[No mindless decisions · No characters getting inexplicably stupid · No System · No invincibility · No forced showing off]
A mortal's path to cultivation [Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul...]
The heavens and earth arose from primordial chaos, where all vital energy was one: a process of creation from nothing.
Some people are born with spiritual roots, known as innate spiritual roots.
Others gather their inner qi to form acquired spiritual roots.
Those with spiritual roots can absorb the spiritual energy of heaven and earth for their own use, and thereby attain longevity...
The protagonist, Fang Qing, possesses all five elemental spiritual roots. As he pursues more cultivation resources, people hunt him at every turn. See how he escapes death again and again to achieve the Great Dao of Immortality!
It feels pretty good, keep up the good work!
The writing is okay and you can read it.
The logic is clear, the language is fluent, and the story is slow-burning and becomes more exciting as it goes on. Everyone is welcome to comment and give valuable opinions and suggestions. [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]
Everyone has once ventured into the world alone. From the novel about cultivating immortals, he has seen the cold and warm life. From the beginning, the plot is getting more and more exciting, the logic is clear, and the sequence is smooth. I hope there will be more. Good-looking, really good-looking! I always dream about the names of the characters in the play.
Wonderful, every paragraph is clear, well written