Reborn in the Ancient Mortal Body, I Am the Number One True Immortal!

The protagonist of the novel does not cheat, and the ups and downs of the plot are gripping to read. 1From the perspective of character settings The conflicts between the characters are prominent, especially between Feng Yi and Fengyun. It depicts the characters more vividly, making the characteristics of the main characters vivid on the page and the characters deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. 2. Use an appropriate amount of environmental description to enhance the atmosphere, predict the development of the story, and make readers immersed in the situation. I won't spoil the specific plot, it's a very good work and well worth watching.

After reading the introduction, I feel that the character setting is quite interesting, and I am looking forward to the plot of the protagonist entering the prehistoric times. It's just that the protagonist's early scenes are too few. The people and things around the protagonist are introduced at the beginning, and the supporting characters' personalities are more distinct and recognizable. I think some changes can be made appropriately in the front, so that the plot can advance faster.

The beginning is well written, the contrast between the characters is obvious, and the characterization is very good. It can be seen that the author is very careful.

The first three chapters of the novel are quite good with more details, but it requires a little patience to read. It is recommended to reduce the explanatory text and do more to promote the plot. There is some expectation for the plot of the Nine Days Secret Realm later on.

It's rare to see such novel novels on Tomato, and I feel very good about it. The characters are very good, the supporting characters are attractive, and the protagonist has no system, which is very good.

It's really good. This primordial novel is so interesting and the angle is very good. The supporting characters are well-cast, I like them quite a bit, and I was a bit surprised to see them in a Tomato novel. The plot behind it is okay and worth watching.

Feels like a novel angle The basis is to go against the world and fight for the Tao. How can the immortals and Buddhas in the world suppress people? Hunyuan Qi only responds to his heart, crushing the Emperor's blood-killing platform I hope that from beginning to end, this book will get better and better

The story is exciting, the scenes are grand and immersive, and it is a wonderful reading experience. Come on, go for it, go for it, and blast it.