Sihe*************

What the hell are you writing? In those days, it cost 300 to pick up a rib and open your mouth. Why don't you go to heaven? It's no big deal that you're hurting people.

The protagonist's sister is a primary school student at the beginning, but she soon becomes a worker. She is completely wrong and the writing is average.

It's almost impossible to write in one sentence, and many things don't add up. At the beginning, the protagonist's sister was just a primary school student, but only a few days later, she became an adult in the later chapters and worked in a steel rolling mill. At the beginning, the protagonist sent Sha Zhu to the hospital, but in the later chapters, she said that her relationship with Sha Zhu was okay, and they talked together.

Since the author's father died in the steel rolling mill, shouldn't the steel rolling mill also reserve a job position in addition to the pension? Why did he ask Xu Damao to make arrangements in order to enter the steel rolling mill? Does Xu Damao have this ability? He still had his own job after taking his father's place. Could it be that Xu Damao became the factory director?

After these latter people came out of the hospital, it felt like someone else had written it, so they couldn't pick it up.

The writing is a mess and I have basically no IQ. If you want to read this book, you won't be able to read it at a glance unless you lower your IQ to a negative number. After all, their IQ is not online, but you simply don't have it.

The protagonist's words and deeds do not conform to the characteristics of the times. Every chapter is full of words + broken bones, system + violence.

What a mess, what the hell?

What are you writing about?

I can't understand the sentences and it's very uncomfortable.

Why is the timeline so messed up? In an instant, the protagonist has employees

Messy and disorganized