[Quest Volume King Ni Yangzhou*Loyal Dog Chasing His Wife Affectionately] [1v1] [Double Cleansing]
If you enter an unfinished novel to advance the plot and complete the tasks, you will get a healthy body. Ni Yangzhou, who died in a car accident, is struggling to follow the main plot, but he meets that familiar person in a different world.
The first world - youth campus, school bully * academic bully (involving supernatural powers·completed)
The second world - alternate history, Taoist priest*prince (involving rebirth·completed)
The third world - survival in the apocalypse, Golden Finger*Relationship (completed)
The fourth world - fantasy cultivation, apprentice*master (completed)
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Shou worked diligently to complete his tasks, while Gong chased his wife miserably.
Note: Welcome to catch bugs, you can direct Aite to the author, thank you all.
Reader comments
I really like it. How can I put it? It stands out from the general public in tomatoes.
Most of the stories are very interesting, the characters are no longer flat plot promoters, everyone has flesh and blood, and the system is no longer a useless tool or the protagonist's admiration, but more like MOSS in The Wandering Earth, which has always maintained its core concept. At the same time, there are some high-quality and interesting concepts in the story, which are worth reading. [Thinking]
Good book, teacher, I hope you can keep writing it. No matter how slowly you take your time, please continue to add your own flesh and blood to it according to your wishes, so that it can continue to bloom with color. (This book is the only one I have commented on the most. I'm sorry, teacher, it feels a bit verbose, but it's really touching. I hope the teacher can keep writing)
There are a lot of interesting souls and plots in the story, and there is no shortage of fireworks. No deletions or deletions will be made without spoiling the story🤣.
The plot is not sluggish and the characters are full-bodied. It is a breath of fresh air among many double-male protagonists. Shou is not a squeamish person, does not have milk burps, is not delicate and frail, and does not have feelings for Gong without knowing it. When it comes to attacking, he takes the initiative to hit the ball straight, and his personality is great. (No compulsion, right? Not sure, judging from the current plot) If you don't like the above opinions, don't criticize them.
All in all, go see  ̄  ̄)σ
Although it was already finished when I read it, I still want to comment on it (it involves spoilers, so those who don't want to read it can skip ⌯oᴗo⌯). This article is very interesting, but I just read Doomsday and haven't finished it yet. I think the characters in each of the previous worlds are very well-developed. The youth of the classmates in the first world is really enthusiastic, and the personality of the neighbor's grandmother is also very distinctive. This place's The foreshadowing is really good, but the boy Meng Ting chases after his wife is a bit pitiful. The reborn prince in the second world finally repeats the struggle and confusion when he died. It is well shaped and vivid, breaking away from the outline and becoming a real and emotional prince. He will do whatever it takes to achieve the goal. Moreover, in this ancient world, DaDa describes clothing, utensils and food. I feel that DaDa's writing style is really good and very stable! There are also female characters in it, each of which has its own ideas and energy. The squad leader, Kang Kang, Mu Ying, Zhuang Ling and her daughter, and the female driver who transferred to City Y after hearing Zhou Zhou's words at the gate of the Black Dragon Base (I haven't read it yet, I think there should be more) all have their own personalities and purposes. It's really exciting („• ֊ •„)੭, so I think the author is really great, and his writing style is awesome! ! ! The rating should not be only 7, it should not be inferior to the 9-point article at all. Come on, this article will definitely become popular! ! !
Five-star recommendation! ! At first, I was only attracted by the plot of the separate world, but the further I read, the more I was amazed by the teacher's plot design! I can't wait to scream loudly: Yuan! Come! Yes! This! Sample!
Zhouzhou's character is very three-dimensional, cheerful, tenacious, firm, confident... He truly embodies the word "love", whether it is for his master, his friends or relatively strangers from a "different world", he is very cute and I like it so much! !
Master's character design is very good after reading the whole book! There is no sense that the "sliced" and the master who remembered everything are separate individuals. It is him from the beginning to the end, the one who silently accompanies Zhouzhou, the one who is affected by Zhouzhou's words and deeds, the clumsy one, the painful one, the one who loves Zhouzhou... Yanzhou 99! ! (Biting handkerchief)
From the beginning, except for the last few chapters, which are a bit lengthy and should be skipped quickly, the narrative throughout is smooth and logical, and the teacher's writing style is very strong! It's so fun to watch!
After seeing 250, I jumped around and read some more. I think it's now considered double clean, although it's hard to say whether it's clean or not in the quick travel text... The attack and reception are clear by default.
I can't read the rest of it. I'll read it again when I get a chance.
The plot and the emotional line should each account for half, and there will be more emotional lines in the later stage. The line of love is a long and thin stream, and there are copies of different timelines
In addition, the output point will be very obvious
Original text
(It wasn't until I was woken up by the young man's kiss in the middle of the night that I realized that I had lost my first kiss countless times.)
——
Off-topic: I didn't expect so few people to read it, but a lot of people read some unspeakable novels
The ABO copy of more than 400 chapters is quite different from the previous type. It is a multi-person Shura field. You have to marry and divorce others (referring to the scumbag). The scumbag will covet the target, such as scratching the glands with his teeth and injecting pheromones.
However, this kind of copy is the norm in most fast-travel novels ()
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I've finished reading the first world. It's a little twisty. It's really good to read, although it's a little sharp at the end... Zanzhouzhou is very cute [blowing kiss] and when will the protagonists get together? I'd like to see it and post it [sending heartfelt wishes]
The relationship between Meng Ting and the male protagonist in the first mission made me cry to death [almost crying]
Found a treasure
It is very beautiful, the water flows slowly, and is very warm. It is a rare good book, worthy of a 10-point and five-star evaluation. I don't know why it is rated 6.9. In fact, I will not read a book with a score lower than about 8. It is fate to encounter this book [Sending Hearts]
The human nature is described very well in many details, and it feels like it doesn't belong in a tomato 🍅
Many of the texts and comments in the comment area are very good and can be called excellent. I only read part of it for about three months. I don't know what will happen next. If you want to follow up after reading it, please do so [Sending my heart]
There was a stinky smell in the house. I searched for a long time but couldn't find the reason. Until at a certain moment, I discovered that my moldy dreams and my rotten ideals were hidden in the pillow. I searched under the bed and found a body. It turned out to be my young self.
I really need someone like this. People like me who don't know what they like or want really need someone who understands my reservations and obscurities, understands my hesitancy to speak, understands my difficulty in speaking, and loves me firmly.
Last but not least, hello friends of 25 years [sending heartfelt wishes]
Why is it so beautiful? I have never seen such a wonderful novel. I read it three times all night long. The writing is excellent, the plot is excellent, the emotional flow is full of characters, the world view is rich, the light and dark lines are intertwined, the two loving souls are tightly entangled, and the love is strong. Several scripts in the later world are also very well written. I have read a few of them in the novel. It feels like a shrink-wrap novel, hahaha. It's really good, but not many people think it, and the ratings are not that high. I'm so moved and I like such a great novel. I don't have much ink and can't write any profound words of praise. The author's writing is great. I'm so happy to see such a novel [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]
The writing is very good and the plot surprised me, but it was too depressing.
The overall structure of the writing is clear and the character settings are very realistic [Thoughts]
It's really good-looking, and it's a fast-paced novel that suits my taste. I really like the lively, cheerful, and righteous character. The system in it is also very cute [sending my heart]. The character design of Tao is also very touching, and the relationship between the two of them is also very well written. Each story unit inside is also very interesting. Was the first World Attacker reborn once? I don't know much about this, or did they know each other in the real world?
In short, there is a lot of foreshadowing, and I am looking forward to the story behind it. Also, I also like [Sending Hearts] in the world of immortality recently, and I look forward to the development of their love line [Admiration], and the tasks they receive.
A book that definitely deserves full marks! I hope this article will reach nine points soon! The author is very attentive to the portrayal of each character in each world, without any perfunctory or stereotypes. The plot unfolds at a comfortable pace, and the puzzles are also written very clearly. I, who need to take notes when reading criminal investigation novels, can understand everything on the first read! There are no particularly blunt assists or the kind of offside discussion of the relationship between the two, which I would like to particularly praise.
The contrasting timelines are particularly creative, and you are my past and I am your future are particularly delicious! It should obviously be a missed fate, and the feeling of overlapping again due to the love of two people, if one of them doesn't love so firmly, it will be, but do they both love each other so much! And there is no particularly greasy or oily feeling, a very refreshing young couple, the interaction is just right, not at all spoiled and domineering, and the master has a feeling of a black edge flickering, if he crosses the line, he is a male ghost, if not, he is a loyal dog, this man jumps back and forth on both sides of the line ()
The proportion of the plot line and the emotional line is just right. I have no desire to skip it as I read it. I really read it word by word. Although the last few notebooks about the actor line are obviously the ones that the teacher wanted to write but didn't have the energy to write, but they are also very delicious😋While eating, I was still thinking about this. It's really hard to write about fast travel hahaha
Especially good at writing suspense reasoning! Every time when several lines are put together to tell the truth, I feel like I have been opened up to the two channels of Ren and Du. Teacher, you must continue to write! ! !
I forgot to mention our Yangzhou. Yangzhou has really seen a few people who can bear the title of Yangjiao. They live up to other people's feelings, their expectations, and others themselves. They can firmly embark on the path of their own choice, and they can be cheerful, eloquent, and focused. Kindness, calmness, intelligence and decisiveness are integrated into one. It is recommended that all the characters in Yangzhou come to learn from us in Yangzhou how to be real Yangzhou, instead of blindly dissociating emotions, blindly straight men who don't know how to give, and blindly engage in abstraction. Without these, they can also create good characters and good friends.
Yangzhou, everyone will really like it
Not bad, the author keeps up the good work. [Sending Hearts]
The first world is too single-minded and difficult to settle [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Come on, the author, the writing is great [love][love][love][love][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][cry][cry][cry]
My wife's writing style is very unique. When I read the first world, I felt like I was talking about weird rules hahh
Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! Can you write a sweet side story about the first world? I really want to see it! ! ! !
Why such a low score? Is it because there are too few people watching? The plot is very exciting, the writing is very good and very interesting. It is not boring even though it is so long. I really want to know the plot behind it. Don't give up on the article, please keep working hard! Recommended to watch! ! !
The capital writing is really great [attention] [attention] [full] [full], a lot of foreshadowing, not cliché and very original, I like it very much [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]
Why are so few people reading this book? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I really hope more people can read this book [Note]
Meng Ting, who loves the first world the most, really poked me [I almost cried]
The writing in capital letters is really great (the suspenseful part in capital letters is really impressive). I'll see the updated part right away. I can't bear to part with it [crying]
The rating of this book is really low! ! The article is very interesting, but I don't know why it is so low-priced. If the introduction and characters weren't so attractive, it would have been easily missed! ! I have only watched the first small world so far, so I will comment on the cheer points first. The writing style is very mature, with the kind of plain narrative style of an honest person, and the foreshadowing is just right. When you read it, you don't feel too deliberate. When you follow it later, you can still think of the foreshadowing. This was handled really perfectly. Just looking at the characters in the first world seems very three-dimensional. Then there is the plot. I completely followed the protagonist's ideas. I originally thought it was Yan, then I thought it was Min, then I thought it was Yan, and finally I found out it was Yangzhou. It was very confusing (maybe I have no brains myself). Every important node is written in detail, and the details are handled very well. The plot is also connected naturally, and I don't feel out of place at all. Finally, I still have to say that this rating is too low! ! ! The book is really beautiful! ! ! !
I've finished watching it, it's great, I love watching it. The score should not be so low at all………… Come and see…………
The writing is really good. It is different from other fast-traveling genres. However, it is very uncomfortable to have no title in the table of contents. I don't know where to go. It is a small world. It is considered a slow-traveling book. The characters and life are written very delicately. Come on, I hope the author will write the table of contents title next time.
I'm about to read the end. First of all, let me say that the rating of this book must be at least 9.5. The writing style is sophisticated and fluent, the plot is also very good, the overall rhythm is very appropriate, and the protagonist's character setting is nothing to say. I was really touched when I bought this book recently 😢😢 (Spoilers included) The only thing I feel about it so far is that the relationship between two people in the third world breaks through is not handled very naturally. It would be perfect with more writing. The first and second worlds have always been entangled, and I personally feel that the third world has come a little too fast. But the flaws are not concealed, the overall emotional line is very smooth! Good reviews🥺🥺🥺
Nice! I originally just watched it to see what it was like, but I was immediately attracted to it. The plot is coherent and the writing is also good.
I suspect that the author was manipulated by capital. Such a beautiful book has a rating of only 7 points [crying].
The characters under attack are all super full and rich [like], I really like Ni Yangzhou, he is really smart and brave [like], so healthy!
It's nice to read [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts], it's wonderfully written, the writing style is humorous, and the ideas and ideas are relatively clear (I like [Send Hearts] very much). It's different from other fast-traveling novels I've read before. It has a feeling of stepping out of the norm (it's a small world) As far as the plot in it is concerned, the plot is complete, has a beginning and an end, but is not procrastinating [thinking]), but maybe the ending is a bit rushed, either it is not complete enough, or it is a bit unfinished after reading it [laughing], I wonder if there will be any extras. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Another point is that the rating of this book is so low. Why is it only 7.0? For such a beautiful book, it should be rated 9 or above [Thinking]. Fortunately, Tomato recommended it to me when I was listening to the book. I was attracted by the author's writing style.
The author writes very well.
I actually don't think much about characters like Little Sun as the protagonist. If it's not well written, it will be weird and fake. But it's very interesting! The plot is also good
Beautiful, super exciting! Combining multiple elements, wow wow wow it's so attractive!
I really like it. How can I put it? It stands out from the general public in tomatoes. Most of the stories are very interesting, the characters are no longer flat plot promoters, everyone has flesh and blood, and the system is no longer a useless tool or the protagonist's admiration, but more like MOSS in The Wandering Earth, which has always maintained its core concept. At the same time, there are some high-quality and interesting concepts in the story, which are worth reading. [Thinking] Good book, teacher, I hope you can keep writing it. No matter how slowly you take your time, please continue to add your own flesh and blood to it according to your wishes, so that it can continue to bloom with color. (This book is the only one I have commented on the most. I'm sorry, teacher, it feels a bit verbose, but it's really touching. I hope the teacher can keep writing) There are a lot of interesting souls and plots in the story, and there is no shortage of fireworks. No deletions or deletions will be made without spoiling the story🤣.
The plot is not sluggish and the characters are full-bodied. It is a breath of fresh air among many double-male protagonists. Shou is not a squeamish person, does not have milk burps, is not delicate and frail, and does not have feelings for Gong without knowing it. When it comes to attacking, he takes the initiative to hit the ball straight, and his personality is great. (No compulsion, right? Not sure, judging from the current plot) If you don't like the above opinions, don't criticize them. All in all, go see  ̄  ̄)σ
Although it was already finished when I read it, I still want to comment on it (it involves spoilers, so those who don't want to read it can skip ⌯oᴗo⌯). This article is very interesting, but I just read Doomsday and haven't finished it yet. I think the characters in each of the previous worlds are very well-developed. The youth of the classmates in the first world is really enthusiastic, and the personality of the neighbor's grandmother is also very distinctive. This place's The foreshadowing is really good, but the boy Meng Ting chases after his wife is a bit pitiful. The reborn prince in the second world finally repeats the struggle and confusion when he died. It is well shaped and vivid, breaking away from the outline and becoming a real and emotional prince. He will do whatever it takes to achieve the goal. Moreover, in this ancient world, DaDa describes clothing, utensils and food. I feel that DaDa's writing style is really good and very stable! There are also female characters in it, each of which has its own ideas and energy. The squad leader, Kang Kang, Mu Ying, Zhuang Ling and her daughter, and the female driver who transferred to City Y after hearing Zhou Zhou's words at the gate of the Black Dragon Base (I haven't read it yet, I think there should be more) all have their own personalities and purposes. It's really exciting („• ֊ •„)੭, so I think the author is really great, and his writing style is awesome! ! ! The rating should not be only 7, it should not be inferior to the 9-point article at all. Come on, this article will definitely become popular! ! !
Five-star recommendation! ! At first, I was only attracted by the plot of the separate world, but the further I read, the more I was amazed by the teacher's plot design! I can't wait to scream loudly: Yuan! Come! Yes! This! Sample! Zhouzhou's character is very three-dimensional, cheerful, tenacious, firm, confident... He truly embodies the word "love", whether it is for his master, his friends or relatively strangers from a "different world", he is very cute and I like it so much! ! Master's character design is very good after reading the whole book! There is no sense that the "sliced" and the master who remembered everything are separate individuals. It is him from the beginning to the end, the one who silently accompanies Zhouzhou, the one who is affected by Zhouzhou's words and deeds, the clumsy one, the painful one, the one who loves Zhouzhou... Yanzhou 99! ! (Biting handkerchief) From the beginning, except for the last few chapters, which are a bit lengthy and should be skipped quickly, the narrative throughout is smooth and logical, and the teacher's writing style is very strong! It's so fun to watch!
After seeing 250, I jumped around and read some more. I think it's now considered double clean, although it's hard to say whether it's clean or not in the quick travel text... The attack and reception are clear by default. I can't read the rest of it. I'll read it again when I get a chance. The plot and the emotional line should each account for half, and there will be more emotional lines in the later stage. The line of love is a long and thin stream, and there are copies of different timelines In addition, the output point will be very obvious Original text (It wasn't until I was woken up by the young man's kiss in the middle of the night that I realized that I had lost my first kiss countless times.) —— Off-topic: I didn't expect so few people to read it, but a lot of people read some unspeakable novels The ABO copy of more than 400 chapters is quite different from the previous type. It is a multi-person Shura field. You have to marry and divorce others (referring to the scumbag). The scumbag will covet the target, such as scratching the glands with his teeth and injecting pheromones. However, this kind of copy is the norm in most fast-travel novels ()
Come on! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It's pretty cool! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ●●~~O(∩_∩)O~~
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I've finished reading the first world. It's a little twisty. It's really good to read, although it's a little sharp at the end... Zanzhouzhou is very cute [blowing kiss] and when will the protagonists get together? I'd like to see it and post it [sending heartfelt wishes]
The relationship between Meng Ting and the male protagonist in the first mission made me cry to death [almost crying]
Found a treasure
It is very beautiful, the water flows slowly, and is very warm. It is a rare good book, worthy of a 10-point and five-star evaluation. I don't know why it is rated 6.9. In fact, I will not read a book with a score lower than about 8. It is fate to encounter this book [Sending Hearts] The human nature is described very well in many details, and it feels like it doesn't belong in a tomato 🍅 Many of the texts and comments in the comment area are very good and can be called excellent. I only read part of it for about three months. I don't know what will happen next. If you want to follow up after reading it, please do so [Sending my heart] There was a stinky smell in the house. I searched for a long time but couldn't find the reason. Until at a certain moment, I discovered that my moldy dreams and my rotten ideals were hidden in the pillow. I searched under the bed and found a body. It turned out to be my young self. I really need someone like this. People like me who don't know what they like or want really need someone who understands my reservations and obscurities, understands my hesitancy to speak, understands my difficulty in speaking, and loves me firmly. Last but not least, hello friends of 25 years [sending heartfelt wishes]
Why is it so beautiful? I have never seen such a wonderful novel. I read it three times all night long. The writing is excellent, the plot is excellent, the emotional flow is full of characters, the world view is rich, the light and dark lines are intertwined, the two loving souls are tightly entangled, and the love is strong. Several scripts in the later world are also very well written. I have read a few of them in the novel. It feels like a shrink-wrap novel, hahaha. It's really good, but not many people think it, and the ratings are not that high. I'm so moved and I like such a great novel. I don't have much ink and can't write any profound words of praise. The author's writing is great. I'm so happy to see such a novel [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]
The writing is very good and the plot surprised me, but it was too depressing.
The overall structure of the writing is clear and the character settings are very realistic [Thoughts]
It's really good-looking, and it's a fast-paced novel that suits my taste. I really like the lively, cheerful, and righteous character. The system in it is also very cute [sending my heart]. The character design of Tao is also very touching, and the relationship between the two of them is also very well written. Each story unit inside is also very interesting. Was the first World Attacker reborn once? I don't know much about this, or did they know each other in the real world? In short, there is a lot of foreshadowing, and I am looking forward to the story behind it. Also, I also like [Sending Hearts] in the world of immortality recently, and I look forward to the development of their love line [Admiration], and the tasks they receive.
A book that definitely deserves full marks! I hope this article will reach nine points soon! The author is very attentive to the portrayal of each character in each world, without any perfunctory or stereotypes. The plot unfolds at a comfortable pace, and the puzzles are also written very clearly. I, who need to take notes when reading criminal investigation novels, can understand everything on the first read! There are no particularly blunt assists or the kind of offside discussion of the relationship between the two, which I would like to particularly praise. The contrasting timelines are particularly creative, and you are my past and I am your future are particularly delicious! It should obviously be a missed fate, and the feeling of overlapping again due to the love of two people, if one of them doesn't love so firmly, it will be, but do they both love each other so much! And there is no particularly greasy or oily feeling, a very refreshing young couple, the interaction is just right, not at all spoiled and domineering, and the master has a feeling of a black edge flickering, if he crosses the line, he is a male ghost, if not, he is a loyal dog, this man jumps back and forth on both sides of the line () The proportion of the plot line and the emotional line is just right. I have no desire to skip it as I read it. I really read it word by word. Although the last few notebooks about the actor line are obviously the ones that the teacher wanted to write but didn't have the energy to write, but they are also very delicious😋While eating, I was still thinking about this. It's really hard to write about fast travel hahaha Especially good at writing suspense reasoning! Every time when several lines are put together to tell the truth, I feel like I have been opened up to the two channels of Ren and Du. Teacher, you must continue to write! ! ! I forgot to mention our Yangzhou. Yangzhou has really seen a few people who can bear the title of Yangjiao. They live up to other people's feelings, their expectations, and others themselves. They can firmly embark on the path of their own choice, and they can be cheerful, eloquent, and focused. Kindness, calmness, intelligence and decisiveness are integrated into one. It is recommended that all the characters in Yangzhou come to learn from us in Yangzhou how to be real Yangzhou, instead of blindly dissociating emotions, blindly straight men who don't know how to give, and blindly engage in abstraction. Without these, they can also create good characters and good friends. Yangzhou, everyone will really like it
Not bad, the author keeps up the good work. [Sending Hearts]
The first world is too single-minded and difficult to settle [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Come on, the author, the writing is great [love][love][love][love][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][cry][cry][cry]
My wife's writing style is very unique. When I read the first world, I felt like I was talking about weird rules hahh
Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! Can you write a sweet side story about the first world? I really want to see it! ! ! !
Why such a low score? Is it because there are too few people watching? The plot is very exciting, the writing is very good and very interesting. It is not boring even though it is so long. I really want to know the plot behind it. Don't give up on the article, please keep working hard! Recommended to watch! ! !
The capital writing is really great [attention] [attention] [full] [full], a lot of foreshadowing, not cliché and very original, I like it very much [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] Why are so few people reading this book? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I really hope more people can read this book [Note] Meng Ting, who loves the first world the most, really poked me [I almost cried] The writing in capital letters is really great (the suspenseful part in capital letters is really impressive). I'll see the updated part right away. I can't bear to part with it [crying]
The rating of this book is really low! ! The article is very interesting, but I don't know why it is so low-priced. If the introduction and characters weren't so attractive, it would have been easily missed! ! I have only watched the first small world so far, so I will comment on the cheer points first. The writing style is very mature, with the kind of plain narrative style of an honest person, and the foreshadowing is just right. When you read it, you don't feel too deliberate. When you follow it later, you can still think of the foreshadowing. This was handled really perfectly. Just looking at the characters in the first world seems very three-dimensional. Then there is the plot. I completely followed the protagonist's ideas. I originally thought it was Yan, then I thought it was Min, then I thought it was Yan, and finally I found out it was Yangzhou. It was very confusing (maybe I have no brains myself). Every important node is written in detail, and the details are handled very well. The plot is also connected naturally, and I don't feel out of place at all. Finally, I still have to say that this rating is too low! ! ! The book is really beautiful! ! ! ! I've finished watching it, it's great, I love watching it. The score should not be so low at all………… Come and see…………
The writing is really good. It is different from other fast-traveling genres. However, it is very uncomfortable to have no title in the table of contents. I don't know where to go. It is a small world. It is considered a slow-traveling book. The characters and life are written very delicately. Come on, I hope the author will write the table of contents title next time.
I'm about to read the end. First of all, let me say that the rating of this book must be at least 9.5. The writing style is sophisticated and fluent, the plot is also very good, the overall rhythm is very appropriate, and the protagonist's character setting is nothing to say. I was really touched when I bought this book recently 😢😢 (Spoilers included) The only thing I feel about it so far is that the relationship between two people in the third world breaks through is not handled very naturally. It would be perfect with more writing. The first and second worlds have always been entangled, and I personally feel that the third world has come a little too fast. But the flaws are not concealed, the overall emotional line is very smooth! Good reviews🥺🥺🥺
Nice! I originally just watched it to see what it was like, but I was immediately attracted to it. The plot is coherent and the writing is also good.
I suspect that the author was manipulated by capital. Such a beautiful book has a rating of only 7 points [crying]. The characters under attack are all super full and rich [like], I really like Ni Yangzhou, he is really smart and brave [like], so healthy!
It's nice to read [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts], it's wonderfully written, the writing style is humorous, and the ideas and ideas are relatively clear (I like [Send Hearts] very much). It's different from other fast-traveling novels I've read before. It has a feeling of stepping out of the norm (it's a small world) As far as the plot in it is concerned, the plot is complete, has a beginning and an end, but is not procrastinating [thinking]), but maybe the ending is a bit rushed, either it is not complete enough, or it is a bit unfinished after reading it [laughing], I wonder if there will be any extras. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Another point is that the rating of this book is so low. Why is it only 7.0? For such a beautiful book, it should be rated 9 or above [Thinking]. Fortunately, Tomato recommended it to me when I was listening to the book. I was attracted by the author's writing style.
The author writes very well. I actually don't think much about characters like Little Sun as the protagonist. If it's not well written, it will be weird and fake. But it's very interesting! The plot is also good
Beautiful, super exciting! Combining multiple elements, wow wow wow it's so attractive!