(Two male protagonists + upgraded cool writing)
Zhang Bo is the cannon fodder of an upgrading novel. He ends up miserable because he offends the protagonist.
After his rebirth, Zhang Bai learned the truth and vowed to stay away from the protagonist.
But by mistake, he rescued Mo Fenglie, who was originally supposed to be rescued by the protagonist.
In the original work, he was the protagonist's most loyal subordinate, but now, he has become Zhang Bai's loyal dog.
But in fact, Mo Fenglie is not a loyal dog, but a mad dog.
This mad dog was subdued by Zhang Bo.
Zhang Bo has no ambitions and just wants to live a stable and peaceful life.
But Mo Fenglie supported him all the way to a peak that Zhang Bai could not even imagine.
Demining: 1. On the surface, he is a loyal dog, but in reality he is a mad dog, Mo Fenglie, who looks like an ordinary Zhang Bai.
2. I'm not criticizing the protagonist of the original work. There is not much overlap between the protagonist of this article and the protagonist of the original work, and there is no slap in the face involved.
3. Zhang Bai is not good-looking! Very ordinary! There will be relevant descriptions, so don't enter if you don't like it!
4. Generally speaking, it is a witty and enjoyable novel with no twists and turns.
5. Zhang Bai: I don't want to have a career.
Mo Fenglie: No, you think.
Reader comments
I like it very much 😍. After reading the introduction, I thought the protagonist would be a kind of escapist from reality, so that he is willing to work hard to become stronger when he is in danger and unable to solve it (to be honest, this kind of plot is very frustrating). But the protagonist is not. He also thought about escaping when he was reborn. After he figured it out, he was willing to work hard to improve himself and hoped that the protagonist would get better and better. The author should continue writing and don't stop updating, I will continue to follow up. 🌹🌹🌹
꒦ິ^꒦ິ Made me cry just watching it. Although there is not a lot of space in the article to describe the relationship between them, you can feel their strong friendship in just a few words.
I was really moved when I saw the war breaking out. Everyone put the justice of their family and country first, sacrificed their lives for the country, and devoted themselves to the country.
But when I watched it, I always thought that there would be a little bit of plot about the original protagonist, but I didn't expect it to be so little, hahaha.
Very pretty, I like it very much
It's quite good-looking, but the emotional descriptions are a bit jerky in some places. I guess the author is Mudan [laughing evilly], and the pace is relatively fast. There's no bloody slap-in-the-face plot, and there's no Kurohara protagonist. There are basically no surprises. They all have their own beautiful life trajectories. It's a good book. Good luck to the author!!!
Nice! ! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
The water flows relatively slowly,
For me, it's more of a daily routine.
The overall book develops rapidly, especially in the middle and late stages
I personally recommend it! ! ! !
This is the first book I've read with this kind of setting. It's a very special setting. It's good that the original protagonist wasn't made a bad guy, but I don't like that the new protagonist is the original one who is a vicious cannon fodder. The ending of the family in this book is determined from the beginning. Some things that seem to be able to change the genocide cannot be changed in retrospect. History has destined the outcome. The protagonist is an ordinary person, but later on he achieved something that is difficult for ordinary people to do. I have never understood why soldiers want to protect their homes and countries. In a sense, it goes against their nature. After reading this book, I understand a little bit. I didn't understand why so many people were needed to protect one person before. After reading this book, I seem to understand. Some people can really change a lot. Maybe there will be such people in the future, but I don't know how long it will take, and this "maybe" is also unknown. So it seems very reasonable to use so many people to protect it. The author wrote that the protagonist was not good-looking, and originally hoped that the protagonist would become more good-looking, and most of the comments I read had this hope. After watching it, I felt it was completely unnecessary, and later on I completely forgot that the main character was not good-looking. There is such a thing as charisma. Some people are not good-looking but can attract many people. I hope that the protagonists can live a happy life after the story ends. The main character of this book is one of the few people I really like, like a human being. He is not the saint in other novels, he has the most normal humanity. There is a feeling that this is not like a novel, but like a fantasy history. I feel like the rating is low. I don't quite understand the rating. I hope more people can read this book. To be honest, I haven't finished watching it before. I gave up halfway through watching it, and now I'm watching it again. Very good book.
It's very beautiful, the characters are full, the plot is smooth, and the writing is also very good. I don't know why it is not popular. It is really better than many dual-male protagonists. It's just that the setting may not be very popular. I believe you can do it, the author. It's really inspiring [blowing kiss]
Maybe Zhang Bai had low self-esteem and escaped from the beginning, but he has always had a strong character. Compared with the relationship between the two protagonists in this book, the feelings of family and country in it are more touching, and the spirit of family and country is vividly reflected.
It's a good and up-to-date novel. There aren't many emotional scenes. It's mainly career-oriented, but the care between the two parties really made me so sweet. The whole story is free of abuse. I waited for him to finish it before reading it. It took me a day to read it. I won't say it a second time! ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ﾉﾞ
The subject matter is novel and the writing is refreshing. You must read it!
Why are there so few people here? The article is obviously very interesting, the plot is good, and the values are full of positive energy. Although there are emotions, the two protagonists are centered around the people of the country. They are heroic and have feelings for their family and country. The plot is obviously very dull but very touching. I hope the author will continue to work hard and strive to write long articles! ! ! !
It's so beautiful, I read it in one sitting! I particularly like the author's writing style! There are also characters created. I like the personalities of the male protagonists very much. Although there is not too much description of emotions, this kind of war-type text does not have much time to fall in love. On the contrary, too many emotional scenes will be a bit dragging. The pace is very good. If you want to watch extreme pulling and ambiguity, don't consider this book.
It's really good-looking, and the writing is pretty good, making it enjoyable to read.
It's a decent novel, at least I think it's pretty good (≧∇≦*)
Come on keep writing💪
Nice. [Love] is well written in big letters. [Like] [Like] Although in the emotional line, Da Da Da laughs at himself for writing embarrassingly, in fact, Da Da Da writes really well, but the pace is relatively fast. I think the development of this emotional line is very suitable for the theme of Dazai. Military-themed novels are not suitable for protracted and bloody plots. You can be more confident. Come on! ｡◕‿◕｡
There are not many love lines, mostly career lines interspersed with some. The only thing that feels abrupt is that the relationship is confirmed all of a sudden. I may find it a bit weird [face covering], but overall, the story is okay.
It's nice to read. There are very few novels with this theme, but the author's writing is really good👌🏻
Very cozy, very warm
I really like it. It's a career-oriented, male-focused story. It's really fun to read. I also really like the setting of the male protagonist. I really can't get interested after seeing too many beauties. I just want this ability to highlight everything. It's a pity that the author's best writing feels like it's unfinished.
It's really super, super, super beautiful [sending my heart], please give the author a big boost [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
It is very common, it is the struggle, progress and setbacks of ordinary people.
I really didn't think I would finish it in one sitting! Really enjoyed this book! !
It's very good. Although there are few emotional scenes later on, the two of them grew up with each other and finally got together, which was satisfying.
Although the story is a bit bland, I really like this kind of story about working towards a goal.
It looks great, good luck to the author!
Come on, come on, come on! Good health [admiration]
Ah, I really like it so much
The story of two male protagonists growing up together
I want to give you a super thumbs up! Super super pretty!
It's a pretty good novel, why is the rating so low?
Looks good, but too short! ! There is simply not enough to see! !
It's a book without meat, but it looks pretty good.
I like it very much 😍. After reading the introduction, I thought the protagonist would be a kind of escapist from reality, so that he is willing to work hard to become stronger when he is in danger and unable to solve it (to be honest, this kind of plot is very frustrating). But the protagonist is not. He also thought about escaping when he was reborn. After he figured it out, he was willing to work hard to improve himself and hoped that the protagonist would get better and better. The author should continue writing and don't stop updating, I will continue to follow up. 🌹🌹🌹
꒦ິ^꒦ິ Made me cry just watching it. Although there is not a lot of space in the article to describe the relationship between them, you can feel their strong friendship in just a few words. I was really moved when I saw the war breaking out. Everyone put the justice of their family and country first, sacrificed their lives for the country, and devoted themselves to the country. But when I watched it, I always thought that there would be a little bit of plot about the original protagonist, but I didn't expect it to be so little, hahaha.
Very pretty, I like it very much
It's quite good-looking, but the emotional descriptions are a bit jerky in some places. I guess the author is Mudan [laughing evilly], and the pace is relatively fast. There's no bloody slap-in-the-face plot, and there's no Kurohara protagonist. There are basically no surprises. They all have their own beautiful life trajectories. It's a good book. Good luck to the author!!!
Nice! ! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The water flows relatively slowly, For me, it's more of a daily routine. The overall book develops rapidly, especially in the middle and late stages I personally recommend it! ! ! !
This is the first book I've read with this kind of setting. It's a very special setting. It's good that the original protagonist wasn't made a bad guy, but I don't like that the new protagonist is the original one who is a vicious cannon fodder. The ending of the family in this book is determined from the beginning. Some things that seem to be able to change the genocide cannot be changed in retrospect. History has destined the outcome. The protagonist is an ordinary person, but later on he achieved something that is difficult for ordinary people to do. I have never understood why soldiers want to protect their homes and countries. In a sense, it goes against their nature. After reading this book, I understand a little bit. I didn't understand why so many people were needed to protect one person before. After reading this book, I seem to understand. Some people can really change a lot. Maybe there will be such people in the future, but I don't know how long it will take, and this "maybe" is also unknown. So it seems very reasonable to use so many people to protect it. The author wrote that the protagonist was not good-looking, and originally hoped that the protagonist would become more good-looking, and most of the comments I read had this hope. After watching it, I felt it was completely unnecessary, and later on I completely forgot that the main character was not good-looking. There is such a thing as charisma. Some people are not good-looking but can attract many people. I hope that the protagonists can live a happy life after the story ends. The main character of this book is one of the few people I really like, like a human being. He is not the saint in other novels, he has the most normal humanity. There is a feeling that this is not like a novel, but like a fantasy history. I feel like the rating is low. I don't quite understand the rating. I hope more people can read this book. To be honest, I haven't finished watching it before. I gave up halfway through watching it, and now I'm watching it again. Very good book.
It's very beautiful, the characters are full, the plot is smooth, and the writing is also very good. I don't know why it is not popular. It is really better than many dual-male protagonists. It's just that the setting may not be very popular. I believe you can do it, the author. It's really inspiring [blowing kiss]
Maybe Zhang Bai had low self-esteem and escaped from the beginning, but he has always had a strong character. Compared with the relationship between the two protagonists in this book, the feelings of family and country in it are more touching, and the spirit of family and country is vividly reflected.
It's a good and up-to-date novel. There aren't many emotional scenes. It's mainly career-oriented, but the care between the two parties really made me so sweet. The whole story is free of abuse. I waited for him to finish it before reading it. It took me a day to read it. I won't say it a second time! ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ﾉﾞ The subject matter is novel and the writing is refreshing. You must read it!
Why are there so few people here? The article is obviously very interesting, the plot is good, and the values are full of positive energy. Although there are emotions, the two protagonists are centered around the people of the country. They are heroic and have feelings for their family and country. The plot is obviously very dull but very touching. I hope the author will continue to work hard and strive to write long articles! ! ! !
It's so beautiful, I read it in one sitting! I particularly like the author's writing style! There are also characters created. I like the personalities of the male protagonists very much. Although there is not too much description of emotions, this kind of war-type text does not have much time to fall in love. On the contrary, too many emotional scenes will be a bit dragging. The pace is very good. If you want to watch extreme pulling and ambiguity, don't consider this book.
It's really good-looking, and the writing is pretty good, making it enjoyable to read. It's a decent novel, at least I think it's pretty good (≧∇≦*) Come on keep writing💪
Nice. [Love] is well written in big letters. [Like] [Like] Although in the emotional line, Da Da Da laughs at himself for writing embarrassingly, in fact, Da Da Da writes really well, but the pace is relatively fast. I think the development of this emotional line is very suitable for the theme of Dazai. Military-themed novels are not suitable for protracted and bloody plots. You can be more confident. Come on! ｡◕‿◕｡
There are not many love lines, mostly career lines interspersed with some. The only thing that feels abrupt is that the relationship is confirmed all of a sudden. I may find it a bit weird [face covering], but overall, the story is okay.
It's nice to read. There are very few novels with this theme, but the author's writing is really good👌🏻
Very cozy, very warm
I really like it. It's a career-oriented, male-focused story. It's really fun to read. I also really like the setting of the male protagonist. I really can't get interested after seeing too many beauties. I just want this ability to highlight everything. It's a pity that the author's best writing feels like it's unfinished.
It's really super, super, super beautiful [sending my heart], please give the author a big boost [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
It is very common, it is the struggle, progress and setbacks of ordinary people.
I really didn't think I would finish it in one sitting! Really enjoyed this book! !
It's very good. Although there are few emotional scenes later on, the two of them grew up with each other and finally got together, which was satisfying.
Although the story is a bit bland, I really like this kind of story about working towards a goal.
It looks great, good luck to the author!
Come on, come on, come on! Good health [admiration]
Ah, I really like it so much
The story of two male protagonists growing up together
I want to give you a super thumbs up! Super super pretty!
It's a pretty good novel, why is the rating so low?
Looks good, but too short! ! There is simply not enough to see! !
It's a book without meat, but it looks pretty good.