80: the Original Wife Gave Away the White-Eyed Wolf's Adopted Son

Very good-looking [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile], women are bad people, men are good people [like] [like] [like] [like], it is not surprising that the author is a man [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] Author of the Unfinished Four Fengzi

So are Pei Jichuan and Pei Tiantian Pei Hai's [exploration]

It's good-looking, but the updates are a bit lacking, so it's not interesting enough. The author's book with Sinian as the heroine is also good-looking!

Overall, it was okay. Even the male and female protagonists were both silent, and the female protagonist was a bit irritating and didn't seem smart enough, but the overall story line was pretty good.

Structural thinking is clear, not mindless writing

It feels quite realistic. If the heroine had not been reborn, she would have died 800 times earlier.

The author writes well, but the updates are too slow. I followed another book of hers before, and now I am following this one [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's very interesting. Don't give up on the article.

The writing is pretty good, and unlike other rebirth novels, it makes your eyes light up. The male protagonist's biological mother is in the book, and the female supporting role is reborn. It's just that updates are too slow and too infrequent.

It's very good-looking, and it doesn't look like one-child-with-a-couple or "there's a lot of space." I'm really tired of this type of writing lately. The biggest shortcoming is that it's not over yet [grievance] [grievance], but I have an exam recently, so I can only read a little bit, take your time [laugh] [laugh] [laugh]

I want to see it, but there are too few! Why is the rating so low? It shouldn't be!

It looks good. Did the author change it and re-publish it? Different from what I saw before

The writing is good, but I just hope to study the background of the times and the economic situation at that time. Some of the products and contents of the era are somewhat inconsistent with the conditions of the times. Materials were really scarce at that time, with dozens of dollars a month. I still had a few dimes when I designed it for the principal of my kindergarten, and I still had 1 cent and 2 cents for 90. I hope the author will be more detailed about the background of the times when writing chronological articles in the future, and the writing style and characters can be improved.

Why not let the children know Zhou is their mother

It's okay, the subject matter is good, and the content is okay, but it's a bit like the male and female protagonists in old sadistic novels. Some things are just kept in the heart and not said, just for the other party to guess. As a netizen, I am very tired of guessing, so I can read it when I have nothing to do.

It's really good. Both the male and female protagonists are eloquent, and the content is neither incomprehensible nor procrastinating. [Thinking] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] I really like it

Keep up the good work, teacher, it looks good, you have to believe in yourself! ! ! !

Hello author, I am the parent of this account. Recently, my child has been refusing to eat or speak, nor is he angry at all. There is no expression on his face, but I found that he only smiles and seems angry when he is reading your novels. Later, I opened his mobile phone when he went to the toilet and found out that he has been reading your articles recently. I also found a critical illness notice under his pillow. His time is running out, and I can't do anything for him. The only thing I can do is to pray to the author for more 100,000 words. Isn't that too much? I hope you can spend his last days with him and not let him die regretfully. Please, and please appreciate a mother's love for her child. [Sending Hearts]

The plot is smooth and the characters are reasonable. In his previous life, Song Yan was manipulated by the plot like a puppet and worked as an old scalper to serve the two cubs. After he died from overwork, he was picked by a time-traveling woman. His own child lacked care and developed an autistic and paranoid character. He went wrong step by step and was sent to prison by his adopted son and husband and finally died tragically. The plot of his previous life was briefly written in one stroke. He only briefly described it. There was a lot of criticism of Song Yan in the book review area. I think it is unnecessary, there is no God's perspective, and I am a first-time mother and child. She is still an autistic child. Her husband has not been at home for five years and her husband's family has collectively suppressed her. In her previous life, she was unprepared and emptied her heart and soul to those two brats. She really neglected Xiaobao, so she came back and tried her best to compensate him in this life. It was absolutely right, but she was wrong. She was manipulated by the plot in her previous life, Zhou Qiao who designed everything, her greedy and vicious mother-in-law, and her husband who was silent and showed no concern for her in her previous life. In this life, she just wants to live her own life and strives to live everything well. This is good.

It looks good, although there was a misunderstanding at first. The female protagonist also hates the male protagonist because of the fan fiction. After the male protagonist comes back, he finds the truth, handles it rationally, and takes his own responsibility. If there is a misunderstanding, take the initiative to explain it to the heroine and prevent the misunderstanding from getting deeper. The male protagonist is quite good, but because of his environment and his weird mother, his previous life led to tragedy. But if the male protagonist is as scumbag as others have said, he won't be alone in his life. Looking forward to the story of a happy life for a family of three.

The title of the book is "The Adventures of Zhou Qiao Traveling Through Time" Mainly talking about: A girl named Zhou Qiao traveled back in time to a novel. With her familiarity with the plot of the story, she made a small investment in the original story's male protagonist and the female protagonist's childhood. When the plot developed, she married the male protagonist after the original female protagonist's death. She enjoyed the filial piety of the young male protagonist and the young female protagonist and became a winner in life; However, the original female protagonist wakes up and comes back, causing Zhou Qiao's series of schemes to be revealed. Knowing that she has no hope of marrying the male protagonist, Zhou Qiao hooks up with the male protagonist's rich second-generation colleague, hoping to fly up a branch and become a phoenix. Zhou Qiao fled after failing to hook up with a colleague of the original male protagonist to do business, and came back four years later to seek the filial piety of the young male protagonist and the young female protagonist. However, she did not know that the young male protagonist and the young female protagonist also relied on the upbringing of the original female protagonist in the book to develop. Therefore, the young female protagonist who entered the orphanage was brought to the former male protagonist and her colleagues to enjoy her wonderful time-travel life.

Why is the rating so low? The more I read, the better it gets. The author will update it soon.

I copied it from Si Nian's book, it's so good! The writing is really good! Looking forward to update soon~

The author knows how to make people angry, and how to write how to make people angry.

I support the author greatly for this article. I want to read it if I like it. It's good to read.

Please update quickly, I like it so much [shy][shy][shy]

I finished reading it in one go, and I am still a little bit unsatisfied. I hope the author will update it in time. The content is relatively ordinary and simple, and it is all about family affairs. It is a daily article, but the author's writing style is good, the overall main line is relatively clear, and there is a lot of foreshadowing. It is quite interesting to read. After reading the comment section, I realized that many people didn't like the heroine's character design, which is why the rating was so low. Well, I'm a straight man and I watched it with gusto. I don't know what to say.

It's written very realistically. The realistic feeling is the things around me, because they are so outrageous that they feel normal. Many people commented in the comment section about having no mouth. It's not a matter of talking or not talking at all. People who have not experienced it will not understand it at all. He seemed tired and helpless. Reality around you. My eldest uncle's house is so disgusting. Not long after my eldest brother got married, my eldest aunt told him that the couple was not allowed to work together. That's really how it happened. There are also serious rumors that my sister-in-law is stealing from people and doing all kinds of things, and even having babies outside. Still many years have passed. In the end, the two children were divorced, and the eldest was divorced when he was almost an adult. It is conceivable that this world is really not that easy.

This is the author's third book. The writing is very good and the language is concise. But why are all the evil villains in the book female? The second female lead, the second female lead's daughter, the male protagonist's mother, and the female protagonist's mother are all evil people. . When the heroine's parents got divorced, the author also wanted to say that divorced men have a hard time, and I don't know what their intentions are [face covering] [face covering]

There is no ending, the heroine is average, she relies on her own imagination to figure out everything, she loses her words, but the writing is good