Help! What Do I Do When the Yandere Villainess Likes Me?

For me personally, it's pretty good, but it also has shortcomings. It's too little, not enough to watch. I can't wait to see Yan hope clutching the sheets and crying.

It looks good. Judging from the current situation, he is probably an isolation-induced yandere. Hmm, it's interesting 🍉 🍉

Short and weak, but very beautiful! Author, please hurry up and don't force me to kneel down and beg you. This little bit is totally not enough.

Nice, very nice book... I recommend reading more. Lily and stuff... It's really great

I like reading it. The author's writing style is pretty good.

It's good to watch, I love watching it, it's just the family part that I wish I could leave as soon as possible

A very good book. The author has considered the plot links very well. Take the recent chapters as an example. First of all, it is because Shu Yutang chose to hide it from Aunt Wan and others to advance his career. The concealment from Aunt Wan and others is also very interesting. No one knows what happened on that rainy night except the two parties involved. Aunt Wan thought that Shu was being bullied, so she chose to let Lu leave. However, I feel that the original person was bullied 😏 and was played with in applause. The next development is interesting. Shu judged through Lu's reaction that she was not the original person. But Aunt Wan and the others don't know, and Aunt Wan and the others don't know that it was Shu who took the initiative or played tricks, and even if they knew, they would probably let Lu leave. Aunt Wan and the others are very kind-hearted. If they find out that their daughter is a glutinous rice ball stuffed with sesame seeds, they may be worried about Lu letting her go (I really want to know how Aunt Wan and the others will react when they know that their daughter is so sinister [laughing]), so, my dear author, has she figured out what to write next? Generally speaking, the plot has highlights and logic, and I feel that the plot promotes the perfection of the characters. The plots of many Tomato novels are about the protagonist encountering something and getting lucky. The author has done a good job in this aspect. The plot is rigorous and smooth. Comment: It is very good in Tomato 👍

The plot is interesting, the characters' psychology is delicate, Shu Yutang's yandere feeling, the hidden possessiveness, and Yan hope's unwillingness, grief, anger, and even degradation are gradually reflected from 1 to 0, especially the psychological description, which is completely grasped. So far, it looks pretty good. I think it's a good grasp of this yandere feeling (✪▽✪) The author can write according to his own ideas. One advantage of online literature is that he can receive feedback from readers and the author can make revisions. Another disadvantage of online literature is that reader feedback will affect the author's judgment and plan. At the same time, personally, I think the plot may be a bit fast for readers (in other words, it is just ordinary sugar, a little less sweet, and the twists are a little fast). I think it can be appropriately watered down and more daily stories (without affecting the overall plot direction), because this is also a characteristic of online literature. If it is watery and watery, readers will also like to read it. Of course, I think it's good now, so I'll keep writing and writing. I'm looking forward to the following articles and Yan hope's further fall (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑ Personally recommend that the depressing plots can be compressed (reduce the number of chapters), or add some clearer hints to these plots (most readers will misunderstand them if they are too inconspicuous) And (emphasis mark) must be handled well at the turning point. More or less the truth must be written here (because the reader has always been from God's perspective, and suddenly switching to Yan Xi's perspective will have a twisted sense of surprise). This is not like the author's third-person omniscient perspective, so there will be a deep generation gap between ordinary readers and the author, and due to the timeliness of online literature, this generation gap will be magnified Moreover, novels are different from movies and TV shows. Novels lack a lot of atmosphere rendering and a lot of detail processing (even if there are, most readers only scan the lines at a glance, so they will ignore them). This has led to many suspense novels and mystery novels. The clues will be directly narrated through the characters, and the truth will be guided intentionally or unintentionally, while in movies and TV shows, it will be through the lens. One category is very convenient, which makes it very difficult for the novel to change from God's perspective to a single perspective. Even if it is done, it will be difficult for readers to understand. This is why the chapters of imprisonment appear obscure and difficult to understand, with no bright lines and small dark lines. Yan hope's perspective is too realistic and distorts the truth, causing people to doubt even if they understand the dark lines. This is the intuitive feeling from the reader's perspective, and it is also my suggestion.

All I can say about this book is that the characters really suit my taste. The author's writing is very good, the story is really interesting, and the candies given out are really sweet (of course, the car is also really amazing). The author is very active and likes yandere. If you are chasing your wife in the crematorium, you must not miss this book. Finally, Author, please, please add a few more pictures, I will do anything 😢

How should I put it? It's so beautiful that it's not enough to look at.