I Went Skydiving, So How Did I End Up in the Tang Dynasty?

Overall, I think it looks okay. The only issue is how old is Jale? You are saying that you are not allowed to have sex under age, and you are always thinking about other people's ideas every day, even though you are doing nothing else. The question is, what kind of psychology do you have to have thoughts about a teenage girl? Maybe everyone has different personalities and thoughts. In my opinion, anyone who has thoughts about a ten-year-old girl feels like a beast. . . It's really disgusting to watch.

This book is generally good, but there are some problems at the front. The roads in Chang'an during the early Tang Dynasty were very smooth and not bumpy. They were designed with strict requirements. The army's hygiene was also very strict and would not appear like what is shown in the article. I will look at it later, and some of the details will need to be corrected and paid attention to. If that doesn't work, just read the history of the Tang Dynasty. I always feel that this book can be written as a cool novel, but it is much worse when it comes to slow writing. Personally, I feel that the book "Zhenguan Partners" is very well written. It is a real slow-burning Tang Dynasty novel. The author can refer to this novel to learn from its strengths and weaknesses [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Not bad, but it feels like something is missing

If you have traveled through time, you will not be able to take off, and you will lick the dog's life. You should still treat it as a licking dog!

The writing is good. Once I get rid of my old background, this book will basically be finished. Goodbye, your two-star service.

Changle Gong, a 10-year-old child, you are a crazy scumbag.

Very good, worth recommending

It's okay to write, as long as it doesn't involve a harem The same old routine,

I can't even copy homework. Where did the flying artifact come from.

I confessed right from the beginning, but there was no one left.