more attractive to me, because it is easy to get confused when watching it. One second it was in the present, and then the next second it suddenly became the future. Hope it can be modified slightly.

Author, your writing is beautiful, but the TM is too sharp. I suddenly had the urge to pick up a knife and chop MiHoYo. All in all, it is very beautiful.