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Except for This One, Dragon Ball Has No Masterpieces.
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Are There No Good Books About Dragon Ball? Looking for Dragon Ball 9.0 or Above
I want to read a book similar to "Dragon Ball Legend (Also known as: Dragon Ball Super: Salted Fish Master, double rewards for apprentices)".
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With All Due Respect, Dragon Ball and Human Novels Are No Longer Masterpieces. If You Don't Agree, Come and Argue!
With all due respect, Dragon Ball and human novels are no longer masterpieces. If you don't agree, come and argue!
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Dragon Ball, Frieza, Cell
Reborn or traveled through the world of Dragon Ball, becoming a member of the frozen demon clan, or Frieza, or the android Cell, whether there is a system or not, I really want to see it!
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Not dismantling CP, no system, respecting the original work... Being able to do these things has surpassed many Dragon Ball fanfics. By taking Gohan away to explore the two Saiyans Raditz and Nappa, I have to sigh that this is a good inspiration. Judging from the various detailed settings, the author has indeed put a lot of effort into it. There is an obvious problem. The changed character of Raditz collides with the character of Piccolo in the original work. This puts Piccolo in an awkward position. Vegeta is the second male lead, Gohan's godfather was taken away by Raditz, and he lost a year of intimacy with Gohan. How to deal with the relationship between Piccolo and Gohan is a difficult problem. I hope the author can handle it properly [sending my heart] I am a little disappointed. There is actually nothing wrong with the plot and character design of the work itself, but the author's attitude towards the work is really sad. Everyone is reporting that they can't see updated chapters. This is actually because the author copied other people's posts and pasted them into his own work without a bottom line in order to make up for the daily update of words. This practice is really difficult to criticize. I think this will not make the loyal readers who are struggling to catch up on updates happy in any way. I hope the author can cherish his work and not let down every reader who loves this book [sad]
I finished watching it again. There is no time traveler, but it restores the character of the original work very well.
Yes, the characterization is basically the same as the original work, except that Vegeta is a bit clownish. I hope the author will put more effort into portraying Vegeta and let him complete several stages of transformation. In fact, Vegeta's feelings for Gohan in the original work are very complicated. The first apology in his life was given to Gohan, and the first time he fully acknowledged the advantages of others was also Gohan. When Gohan regressed, he would supervise him like an elder.
In fact, I have always thought that the Saiyan race is very strange. Although they are known as a fighting nation, they have the buff of healing from serious injuries and combat power, but the more relaxed they are in self-cultivation, the more they can break through to the big realm. For example, Vegeta, who has been practicing in the early stage is of no use. The first time he broke through was to fall in love with Bulma, break through the Super Series, and Trunk Si enjoys the family relationship between father and son and breaks through to Super 2. On the contrary, Goku has always been ahead of Vegeta after practicing and practicing and playing. In Dragon Ball Super, after Vegeta completely relaxed, he did not lag behind Goku significantly. Another example is Gabe and the others from the sixth universe. They do not advocate fighting and killing, and their combat power is much higher than that of the Saiyans of the seventh universe. Even Gohan caught up with Super Blue in his beast form instantly. Therefore, if you travel to the Dragon Ball world and become Saiyans, practicing normal life is the fastest way to improve your combat power.
Okay, well written
Although the author failed to finish it, he made up for the ending after a month. There are not many Dragon Ball fan fictions featuring little Gohan and not Gohan who traveled through time and space. The character is very consistent with the original work. It is good to see the growth of this character. It's just that the popularity is relatively low. The author can't persist and won't write it. ๑•́₃•̀๑
Only the word "awesome" can express my feelings. The writing is much better than those other time-traveling system stallion Dragon Ball novels. Unfortunately, I can only give five stars, which is too few.
I highly recommend it. It doesn't have a breakdown in combat power, and it won't hit anyone without being invincible. The plot direction is good, the character descriptions are consistent, and the original writing is also interesting. I hope the author remains stable and doesn't want to be a eunuch! I really think it looks good
Raditz must be resurrected, and his combat power cannot be left behind and he cannot fall to the second echelon. It is best to stay in the first echelon. I hope the author can enrich the character of Raditz. I am a fan of Raditz written by the author on The Cultivated Star.
I like this book very much. Among the mainstream Dragon Ball online stories about time travel and cheating systems and harems, there is such a well-written growth story. It is really interesting. After I tied it, I thought it was a trap, but I found out that it is still being updated. I was even more surprised! I hope the author will not be fooled and will not tire himself out by adding more updates! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Very nice, fits the character What originally happened in the parallel universe, Gohan dreamed and learned the original moves. This setting is very good.
It's great. I haven't read this kind of pure Dragon Ball novel on Tomato for a long time.
It's very well written. It's written in a different sense, giving fans of the original novel a different feeling. It's a bit like playing Dragon Ball Xenoverse. The original time and space have changed and taken a new direction. The author dares to write and writes well. I hope I can stick to it.
It's pretty good so far, keep up the good work
Very good Dragon Ball fanfic
Is this probably a breath of fresh air in Dragon Ball novels?
The author wrote very realistically in the final chapter. The ending was sudden but also very realistic. The writing style is top-notch and the imagination is excellent. However, according to the author, the occasional flash of inspiration is not very occasional. Overall, the novel is very interesting, but the sudden ending is a flaw. Looking forward to the next book that the author may have written, giving a perfect score is the end of this book. After all, it is not easy to love.
There is no distortion of the characters' personalities, and there is no time-traveling of diaosi's heart. It's like another parallel universe of Dragon Ball. This is excellent [like]
It's beautiful, I hope the author doesn't cut it
Wonderful, so wonderful
I kind of regret reading this book so early, there are so few words [crying]
The novel suddenly disappeared, but there is nothing I can do about it. I have been reading this novel for half a year, from when I read more than a dozen pictures to now... I will give this book five stars to put an end to it...
Do it faster, do it faster, do it faster, do it faster, [punch harder] [punch harder] [punch harder]
It's been a while since I watched it, but I forgot to comment [face covering]
There are very few people writing about Dragon Ball these days. Come on, authors.
In fact, I just read the plot of Dragon Ball Z. This novel is quite interesting, and it shouldn't end here!
It's well written, and Dragon of Ad is very much like the original version of Dragon Ball.
So, who is the protagonist?
Quite interesting and beautiful
True to the original work