Done! Surrounded by My Yandere Ex-Girlfriend in a Love Drama

Thank you all for your reviews! All suggestions are listened to! The points that everyone was concerned about have been changed. This article is written by someone who loves the male protagonist wholeheartedly, and there will never be any plot like the one in the comments! Please spray gently! Thank you

It's good to watch, but it's better to have a harem in the end, otherwise it's a bit regretful. The author should also pay attention to the fact that the protagonist's ex-girlfriend shouldn't be too close to the supporting characters. A single heroine is okay, but I personally don't think it's good to have a harem. I also hope that the plot will be faster and don't drag on. It's better to have some Shura field as soon as possible. Personally, I still really want this book to be a harem [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] And the author, please hurry up, it's not enough. Now the heroine is slightly sickly. I don't think it's that serious. It's better to be more serious [laughter]

This is a pretty good yandere novel. The first is the male protagonist Ark, who lives up to his name. He is like a lonely boat in the sea, allowing them to escape from the sea of ​​misery when they are drowning, and then pushing them into the sea of ​​misery when they are happiest. Ark's love is like poison wrapped in honey. He knows that he is drinking poison to quench his thirst, but he is willing to do so. For ex-girlfriends, the Ark is like the warm sun in winter, tearing through the gloom and shining light on them. They could have endured the darkness, but after seeing the sun, how could they be willing to go back and continue living without the Ark? The relationship between Ark and his ex-girlfriend. From Fang Zhou's point of view, the relationship between them was already in the past, and no matter how precious the memories were, they were covered with dust as the years went by. But the causes sown in the past have blossomed and bear fruit under the irrigation of the years, and Ark will eventually swallow the bitter fruit he brewed. For ex-girlfriends, the memories between them and Ark are like a pot of old wine with a hint of sweetness in the bitterness. Time has not healed their wounds. Instead, emotions have accumulated in their hearts, causing their hearts to become distorted and strange. Of course, I would like to give you my five

It looks good, and it made me realize that there are many types of yanderes [laughing evilly]

It's very good-looking, and the yandere is not just an aggressive type. It's interesting and tearful (personal opinion). I hope there will be more.

It's quite good to read. At least this one doesn't have the main character wearing the skin of his ex-girlfriend and then acting like a licking dog, unable to do anything. It's quite an easy read. The author has changed some of the things he said, and the author is also a girl. As expected, the female author drives much harder than the male author. It's not like the other one, which has hundreds of chapters like a eunuch [shy][shy]

Let's list the poisonous points first: There are basically all the poisonous points that a romance novel should have. If you have zero tolerance for poisonous points, you need to avoid this book directly. This book uses Shura Field as the main line to unfold the plot, and it also perfectly integrates the yandere elements. I personally like these two things very much. If you like yandere and Shura field, you can't miss it. The male protagonist is portrayed as a relatively ordinary person, a common loser in novels with Shura Field as the main theme. If he is a little tougher, he will not be able to survive in terms of word count. The heroines are very well portrayed, except for Song Qinghuan, who makes me wonder, is this the heroine? The heroines each have their own characteristics and are all impressive. More importantly, regarding the way the plot advances, the author obviously has another rhythm, instead of simply letting the heroines tear each other apart, which is good because there are few other books I have read like this. It should have been given five stars, but the missing last star came from my unknown premonition: the final ending may not be a happy ending, the male protagonist will die, or the male protagonist will only choose one female protagonist in the end. Follow-up review 1: This review was changed from four stars to three stars. As the story progresses, I realize that the male protagonist does not like any of the female protagonists. It was just because of my indecisiveness that I kept cutting and sorting things out, which made me lose interest.

The story line is handled well, the content is interesting, and there are no shortcomings so far.

This book is very nice, but it's too short. It's as short as the author [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]. I don't know if the low rating is malicious [laughing]

I hope that the male protagonist will not be written to death, and the other girls will be happy. Although there are many joys and sorrows in reality, novels do not necessarily have to be so sad (personal opinion, suddenly sprayed) [smile]

It's good-looking but too short. Even if the daily update is good, it's not enough. As far as the existing plot is concerned, it is rich enough. It is about falling in love with a variety show, the sister is seriously ill, and the protagonist's anchor career is making a comeback. Talking about the emotional line, is the protagonist a scumbag? No, it can even be said to be exclusive. A great writer and childhood sweetheart, he lost contact with Qiao Sisi because of his online crush, and the protagonist didn't pay much attention to what happened to her after she went abroad. After Qiao is a star, he is forced to break up after his career starts. During the relationship, the protagonist is tolerant and gentle, and handles Qiao's private emotional needs well, cooking, coaxing, and accompanying him. For Qiao, the protagonist doesn't want to delay her. The protagonist's own family background is not good, so how can he do things that delay other people's futures. Chu hasn't told the specific story yet, so it's hard to tell. Qin exposed the yandere thing, tortured the protagonist's sister, and was caught red-handed. Breaking up is normal. After all, being liked by a yandere in reality is indeed an accident. Han is a company policy. At that time, Han was also subject to shareholders' meetings and the like. The protagonist resigned on his own initiative, but Han could not accompany the protagonist, and his family did not agree. They also had quarrels about future development. It was normal for them to break up. Song scumbag, there is nothing to say. The protagonist has really fulfilled his responsibilities as a boyfriend from the beginning to the end. As an ex, being by the ex-girlfriend's side is like death. If you don't disturb her, it's not an accident. The protagonist will not appear next to the heroine at all. As far as the existing plot is concerned, due to the restriction of variety shows, the heroines do not do anything excessive, or they are just slightly sickly. I've been reading the book for a while now, and now I'm in my second love story. Whether it's plot or emotional development, it's quite slow. I hope the author will update more. The plot is getting more and more interesting The emotional line has basically been laid out clearly. Everyone is an ex-girlfriend and they all want to compete. As of now, Qiao and Han are in the lead, Chu is making efforts, Qin is quietly planning, and the big writers are vaguely participating in the war. It's getting better and better

It's so beautiful. I was so excited when I saw it.

The Shura field and the yandere are vividly represented in this book. I prefer reading this feeling. It would be great if the author could add some daily life after the love drama. Personally, I pay more attention to the subsequent plot.

The heroine has a delicate mind, the character of the heroine is very stable, and the progress is slow and not hurried. It can be ranked in the top three of the yandere novels I have read, but it is not necessarily the third. I feel that the few shortcomings are my personal reasons. I personally don't like to watch harems. I can accept the ex-girlfriends and the like, but there are too many. But it's understandable, as the Shura Field was originally used to advance the plot. Support, this book is well written and the details are quite accurate. If you like yandere, you can read it. It has a sense of realism in real society, but some points make it mindless to read. It is a good book.

Great. This is the best yandere novel I have read on Tomato since I started writing. The details are also good, and the characters are a bit tense and exciting. But I am very curious about how the author will divide up the male protagonist later [laughter]

Personally, I think this book is good to read. It would be better if it was about a yandere harem. It would be nice if it could be a little more serious. I just like the protagonist walking between various yanderes. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

In fact, I think I can write it any way. After all, I have read "Harem" and "Yandere", but I don't care. What really stands out to me is the author's description and the development of the story. As we all know, in fact, when we feel the happiest, it is when we are infinitely close to the extreme of happiness. This book focuses on the front, instead of recording a running account like some books. Although the flow of water updated every day is long and thin, there is no real surge. The characters and stories are very logical, and she is a female author? It has a better grasp of girls' psychology, and the characters come to life on the page. It's a very good book!

The male protagonist is full of flesh and blood and has a lot of personality. He is said to be a scumbag but he is so sincere to each of his girlfriends. I personally like this ending. It can also be regarded as all 4 of them. Hahaha. The four heroines have distinct personalities. When viewed separately, they are like unit dramas. The author is amazing. There is no interruption and the writing is also very good. It has been a long time since I have seen such a novel with content and quality. I like it very much. I like Han hope's Flowers of the High Mountain Fall into the Dust the most. Hahaha. I have become a fan of the author's books. I hope he will update more new works [smile][smile]

Let me check in first. The setting of the romance drama is indeed very interesting. I have to admire the author's unique ideas! ! ! The plot is very attractive. Although it is said to be trying out guesses with the ex-girlfriends, it is not that nonsense. Each heroine has her own characteristics... I am looking forward to the follow-up development (●.●) Happy birthday to the author (don't mind if it's a belated birthday) In the new year, I hope your writing skills will improve to a higher level, and I hope you will be liked by more people... Be happy every day❤️ (I'll give you an eye first, so I won't write so much)

It's very well written. Anyway, I think yours is the only one that can compare with it. These couples have to treat you like meat and you are yandere, and some of them don't go into those small dark rooms. These are all done very well.

The character portrayal is relatively realistic, there is no too cliched plot, and there is no theme that is too popular, and it is not out of the apocalypse, but it is not boring. The overall evaluation is good, and it is worth watching. 1. Although looking at the content alone, you may think that the male protagonist is messing up, but as the story develops, there will be a lot of characterization of the male protagonist's character, so that you will not feel disgusted with what the male protagonist does. 2. I have to say that the content is quite novel. Each female character has her own characteristics, and there will also be some stories about the male protagonist and them.

The plot is not sloppy and the rhythm is relatively coherent. The emotional descriptions are very good. There is no need for those very H things, just the outlines are enough. In this regard, this work is particularly good. The emphasis on the yandere is very good, some are there at the beginning, and some gradually change. The character creation is really very delicate. There are also some unsatisfactory things. For example, the ending is really a bit uncomfortable. In fact, it feels more broken in the later period, but it does not affect the overall effect. Another uncomfortable part is about the shaping of the male protagonist. After doing something, he is irresponsible and does not back down. In the end, he uses an avoidant personality to explain himself. It is difficult to accept and it is very uncomfortable to read. However, the advantages of this book are enough to make people spend time to read it. Among the many yandere works on Tomato, this one is definitely one of the best.

The article uses comedy as an image, depicting a plot that can still be understood even if people are impetuous at the moment. It is astringent, crazy, and enjoyable to see and attract attention. But it is not just a comedy, it also has a core of tragedy. If you think about it a little deeper, the smile turns into sadness, like the light in the far east can also be the granary of the nobles nearby. No matter what the comedy is, its core must be tragedy, which is vividly reflected in the author's writing. Generally, it may just focus on the cool writing, the writing is plain, or it may not be read. Therefore, the author's writing is powerful, and it can only be said that he can write in seconds.

It was my first time to see this kind of theme and content. The first 300 chapters or so were okay, and then I started skipping. Anyway, you can know what it is about by looking at the title and the beginning. Without a harem, it would have been impossible to have a harem. Even thinking about it is unrealistic. One yandere can stab you through, and two can make you know what it means to hold your head in your arms. Some people commented that they still want to have a harem with four yanderes. The four yanderes who were purged by suspended animation were well received. At least they were a little bit more normal, and the reason why all four of them were yanderes was mainly due to their family backgrounds. It was cleansed and normalized, and the ending was good. The bookkeeper turned the tide and got back on her feet, the gay friends fought with each other and cooperated with each other, and she also has a cute sister, perfect

Except for the fact that some of the female protagonists in the beginning were a bit uncomfortable with the plot of having physical contact with male guests due to the setting of the variety show game, the subsequent development is still quite interesting to read. The awareness of lightning protection is in place and the writing is very good. Especially the author has a good grasp of the psychological activities of the characters, and the emotional scenes are even It is delicate and touching, and it can arouse my emotions. Moreover, the characters are clearly and vividly created. The four female protagonists can be regarded as yanderes in the true sense. The final ending is acceptable, so I highly recommend reading it. I plan to read it through again when I have the opportunity. I hope the author will continue to publish new works. I am very much looking forward to it.

The subject matter is something I have never seen before, and the lack of system is very attractive. And the characterization is also relatively three-dimensional. I wonder if this male protagonist will have more ex-girlfriends. And I'm also thinking about how most of the male protagonist's ex-girlfriends fell in love with women, and what's their purpose? And will that dream become reality? Could the male protagonist Qingmei be part of the whole dream? What is the protagonist's sister's attitude towards other ex-girlfriends? It can be seen that the author has real skills. Come on.

This book is quite good. The male protagonist has the attributes of Neptune, but he is quite serious and will not be confused with his ex-girlfriends. Although his life is not very good, he will not be a softie. At least the character is very nice now. But let's forget about the harem. All the yanderes are totally unsuitable for this. Let's let the female protagonists fight with each other. This is more interesting, and the male protagonist can drink a bowl of water in the future. But Logan should still use it. She is not interesting as an NPC. You can use her to make a big turn in the end and put pressure on other ex-girlfriends. As for the subsequent plot, we can make a side story with different heroines.

It's worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, I felt that the male protagonist ended a relationship very hastily. After reading slowly to the end, through the author's various descriptions of the main character, and the way one of the heroines broke up after revealing her concerns, etc., I felt that the male protagonist is actually very good at taking care of others. The hero's sister is the hero's bottom line, so some stories may revolve around the hero's sister later on. My heart trembled when I saw it, hahahaha [salute]

It's really good in terms of emotional and psychological description, and the plot doesn't have too many poisonous points. Except for the fact that my sister and school belle Chu Xinran made me sweat a little, everything was fine. Beyond, I like this kind of painful article the most [adoration][adoration][adoration]

After watching a quarter of it, the plot is quite interesting. What is worthy of praise is that when describing characters, especially yandere, if you write too little, the characters will be the same, and if you write too much, the story will be too heavy. The author has a better balance between the two. The story is relatively not that heavy, and at the same time, each female character has her own characteristics. However, I think there are also areas worthy of discussion. First of all, the value concept of the plot of going to teach is very good, but as a romance show, it feels a little inappropriate to go here. Secondly, the male protagonist's attitude towards emotions is very strange, and there is something awkward that cannot be described. However, this issue must be dealt with by the author later. If the reason can be written, it can also be regarded as a good foreshadowing. Finally, in the first quarter of the story narrated by the author, it is understandable that the man and woman have fallen in love, but it does not feel like they are in love to death. Each heroine lacks the motivation of being a yandere, and being yandere is more like making a point. But equally, if the author writes the reason later, it will also be a good foreshadowing. After reading the rest, I'll comment later Solving the case, the male protagonist has an avoidant attachment style, and the female protagonists each have their own misfortunes (there is a reason why they are yandere, but why they love the male protagonist so much needs to be explored)