The Daughter of a Wealthy Family and Her Little Bastard

Dear author, please revise the previous chapters when you have time. If the first two chapters are as exciting as the later chapters, I will never let me open and close them several times! The latter part and the first two chapters were really written by the same person.

From the perspective of the heroine, I write about what she sees in this class. The heroine does have a filter for her first love because of Mu Qiang. Fortunately, the heroine is sober, sees the true face of the scumbag, and does not engage in female rivalry with the heroine. I hope that the heroine can always keep a clear mind, and let nature take its course when it comes to career and love. She is not anxious in high school [face covering]

The writing is very real. The heroine is very rational and I love her very much. I just don't know if there is CP. Even if there is, I don't really want the heroine to fall in love. It's best to focus on career or myself.

It looks good. I hope the heroine is beautiful alone or there is another male protagonist. These three are not worthy of the heroine [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] Especially the one who is involved with Xiao Bailian. I have started to hate him. Now my three favorite rankings for him are Sheng > E-sports player > He is involved with Xiao Bailian

[Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] (It's a long review) (Involves some spoilers) It's very well written. I think the character of the heroine is what attracts me the most. She is the one who maintains her own sense of self in the chaos, is loyal and will stand up for her friends, is calm, strong, and very smart. The author's writing style is also very good. What impressed me most was a scene: "Shu Wan stared at the golden light that was not uncomfortable even if he looked directly at it. The golden threads were constantly splitting, reuniting, and changing as the car started, creating a gorgeous and dazzling scene." I feel that the author's writing style is very gorgeous, but it is not a pile of gorgeous words, but a very gorgeous world. It is what Shu Wan sees and the extremely complex class he lives in. I think the character logic is online and the storyline is also very good. As for the male protagonist, regarding Xiang Chu as someone Shu Wan liked before, this is Shu Wan's explanation of a strong (so to speak) Mu Qiang. (Shu Wan is sapiosexual, right?) I personally feel that Xiang Chu is not actually brave. It is Shu Wan's love that gives him the confidence to be arrogant. He is still essentially a child who has not grown up under the control of his parents. He will not offend other people for Xu Yingying, but his attitude towards Shu Wan is very average, even bad. It can be said that she is confident in being loved, and expects him to be loved back. I can't tell whether Xu Yingying loves Xiang Chu, but she definitely loves herself more. Then there is Master Shanda. I think he is still in a state of being dragged along by someone similar to his fiancée. I don't know when he will be able to make it clear. Finally, Gu Heng, this character is more attractive to me. He is a young man with a poor life and a miserable genius. He is a mouth-shaped character. This is how Shu Wan feels about him. I think this is similar to a bosom friend, a good friend. Of course, Gu Heng's feeling for Shu Wan is definitely not a bosom friend. It is the kind of person who has been the only light that shines in the dark days for more than ten years, and it shines on it several times. [Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing] So as for Gu, he has an inferiority complex compared to Young Master Sheng. He will have that sense of unworthiness. But in the latest chapters, I personally feel that Shu Wan needs someone who understands her. Sheng cannot be a person who understands her because his environment and education cannot Let him understand how to empathize with Shu Wan, who is angry because his friend went abroad. But Gu Heng can, and his comfort is actually very effective. He can understand what Shu Wan is doing and give Shu Wan spiritual comfort. From this point of view, Gu Heng has a greater chance of winning, and his personality is more attractive (of course, giving a medal for his birthday) He seems a little stupid [laughing][laughing][laughing]). The above is my small summary of the whole book, and then the author said that there should be a split ending, which I am looking forward to. As far as the author is concerned, this book is actually not very popular, and then he is thinking about what should be done. So as far as I am concerned, personally, I still hope to have a more... Um... It should be called a happy ending. I hope Shu Wan can still be sober and strong, so I focus on no cp. Of course, how you write it in the end depends entirely on how the author continues [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]. If you are going to start a new article, don't forget to finish it [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]. I will continue to support your new book.

The heroine is sober and dares to love and hate. She is talented and hard-working. The character creation is very vivid. Come on. It's really good to read, and I feel more and more exciting as I read later. Each supporting character has created a vivid image. The heroine is sober and intelligent, talented and hard-working. The plot is vivid and natural. The turning point of each character does not seem blunt, and there is no sense of dissonance in the transition. The writing is getting better and better. I also hope that the book will be liked by more and more people (PS: Da Da Da bravely fly, fans will always be with you, I love you~)

[The author himself] The copywriting is absolutely consistent with the content. If you think it doesn't look good, you can go out and turn left without sending it. If you are confused about why it is different from the copywriting, please be patient and read it to the end (it was my problem that I was too slow to write the article for the first time [crying]). The following is a bit of the author's journey: Shu Wan is not pure and kind, but is closer to chaos and kindness, but she is not very emotional and doesn't care about many things, so she didn't look so happy in the early stage. This is not because she is a holy mother. In fact, she is very decisive, but she has not touched the reverse scale. Later, something happened to a good friend. Shu Wan was confused at first, but he quickly regained his composure and killed the two instigators. Personally, I think the supporting roles are all outstanding. Whether it is the contrasting Xu Yingying, the selfish Ye Jiaqi, or the decisive and decisive Fan Simin, they all regard "people who do not work for themselves will be destroyed by heaven and earth" as a standard. The life experiences of Xiao Gu and Xiao Sheng are expected to be written after Chapter 120. Xiao Gu doesn't like Xu Yingying and has never been together; Xiao Sheng doesn't like Yin Qiongyan even more, and there is no such thing as a fiancée. If you are interested, you can read it yourself. I won't spoil it (o^^o) The book is expected to be 300,000 words long and will definitely be finished in March. The author's first book has some problems in terms of plot design and characterization. Moreover, the author likes to foreshadow and want to create reversals. As a result, the writing power is insufficient and it is messed up. Many people took a few glances and said that it did not match the text. After a few glances, they said that the three male protagonists all bowed their heads, and then ran away. If you can watch it, you will know that the male protagonists are very clean! Hey, I will learn my lesson, please support me, I love you cute~

It's so beautiful, it's my first time to review a book, it's really well written! It is not the kind of heroine literature that is popular on the market. It's a very fresh kind of article. It's written from the perspective of the heroine's identity, class, etc. It's very meaningful. I like it very much! !

Ahhhh I can finally comment! ! ! It's a pity that I'm not the first one [I'm about to cry] I love this book so much~ The writing style is very good ~ the characters are well created ~ it makes me feel like I have grown a brain [laughs] [laughs]

The more you write later, the better.

It's very interesting to watch. The female protagonist is sober and dares to love and hate. The male protagonists have average personalities. But fortunately, I'm not here to see men. I hope there won't be any emotional lines in the end. Wanwan is beautiful! The images of the supporting characters are well created, especially the female characters, such as the ambitious Sister Fan, the desperate Xu Yingying, and the arrogant and domineering Yin Qiongyan. Moreover, Gu is smart and tolerant in the later stage, and the source of Sheng's feelings has not been revealed yet, but there is probably a story! Please update more, author! Not enough!

Zundu likes big letters, but now I just want Wanwan to be alone. Although I personally like Sheng, he still has a difficult problem in Pingjing, which is bound to be difficult to solve. There are two people left, uh, I feel that they are very mismatched in all aspects. Now when I see this, I feel that they are very mismatched. Then when Xu came to find Wanwan, I had a guess. Now after reading it, I just want to say, can Wanwan be ignored and no one should be bothered? Dumei is okay.

The three people prepared by the male protagonist feel that they are not worthy of the female protagonist. The female protagonist is hardworking, has self-control and is hardworking. She is clear-headed and self-aware, and will stop losses in time. She is a little naive and very cute.

Well written, encouraging~

🉑Okay, okay, okay

It looks good but there are no extras

I like Gu Heng. At present, he is really smart, gentle, transparent and tough, very tolerant and a little cute.