Star Iron: the Mysterious Star God Connects the Multiverse

So far it's pretty good, but some parts of the plot need to be improved. There are also some settings for ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑, and overall they are a bit sparse. And Sambo, I feel that his personal strength should be stronger. Because if Sambo wants to get from Arilo to the Luofu Fairy Boat, he must have the ability to cross the star sea, or he can hide from Walter and Jizi on the train until they get off. Not even Kafka noticed it. (This is related to a little easter egg in Sambo, which is available on Luofu. For details, you can go to the strategy anchor.)

Come on, author, I like this kind of book. It is shocking but not too mindless. But I hope the author can control the combat power well. Sambo and Silver Branch are both unfathomable and have the strength to fight against giant insects. It is reasonable for them to have such strong monsters among their warriors. But for characters like Seele and Bronya, I hope you don't strengthen them too much. Be reasonable and don't praise Destiny all the time. The upper limit of Destiny is extremely high, but the lower limit is not too high. Even a Destiny character can defeat S-level weirdness. There also seems to be something wrong with Yin Zhi, whose name should be more neutral. He appears on stage and performs his classic complimentary scenes.

It is reasonable for the author to give himself a good review. Regarding combat power, can you please stop reading the first few chapters and just say this is wrong and that is wrong [laughing and crying]. We can't directly write the boss behind the scenes. Then read novels? It just depends on the settings. Say it in a different way. I didn't even look back, I really lost my temper.

The writing is okay, but the characters are too OOC. It is actually more appropriate to assign Sambo's paragraph to Silver. Although Joy respects the beauty of human nature, it does not emphasize it so much. Sambo's nobility will only be reflected in doing what he can, and there is no such thing as taking risks.

Authors, please be careful, don't accidentally get your book blocked (›´ω`‹)

It's like eating pork rib soup and boiling yuanxiao Give me one more star because the author is a newbie.

Very good, but the author has a small wish, which is to punch Yingjiang and step on the footbath. Can this be realized?

Come on, author, there are people

Come on, come on, come on [send heart]

Woof woof woof woof woof king, woof woof woof.

Is the visual meat really that powerful? There is a dish called stir-fried visual meat with sugar balls. It says that the visual meat has been eaten to extinction🤔

Okay, okay, I know why. I don't dare to give you a bad review, so I'll give you four stars.

Not bad, this type of writing is very good

Looks good, and my friend, you are the real guardian star god [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's great. It's great to write those horrific details [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The quality of the content is guaranteed, and the author has a strong desire to survive and spreads the law in every chapter.

Not bad, I like watching it

Why isn't there a star core hunter?

Come on! Father of truth, I love you!

I give the author a good review, which is reasonable.