Are You There? Do You Have Time to Destroy the World?

Needless to say, Sister Jing's level in Tomato is certainly top notch, if not top notch. I actually fell in love with Sister Jing after being recommended by a friend, and I am really lucky. I won't say much about the previous one, it's the best among the best. This one does not follow the traditional Honkai plot development, but directly creates an original world. The development of the plot is also unpredictable and depends entirely on Sister Jing's ideas. All I can say is that she is worthy of Sister Jing. Her writing style is both relaxed and depressing at the same time. It feels so good. Please give me more "candy" (knife), I can eat it! (Serene) Compared to the previous Zhijie book, I feel that this one is closer to Honkai Impact II, a bit like the Fire Chaser Moth chapter. Realism cloaked in romanticism. "Although our lives are as fragile as moths in this doomsday, moths flying blindly into the flame will only sacrifice their lives in vain. We chase hope, and we understand the value of life, so we cherish the family around us more, so we want to live. Chasing the flame of hope and cherishing the 'little bits' now, this is the meaning of our existence as 'moths chasing fire'." This style of searching for the faint light in the bottomless darkness is really similar... Dawn, the moment when dawn comes, the moment when darkness dissipates, but how long will this darkness last? How many sacrifices will be made in the darkness? Who knows? (There are so many people in the group, why are there so few book reviews? Little mirror, doesn't it have any majesty at all [smirk] female mirror ~ Come on ~) 2024.10.4

It's great, there are many twists and turns, and the type is also novel among Honkai fanfics. From what other readers said, the author seems to be a big shot, with a guaranteed bottom line and three elements of Honkai Impact and Honkai Impact. I'm so excited!

Reading suggestions: Appreciate carefully with your brain [laughing] Type: non-invincible text Personal feelings: This is by far the most "Honkai" fanfic on Tomato. Unlike most fanfics that fight for the sake of knives, this one really has the feeling of the despair and beauty of Honkai San intertwined. Whether it's the protagonist group struggling to survive in a collapsing world in the first few volumes (paying homage to the legendary car, killing Xu three times alone [sneaky laugh]), or the passionate combination of Xu Shu and Otto when facing the prison, or the despair when first seeing memories, the powerlessness when facing the horizon, or even the collision of "process" and "result" when facing desire (Gu Chu: so? What about me?), No matter which volume it is, it is said to be at least the T1 level of fan fiction on Tomato. In addition to the characterization of major events and main characters, the portrayal of other supporting characters (in volumes 2, 3, 5, 6, and 7) is also top-notch. Yunmengxi, who collides with reality and ideals, and Wahe, who denies what he has learned all his life, abandons the beautiful life in the future city and chooses to go to war. The fiery John and others, the thoughtful Rita, Bianca who is full of curiosity about the world, and the trapped Frilly... Whether they are the protagonist or the supporting role, they can make people feel that they are flesh-and-blood "people" rather than tools to promote the development of the plot. Of course, it would be better if the ending that is currently hanging in the balance is a good ending [cool] I promise that I will lead everyone to create a beautiful world! No one is missing, including you! ! ! "In despair, we see the light" "In the midst of collapse, we see beauty."

It's something I've never seen in fan fiction, it's a masterpiece. It is unimaginable that there are fans who can break away from low-level creative logic and express thoughts with certain meaning through in-depth thinking. This is something that has never been found in books that I have praised before. Most of them are biased and cannot read between the lines. I have nothing to criticize here, it's really good. The only suggestion: the characters need to be distinct. The author may not know the logic of the character's character. Generally speaking, he first determines the most distinctive character and the broadest character, such as gentleness, liveliness, negativity, etc. Then describe the small aspects based on the big personality, such as loving to drink, telling jokes, crying, being afraid of pain, etc. You can make some small contrasts, such as a lively personality, looking big, but always able to carefully feel other people's emotions, a person who is always angry but often emo, etc., To set up all aspects of the character's life. Then there is the appearance. The appearance is formulated based on the personality and related characteristics. It cannot be generalized. It is useless to pile up the words. Appearance is extremely important and cannot be left out without description. For a more advanced approach, add ideas and opinions to the character, and use the character's tone of voice and action and behavior logic instead. As for the protagonist, the author's description is extremely simple, and it is a big problem that you can't feel like it, but it is actually very common. It may be too late to change it now, but I still want to say that good works need to be polished carefully.

It's a very novel Honkai Impact system, and it's pretty good. I wonder if characters from pre-civilizations will appear. The author might as well consider adding a female protagonist. The male protagonist has a pretty good personality, but it's weird not having a girlfriend [laughing]

Excellent. There are very few products in the Honkai Impact series that suit my taste. The work is very good and the author writes very well. I hope it won't stop updating. I hope each chapter will be longer. The writing is also good. The character's personality is well created and the character's image is very restored. Come on, please update more. I really want to tie the author to update, I want to eat rust-flavored candy [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's so beautiful. I love watching it. I love watching it. Sister Jing is the best. This is the best batch I've ever seen. Look at your own time

Overall, it's quite comfortable to watch. For me personally, the protagonist's character is considered full-bodied. He looks relatively bland and is a sultry person at heart. He also has the responsibilities of being a protagonist. The overall aura of the protagonist is neither good nor bad. There won't be any outrageous luck events, but I put some emphasis on growth. It is still relatively slow and I hope it can start to speed up a little. After all, the protagonist is not strong enough to protect the people he wants to protect. There are always incidents where the protagonist cannot operate, which will continue to damage the protagonist's reputation in the eyes of book friends. The most important thing is to know if there is a female protagonist in this book. (Says someone who really wants to know) [Learned]

Don't be fooled by the low rating, this book is great! Various emotions are interspersed in it, but it is very clear. If you like to pick out knives, it is highly recommended. As for why it's 4 stars instead of 5, I'm afraid it's too little for the book. I would like to add that 4 stars feels too underrated, so I re-rate it to 5 stars.

The emotional aspect of this book is excellent, it is the most natural state of heaven and earth. But this seems to be a female work? Some of the writing is emotional and not rational enough. It seems that women are not suitable for combat management. But if you don't read it, it's really a loss. Then few people can write about the sincere feeling of emotion. It's a kind of nature.

He's a good-looking guy, and his character design is generally intact. The protagonist's ability seems to be vague so far (Chapter 74). I can make a rough guess, but I can't say he's too much of a Riddler. It seems to be describing the story of previous civilizations... Forget it, it just looks good! !

Wow, the author is deeply familiar with the true biography of Roast Chicken Teacher, but he also understands how ruthless Roast Chicken Teacher is. All the sugar in this article will be a little more than the sugar given by Roast Chicken Teacher. When you read the chapter on empathy, the protagonist should be the Herrscher of Man who cannot run away. He feels people's emotions and fears, and uses himself as a torch. Every death can protect the body. I reacted to forget that memory but rushed forward without hesitation when I met again. Kiana is almost the same as Kiana in the original timeline, and the other characters are also similar. The author restored it to be very similar, but I don't know if the silly goose has a role. Looking at it now, it means that the sugar is getting a little more, I like to eat it♡ For the ending, it must be basically completely destroyed. You can indeed escape to the quantum sea to stabilize a world and survive, wait for the world to develop civilization, and then go out to guide and counteract the development of collapse. Or, like Eden, you think that "there is no seat for me on the ship sailing to the new era" and stay and wait for the final destruction. Hahahahahahaha This is sugar, the sugar I love to eat I promise, if you want a wife or not, just ask Sister Jing for help, and Sister Jing will send you a Kiana [laughing evilly]

I really think the writing is very good, and it's considered very good among the Bengsan fanfics I've read. The protagonist is not like those in the fanfics who only care about picking up girls. Lao Shu is really brilliant [laughing and crying] I've been following it for almost a year, thank you to the author!

The plot is very good and fulfilling. The protagonist's abilities are the same as 486, but weaker. He cannot control his regression and his memory cannot come back. He can only rely on the subconscious and muscle memory brought about by death over and over again.

First of all, the author's overall story is very well shaped. Secondly, this book is one of the only novels that I can immerse myself in and forget about time when reading. There is also a feeling that it has a three-dimensional sense. You can unconsciously think of the corresponding scenes while reading. Also, the mastery of the rhythm of the story really makes me feel very amazing. I have read more than 60 chapters in one breath, and there is absolutely no pause or feeling of not wanting to read. Of course, this may be because I have read too many novels. There are some articles that I suddenly don't want to read anymore after reading a paragraph, and among Honkai fanfics, they are definitely rare. Although I don't understand why the score is so low, I really hope that the author can finish it.

It's beautiful, I love reading it, and the short author is also very likable. If we keep this pace, I think there will be a big one. The ability has no other manifestation besides resurrection, but some people say that there will be heroic spirits, which should be summoning every dead self to strengthen itself? Otherwise, everyone is an ordinary person and their physical fitness is too poor. You can add more, otherwise no one will read it.

Strong, worthy of being Sister Jing's book. The setting is very attractive. The reincarnation of death and the ability to pray do not seem too invincible and boring, but also bring enough capacity for plot expression. The Herrschers in the article are all original so far, and the plot also contains witty battles and exciting moments. The development of the main plot is also relaxed and smooth, with both warm interactions with Kiana and the others, and touching and tear-jerking knives (Sister Jing, you have no heart! What made you become like this? Is it the evil MiHoYo?) Overall, it looks good, very good-looking! Come and see it quickly! (Then I wonder if there can be more updates. It's so beautiful that I can't get enough of it. Please Sister Jing, please update more. I can do anything.) The author also continued the in-depth exploration of the spiritual core and theme in Beng Beng Beng (which made me laugh and then fell silent)

A shining, beautiful and perfect book. The character descriptions are very appropriate. They are not brainless. They do not compromise the characters in order to continue the plot. The protagonist does not do anything unreasonable. He neither acts as a licking dog in pursuit of the protagonist group nor is he arrogant or self-satisfied. There is no intention to make the protagonist perfect, the protagonist will make mistakes, and he is not afraid of death. The character's personality is also very clearly described, and the story is completely written with pen. There is no false or true situation, and the situation is unclear. This is a very good book. To be honest, it's good to read, but I'm really worried that the author will abandon the book in an instant.

I've finished reading it. It's very well written and has an edge.

This book is very well described! I have been reading novels for a long time. This book is very suitable to my taste. It is not procrastinating, does not follow a template, and has nothing to do with the main line of Honkai Impact. Except for the setting, characters, and world view, everything else is original. I am very optimistic about it. Good luck to the author! ! !

Originally, when I read Beng San fanfics, I usually don't criticize the protagonist and Kiana's cp, but the author's writing is so good that I really can't stop, and I'm getting further and further obsessed with Xu Qi's cp. The emotions are delicate, the writing is smooth, it has a sense of picture, and the plot is also very connotative. The knife is just right, and there is no deliberate knife for the sake of the knife. I really found a treasure. I think the author can directly apply for a screenwriter at mhy [laughter] The writing is really good, the level of the first echelon in fan fiction, it is best to write more [laughs] Why hasn't it been updated in the past few days? Can anyone with knowledge tell me what happened to the author?

Good looking, Different from Daliu's acting, the protagonists become him and imitate the characters he becomes. Even the CP is the original CP paired with the character (for example: Kevin, Mei) Or travel to the Honkai Mihara world and encounter and modify it on the world line you already own. Of course, I'm not saying those stories are bad. I've seen many excellent stories like the ones above. . . I won't say much more here. This book has its own main story line, a brand new and perfect main line, coupled with the author's excellent writing style, it can basically be said that this novel is a random killing in the Tomato Crash novel. Xu Shu's story is so exciting that readers are immersed in it without even realizing it……………… The point is, I shed tears while reading this novel. Summary: Highly recommended

I really like this work, and the protagonist makes me feel like a picture I have seen before. Description: The red giant leads the way, and the small white man follows closely behind the giant... I can't post the picture. If anyone has one, can you post it? Thanks.

Very good. The first eight volumes are great. In the first eight chapters, all the characters are made flesh and blood, affectionate and righteous. But from the tenth chapter onwards, I found that I can't understand it. I actually don't understand why Shuang Xushu wants to fight? Why does Apsu appear? Also, I don't understand Xu Shu's torture later on. Why does the later part lose the flavor of the first part? They are obviously the protagonist group who wants to accompany him, but Xu Shu's combat power is much higher than theirs. This causes the taste of the book to change, from the original group portrait to individual heroism. Also, I feel that Sister Jing seems to dislike Xu Shu very much. Xu Shu doesn't need to suffer some of the torture in the future. I feel that the torture in the latter part is like torture for the sake of torture. Alas, I hope this book will get better and better.

Maybe it's because I've read too many other apocalyptic novels, and I feel like the human nature in it is not evil at all, or even overly good, but I don't think it's contradictory, and it's very consistent with Honkai, where hope and despair coexist, and the quality can't be said. Among the Honkai novels I've read, only this one and Sad Frog are the top ones. It's a pity that I came late and didn't get to read Sister Jing's last book. Finally, I hope you don't get banned by rotten persimmons.

In the category of Honkai Impact 3 (it should be considered the Honkai Impact category), it is a work that breaks away from the original work and goes further and further on the road to high-quality works. In terms of character design and certain plot backgrounds, it is more biased towards Honkai Impact 3 (note: Kiana's super good luck (Honkai Impact 2 probably doesn't have it)) is a Paramecium with an external brain. Otto is not that one. Killing Honkai can sacrifice everything like Otto, etc.). The world difficulty is more like the difficulty of Honkai II. As of the latest updated chapter, there may not be a Honkai Will Ruler (if it existed, the protagonist would have died long ago, but sometimes luck is unlucky) and the world should be in a world of trees and sea, and should be able to be observed by the original sign (it seems to be of no use). (Perhaps this reader's self-pleasure or perhaps it's my opinion that this book Objective Future should be able to become a masterpiece in the Honkai Impact series) Take a look at the duration

Let me talk about my personal evaluation first. I subjectively think this book is the pinnacle of Honkai Impact fan fiction. The world of the novel is a new imaginary world constructed by the plot of Honkai Mihara. You can simply imagine it as a huge world bubble. There are similarities, but the essence is different (of course, if you understand it in depth, it is not just a world cannon. ) There are familiar characters in it, the familiar Herrscher, and the familiar Honkai Beast. They have the same personality, the same behavior, and even their words and actions are the same as the original work. However, the things they experienced are completely different from the original work. The 13 here The Herrschers are also completely different from the original work. The 13 Herrschers in the original work are nothing more than the 13 Herrschers such as Li, Kong, Lei... But this work has reshaped new Herrsters such as evolution, memory, vision, expectation... Etc. Some of them are completely different from the original work. The author's writing style is also very good. Each volume will put forward a theme to discuss with readers. The plot of each volume is basically written around this theme (realism and idealism, soul and body...). The protagonist is also a herrscher. His ability is to go back in time after death (similar to 486). Omnipotence is a dream come true, a power called "expectation". Of course, if you want to understand this ability, it is better to read it. As for the female protagonist, it should be Kiana (Otto can also be used). There are multiple female protagonists. It's not multiple female protagonists anyway. If there were multiple female protagonists, I wouldn't watch it. I agree with the author's point of view. There is not necessarily only love between boys and girls, but there can be more. There can be any kind of love, friendship, family affection, etc. Don't be too limited to love. There are more plots left, which I can't reveal. My subjective opinion is that it is a very well-written fanfic. If you are interested, you can read it. It is really interesting (the knife is slightly more)

It's very good to watch, with good writing and plot. There's always a lingering sense of depression when watching it, but you can also feel very happy when the protagonist makes a comeback. And big scenes (fatal ones) always happen one after another. Stories about death flashbacks like this are usually mindless and cool stories, and they usually make me feel that it's okay even if the protagonist dies. But this book felt to me like I was playing through Hell difficulty without casualties. Every time I died, I felt uncomfortable and gave me a momentary heartache.

This worldview is really immersive. The author has perfectly recreated the bottom of the collapse. The author has used the Herrscher to visualize social problems. The answers to the mystery are revealed step by step. And that kind of sense of substitution is really rare. At the beginning, 99% of humans died. You would think that this is a twisted and collapsed world. In fact, it is not the case. It is still because of the advanced technology that so many humans died. You would think that the Herrscher would appear like the original Honkai, but it is a brand new way of thinking, which places the entire world on humans, creatures, concepts, and abstractions. The brand new Herrscher does not represent the problems of society, the world, and even the entire existence. He doesn't have an invincible cheat or a perfect ending, but every step is a perfect interpretation of the phrase "fight for all the good things in the world." High respect for this masterpiece!

Needless to say, the writing style is great, no need to say more! What surprises me the most is that the author actually wrote the core of the collapse: despair and hope. People are always immersed in the screenwriter's plot. There are even a small number of people who think that even the Herrscher can't defeat him, but put aside those armors and stigmata, maybe a tank-level The Honkai Beast is enough to make people despair. What really touches people's hearts is the flowers blooming on the ruins. It is also the spirit of risking life and death and uniting as one. I hope the author can maintain this style. I will continue to pursue it until I can see the dawn of victory with Xu Shu and the others.