I'm the Ultimate Player, and from the Start I Conquer the Peerless Goddess

It's cool, it's so cool, but I hope that the world view of the subsequent plot can be enlarged. Don't keep writing about the city. If you write too much, it will be boring.

If you want to read about stallions, you can read it. This book is really enjoyable, but there are a few flaws, as follows: 1. There are too many plot lines. It's okay at first, but later on the protagonist will look very tired and messy when he has six or seven plot lines at the same time. Personally, I think it's best to have two or three main lines going at the same time. It's best to finish one and make up for the other. The heroine who has completed the plot lines can write some relaxed daily life later. 2. The system still needs to be improved. For example, when being targeted by a mysterious organization, the protagonist should be given information directly. When being targeted by Nancy, the protagonist should be given the power to prevent the protagonist from being threatened, instead of just warning the protagonist that this woman is dangerous. Since it is an invincible novel, the heroine should not be written so strong, so that there will be more exciting points and less possible poisonous points. Well, I hope the author can write better and better

The ultimate cool novel, the protagonist kills decisively and not like a virgin, and the beautiful woman kills even if she provokes him

It's really good and novel, but if I keep writing about cities, will I reach the top? I hope that in the later stage, when the protagonist becomes stronger, he can travel through the heavens and become a player.

Very good, it may be a bit confusing and sadistic at the beginning, and it will dissuade many people, but if you keep reading, you will gradually become addicted. The character descriptions are very good. The male protagonist has high emotional intelligence. Although he seems a bit unhuman, he is calm. The female protagonist is willing to take the bait and is willing to pay. In addition, there are some repetitions. For example, the protagonist has a very low family concept. When looking at girls, he says that he has high standards and cannot compare to the top ones. In the end, I just hope that Bai Yueguang will have a good ending and not be abused.

It uses the world view of the King of Soldiers and the Plutocrats, but it is a cool and invincible novel, not a cuckold King of Soldiers, and the protagonist is very ambitious. The protagonist's preference for a woman older than him is not a sheep's tail story, and he has to eat it at the beginning. The author still has good writing skills, and the protagonist's step-by-step development is not directly invincible. There are many female protagonists but each has her own characteristics, mainly reflected in Mu Heyin. Personal evaluation can be given to 4.5⭐

It's good-looking, even though it revolves around women, it's still good-looking. Advantages: The author's narrative style is concise, sometimes without explanation, and allows readers to understand by themselves through plot description. At present, the female protagonists have all gained, and the male protagonist can be said to be invincible, but he is slowly expanding his power and enjoying an invincible life. Disadvantages: There really aren't any at the moment. It would be an understatement to say that many things about the protagonist are too light, and it feels like being on the outside, but in fact, we can also see the gradual change of the protagonist. From the beginning, he said that he supported the heroine Yin, and later he slowly recognized her in his heart. Overall, it's a unique and cool article about picking up girls in the city.

The protagonist has a straightforward personality. I really like it. It's very enjoyable to watch the whole process. There are no ink stains. It's pretty good.

It's okay. It's a brainless and purely enjoyable article. It's really a gamer. It feels like playing a game, doing the main and branch plots, and doing some random things. Everyone is an NPC protagonist and doesn't get emotionally involved. It's pretty cool. It's good as long as it keeps being cool. Don't be too brainless, don't suppress the protagonist, and don't be bloody.

It's very interesting to watch. There are many female protagonists. The male protagonist is not a eunuch and his emotions are good. However, it feels like the male protagonist is like a robot and is not really attracted to the female protagonist. I hope the male protagonist will not let down these female protagonists. I hope the finale will be a very good ending [crying] [crying] Give it a try first