Dragon Ball What If: Raditz Takes Gohan Away

Not dismantling CP, no system, respecting the original work... Being able to do these things has surpassed many Dragon Ball fanfics. By taking Gohan away to explore the two Saiyans Raditz and Nappa, I have to sigh that this is a good inspiration. Judging from the various detailed settings, the author has indeed put a lot of effort into it. There is an obvious problem. The changed character of Raditz collides with the character of Piccolo in the original work. This puts Piccolo in an awkward position. Vegeta is the second male lead, Gohan's godfather was taken away by Raditz, and he lost a year of intimacy with Gohan. How to deal with the relationship between Piccolo and Gohan is a difficult problem. I hope the author can handle it properly💕 I'm a little disappointed. There's nothing wrong with the plot and characters of the work itself, but the author's attitude towards the work is really sad. Everyone is reporting that they can't see updated chapters. This is actually because the author, in order to make up for the daily update of words, copies other people's posts and pastes them into his own work without a bottom line. This approach is really difficult to criticize. I think this will not make the loyal readers who are struggling to catch up on updates happy in any way. I hope the author can cherish his work and not let down every reader who loves this book [sad]

I finished watching it again. There is no time traveler, but it restores the character of the original work very well.

Yes, the characterization is basically the same as the original work, except that Vegeta is a bit clownish. I hope the author will put more effort into portraying Vegeta and let him complete several stages of transformation. In fact, Vegeta's feelings for Gohan in the original work are very complicated. The first apology in his life was given to Gohan, and the first time he fully acknowledged the advantages of others was also Gohan. When Gohan regressed, he would supervise him like an elder.

In fact, I have always thought that the Saiyan race is very strange. Although they are known as a fighting nation, they have the buff of healing from serious injuries and combat power, but the more relaxed they are in self-cultivation, the more they can break through to the greater realm. For example, Vegeta, who has been practicing in the early stage is of no use. The first time he broke through was to fall in love with Bulma, break through the Super Series, and Trunk Si enjoys the family relationship between father and son and breaks through to Super 2. On the contrary, Goku has always been ahead of Vegeta from practicing to practicing and playing. After Vegeta completely relaxed in Dragon Ball Super, he did not lag behind Goku significantly. Another example is Gabe and the others from the sixth universe. They do not advocate fighting and killing, and their combat power is much higher than that of the Saiyans from the seventh universe. Even Gohan caught up with Super Blue in his beast form instantly. Therefore, if you travel to the Dragon Ball world and become Saiyans, practicing normal life is the fastest way to improve your combat power.

Although the author failed to finish it, he made up for the ending after a month. There are not many Dragon Ball fan fictions featuring little Gohan and not Gohan who traveled through time and space. The character is very consistent with the original work. It is good to see the growth of this character. It's just that the popularity is relatively low. The author can't persist and won't write it. ๑•́₃•̀๑

Only the word "awesome" can express my feelings. The writing is much better than those other time-traveling system stallion Dragon Ball novels. Unfortunately, I can only give five stars, which is too few.

Okay, well written

I highly recommend it. It doesn't have a breakdown in combat power, and it won't hit anyone without being invincible. The plot direction is good, the character descriptions are consistent, and the original writing is also interesting. I hope the author remains stable and doesn't want to be a eunuch! I really think it looks good

Raditz must be resurrected, and his combat power cannot be left behind and he cannot fall to the second echelon. It is best to stay in the first echelon. I hope the author can enrich the character of Raditz. I am a fan of Raditz written by the author on The Cultivated Star.

I like this book very much. Among the mainstream Dragon Ball online stories about time travel and cheating systems and harems, there is such a well-written growth story. It is really interesting. After I tied it, I thought it was a trap, but I found out that it is still being updated. I was even more surprised! I hope the author will not be fooled and will not tire himself out by adding more updates! 😘😘