Those Years After Graduation

It's quite real, but I wish it could be divided into more paragraphs. One paragraph is still a bit too much. I hope the protagonist can quickly enter the officialdom, serve the people, and find a helpful female protagonist.

Why is it that in the novel, no matter who replies to others, the tone is very awkward, especially when the male protagonist invites the female protagonist out, and the female protagonist responds well, isn't it awkward? If you reply well, I feel more normal.

It doesn't feel engaging, it's a bit like a primary school composition🤦🤦🤦

Very good book, very true

It's so long-winded, I'm really convinced. It goes on and on. One thing can be said in just a few sentences, but you insist on a few chapters.

Very exciting, not impatient or impatient, very good