Qingwen Is the Concubine in Rebirth of the Red Mansion

It's not bad. There are very few books about Red Mansions fan fiction, and even fewer good ones. Give me a five-star support. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch [like][like][like][like]

It is not easy to write novels, so I would like to give you a five-five to encourage you. First of all, I don't hate Qingwen. On the contrary, I admire her true temperament, but it is true that she is destined not to live a good life. In fact, in the novel, Qingwen was kicked out because she accumulated too much evil (it was not that she did many evil things, but that she had many evil people). Originally, she had Jia Mu, a person who was very optimistic about her, as a background, but every time she got into trouble, firstly, she did not take people seriously and offended too many mothers-in-law. Secondly, she pinched the waist and scolded the little maid, and Mrs. Wang saw it with her own eyes. She was sad. In fact, to praise Qingwen, there is no need to write about other people in such a bad way. The writing in the book is so jealous that it feels like Qingwen herself... After Qingwen left the house, it was not because she had no money that she had to stay at her brother's house. It was just because a single and sick girl was taken out. Couldn't she be thrown into an inn or on the street... First of all, it is best to set the male protagonist not to meet him in the courtyard. Otherwise, if he has nothing to do and does not invite the master to accompany him in broad daylight, knowing that he will meet women's family, he is not a prince who was raised under the feudal system. Second, it is not necessary to be a prince or aristocrat. The heroine's status is too low, and she needs to pay too much to catch up with the prince. Qingwen's background is too weak, and even Xue Baochai's background cannot catch up. To be honest, Baoyu, the son of the Duke of Guo, is the closest Qingwen can get. Another thing is that it is difficult for the Queen Mother in the introduction to say those words. Those words seemed to be spoken by Grandma Liu. You can write a story about Qingwen becoming independent and no longer clinging to Baoyu. No matter who she is betrothed to, the important thing is to be able to be independent. But to be honest, if Qingwen is really reborn, she may seek revenge on the person who secretly framed her. It is possible to climb Baoyu very early. Because she also understood that Baoyu, although noble, had no right to speak and could not make the decision. So before she died, she only blamed herself for assuming a false reputation, exchanged close-fitting coats with Baoyu, and even cut off her nails for Baoyu to hold, but she did not blame Baoyu for not speaking up for her. To be honest, Baoyu treated her quite well. It would be rare for her to meet such a Baoyu when she went out.

You can probably understand why the rating is not high. It's not that the author writes poorly. But if the author chooses to write a fanfic of a famous work, he must be mentally prepared to compare it with the famous work! Cao Xueqin's decades of hard work are no joke, how can this compare? When I read "A Dream of Red Mansions", I could only appreciate the talent and grace of "Tan Chun" with my shallow height. Later, I read the analysis of various Red Mansion experts and said that "Cao Gong likes Qingwen the most!" The word "brave" fully expresses Cao Gong's preference! It's very interesting. In this fanfic written by the author, the endings of these two characters are quite good, which is quite gratifying to read. The writing is quite satisfactory, and it is eloquent and not exaggerated or show off! But there is no "tension point" that makes people shine. The story is very flat, and the ending is very rushed... I read it from "Big Household in a Small Town". I can't say I was disappointed, but I feel that if the author insists on writing it and comes back to write Qingwen again after a few years, it will definitely be better! Come on! ! !

Reasonable and reasonable, self-respecting and self-loving, not clumsy and not selfish, very good.

It's rare to see articles from this angle, it's beautiful.

So who is the male protagonist? According to the introduction, it is Xie Yining, but the little prince

I beg the author, can you please do both?

The struggle to survive is a very real feeling

It's beautiful, I love watching it, I watch it every day

It's pretty good. Although some book friends say it doesn't match the plot of the original work, if you read it as a romance novel, the plot is worthy of scrutiny. The character's emotional development is also okay.

Delicate and moving, well written, Qingwen deserves a good life.

I've read a few chapters and it's quite good. The plot is reasonable and the words are rigorous.

It's very good. It changed the ending of the original character. It's very satisfying.

I think the Red Mansion fanfic is pretty well written.

It's good-looking, the emotional lines are not messy, and the heroine is determined in her heart. It's not bad. Keep up the good work! ! [Please update]

Good. A bit interesting

The writing on the front looks better than the writing on the back

It can save all the regrets of Dream of Red Mansions

Creation is not easy, give me five points to support it

Everyone has a happy ending

Nice! If there is rebirth, I also hope that everyone in Dream of Red Mansions will end as the author wrote.

No, the author, the writing is so good, you should update it quickly! ! ! !

I like it, just like it

I like the author's writing style very much, support the author, and hope to write more and better works.

It's beautiful, but the ending is too hasty and misses a lot of feeling.

I'm commenting after reading chapter 85, it's pretty good.

It's very well written, I finished it in one go

Although some of the characters don't match up, it's well written.

It's okay, it can be read as a romance novel

The writing style is very close to the original work, and it makes up for some regrets, which is great!