One Person: What a Loss! If You Can't Beat Me, Just Shake Him!

Overall, it's really good. The biggest question is why you want to add a real person into it. Seeing that Dong Chichi is particularly easy to cause drama, you can just write a fanfic of the original work or add some original characters. It seemed very enjoyable at first, but once I saw that name, I lost interest in reading it.

High-dimensional gods can't resist low-dimensional nuclear bombs. Why, bro, are your three-dimensional people afraid of two-dimensional attacks, that is, anime attacks? Can they hit you? You either have to change the outline again, or you can only take it off the shelves and rewrite it. Believe me, buddy, just the fear of damage from low-dimensional nuclear bombs when you increase the dimension can persuade a lot of people. Nuclear bombs are not as strong as you think, and all the nuclear bombs in the world combined cannot destroy the earth. One of the gods you wrote in is afraid of nuclear bombs.

On the surface, the protagonist looks calm and calm, but from the details, I feel that the protagonist is very impetuous in his bones. He does things in a hurry without considering the consequences. It is very in line with the personality of modern people, but he is not like a true practitioner and is still far from the realm of others.

How come you can't beat just one person when you're so high-ranking? It does seem a bit frustrating to watch. And the character Feng Baobao may be your own setting. But it's really unpleasant. When writing fan fiction, you still have to respect the setting of the original work. If you don't want to have a heroine, you can actually just write it without a heroine. Alas, here is a way to avoid thunder.

I originally thought the writing was okay, so why did I add a real-life Internet celebrity? You said that when he shows up, you can just be a passerby. You still insist on writing people with the same meaning, is that interesting? I won't tell you whether it's a drama or not when watching it. You ask a group of people who only watch anime and manga to watch the live-action version. It was already very promising, but what we imagined in our minds was the anime or manga version. During the scene, a real face suddenly popped up, and I wanted to ask the author, what were you thinking about?

Relying on the defense, the setting and imagination are very good, but the author's routines are very old-fashioned, and the writing is too poor. The protagonist seems to be very weak, but in fact no one can beat him. The moves are obviously not strong, but they are useless after one or two uses. The protagonist's character is too dry and wretched. After two years of meditation and self-cultivation on Mount Tai, have you eaten? In order to gain popularity, adding a real-life character is even more outrageous. It seems nondescript and a proper work for junior high school students.

It's hard to evaluate after reading the introduction. Why is the protagonist so popular? Nonono, the protagonist is very strenuous even playing a supporting role. He is both good and pretentious. He shouts that he has no money while giving basically all the money he has to a female anchor who has only met once. And if you look at the introduction, it is said that this and that are very popular. It is not at all. The person who announces does not listen to the protagonist's orders, and it is also very unreasonable.

A very good book. I really like reading it.

1. The setting of gods. Gods are just powerful aliens. It's just that the world can't bear the rising latitude. Well done. The world can't bear the power and can't withstand nuclear bombs. 2. I don't know what the use of adding Dong Chichi is. 3. The protagonist's temperament after two years of training in Mount Tai is not as good as that of ordinary people. 4. Skills, what's the use of that Xuan Lei? It always misses people. If it does hit, it doesn't cause any damage. It's just a matter of praying to the gods. Others are average

As a god who cannot withstand the world and must ascend, he cannot withstand nuclear bombs, so he randomly changes the original plot and character settings, and adding a real character into it is a big show, and the setting is greedy for money. Just for a female anchor, you can earn tens of millions. You are so awesome in the main role. You are either this god or that god. In the end, no one can beat you. What is this if it's not shit?

Come on, author! Come on, author!

I can't beat anyone with my strength. And he still likes to wander around.

There is no other reason. When I started watching it, I just watched it because I saw the protagonist cultivating himself in Mount Tai. And you said that the protagonist can gain experience by going through the Luotian Dajiao, the Qinling Incident, and the Nason Island Incident. But author, have you ever thought about one thing? The protagonist has not yet had time to experience. The protagonist has only been practicing qi for a few months, and then he goes out. This is the same as asking a 6-year-old child to serve as a soldier. You will only do this if you have no choice. I don't think the protagonist is forced to do so. Besides, he has his own tribulations. If the protagonist lives a life without incident and is normal, then it is the protagonist's own life and his own tribulations. Rather than actively contacting other people's tribulations, there is no benefit in this.

If it's not the girl in the drama, it's better not to have a heroine, otherwise it will be too dramatic and I won't be able to watch it! ! !

Let's talk about the cons! It's all broken, and then you tell me there is no God? As for the author's contradictory explanations, it's hard for me to understand. Also, the author has gone too far with the characters and plot details of one person. Feng Baobao practices old peasant skills...? In my opinion, the essence of being under a person is to seek out immortals or figure out what immortals or gods are. However, the author tells you that there is no such thing [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

"Although we are going to a higher latitude space, we are still essentially human beings, we just live longer than ordinary people. Therefore, even if it is regarded as a god, it cannot withstand a nuclear attack. " This is the original text. I can only say that it is so powerful. Even gods can't stop a nuclear strike. Where did the protagonist's system find gods?

The protagonist is so weak that he has already passed two moves with Feng Baobao, and he has passed five moves. I don't know what to think after reading more than ten chapters. What is the use of the sitting Lei besides chopping wood and setting fire to it? I just hid so casually.

Haha, if I report you for writing something pornographic, I will make you feel uncomfortable all over if you report it. If you don't write pornography, you can't write it? Moreover, even if God has written it, he also forcibly lowers the protagonist who can defeat him. If his combat power is low, he forcibly raises it to give you essence, blood and skills. The summary is just vulgar.

The setting feels like it was written casually. You, a high-dimensional god, are still afraid of low-dimensional nuclear bombs. I'm speechless [smile]

God is the first one to be so weak. He couldn't beat Xia He. He couldn't beat Zhang Lingyu. He couldn't beat Feng Baobao. He beat half of the zombies summoned by the exorcist girl. He couldn't beat Feng Baobao. When he joined the company, his salary was 20,000 a month. Half of his salary was deducted on the first day. Then he deducted his salary whenever he had nothing to do. He raised his salary when nothing happened. Then he scolded the protagonist whenever something bad happened. He trained the protagonist like a dog. After reading this article, I deeply realized that he has no ability in real life. Then the jobber who gets sprayed all day long

After reading many of the author's books, I felt a sense of loss. This is one of the few books that I have read, and another one gave me the same feeling as this one. My evaluation only has ten words

Good-looking and good-looking. This is the first time I have read a book about Dong Hyuk

It's quite interesting. The protagonist's character, spouse, and skills are all good. Come on

I have no intention of quitting after joining the company.

Let's give it a perfect score. No wonder it's only five points. I can only say that the three gods didn't kill one of them in an instant! Three gods

I came up with an idea myself, but I haven't seen anyone write it yet. Is there anyone who wants to give it a try? One-person super beast armed series

Very good, well written

It's really classic.

Very good, keep up the hard work

It's an encouragement, otherwise I'd give it one star.