
With My Body, I Forge Mountains and Rivers
我以我身铸山河
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 345k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
149Chapters
4Reads
6.9Score
104.8kReads · all time
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Pretty good! Just a little less!
It's pretty good-looking. Don't let the ratings put you off. I think someone is maliciously trying to pull the points off. Although there are some flaws in some places, it's overall pretty good. At least it's good enough for Tomato.
The book is quite good, the evolution and mutation, and the characters' IQs are not too bad.
The writing is quite interesting.
To be honest, it seems that his 6 points are too abstract at the moment. To be honest, it can't reach 9.5 Points, but it can definitely exceed 90% of the same type of tomatoes. The subject matter is not mentioning the clichés, and the system's spiritual energy is revived. The characters don't do anything outrageous. His technique is stable and he doesn't look like a novice writer, but he probably doesn't have a lot of experience and is at the level of a novice. However, there are two small problems (personal opinion). 1. The balance of combat power is a little unstable. Sometimes the protagonist will be pressed more heavily. 2 There is obviously no outline! There is a specific structure in the mind but not enough detail (this is where I say that although the author is not a novice, he is inexperienced). The advantage of the outline in the mind is that it is more vivid and easier for the author to create, but the disadvantage is that some details are ignored and the work becomes rough (for example, the author was scolded for forgetting to insert foreshadowing [sneaky laugh]). It also becomes blurry as time goes by and may become incoherent as the length of the article grows. In the end, it's hard to hide the flaws. Generally speaking, I think it's 8.5-9 Points and you can get it.
To be honest, the writing is quite good. I almost didn't have the desire to read on because I didn't know the level before. The previous levels were not clearly stated, and sometimes it was ninth level and sometimes fourth level. The realm was not very clear. It was only after I saw it that I suddenly realized that it turned out to be nine to one. I think it is better to explain it before. In addition, the combat power is indeed a bit overwhelming. Even if the beasts have a drop of experience, the protagonist only thinks of upgrading the level in times of crisis. He is more content with the status quo, which is not good.
Delusion about mountains and seas, right?
It looks good, but some places are not clearly written.
This book is really good and very interesting. I recommend everyone to read it. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update it!
The content is very suitable for me 👍