Starting from Breaking Free from the Caged Bird, the Magic Transformation of Naruto Begins

Is it okay if the author hopes that the protagonist will get rid of the caged bird and then start killing? [Blowing kiss] That would be more satisfying. The author wants to go on a killing spree. Ah, I went on a killing spree. The main character is so frustrated.

Brothers, if you think something is wrong, point it out in the comment area and try to avoid it later.

It's very good-looking. I don't know how to write the rest of it. I feel like it will collapse if I don't write it well.

It doesn't feel like there's any conspiracy at all, I'm probably just taking revenge if I'm stronger.

Generally speaking, there is no problem, but the author should note that only those who have lost their bodies and those who have mastered the Yang Five Thunder can practice it. I hope the author will try to avoid pitfalls in the setting of Under One Person, and I hope that the author will not only add the exercises of Under One Person. Under one person, the young man is Yin, and some of the characteristics of the old man are shown, adding a little more character characteristics.

It's a good idea, don't think about it next time

I really don't want to poke it, I really don't want to poke it

Not bad ah ah ah

It's beautiful, why doesn't anyone watch it? Not bad but a bit broken at the back

It's well written, but the author could pay attention to typos. Overall, I like this one very much and recommend it to everyone. (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧