Mr. Storyteller

The writing is bland (not in a derogatory sense) and the writing is solid, similar to the style of the books I read when I was a kid. It's a pity that the thinking is average. I dare not think about a talented heroine, I dare not think about the heroine marrying an oiran, I dare not think about the heroine being able to pursue an official career (there are real examples in ancient times), I dare not think about what the heroine can change with her intelligence. If the author has a lot of female consciousness. It would be a very good novel, I don't like the plot of the heroine supporting her younger brother to study.

It's particularly beautiful, but even though there are too many storytelling stories and there should be a little more plot, this book is about female storytellers, so it's still barely acceptable [exploration]

In a word, it's super good-looking and addictive. I love reading this kind of niche novel. I love the two heroines even more. But I suddenly feel a little pity for the heroine and Qin Sang. Ahhh, it's too short to watch. I'm so curious about the plot between the arrogant princess and the heroine.

HE, don't force BE, reality is already hard enough [I'm about to cry]

Panning for gold in tomato poop and discovering another treasure! However, the content of the storytelling is too long-winded. I spent a lot of space on the content of the storytelling earlier. Although I wrote Xu San's evaluation, what the heroine expressed in her speech, and revealed the heroine's thoughts to describe the heroine's character, it is too much, too long and detailed. Reading one novel is equivalent to reading many books [laughing and crying] Then I wrote some reactions and responses to the heroine's encounter with the plot, and there were several contradictions. The heroine is slowly awakening and growing slowly. I hope the author can maintain the previous level and update it soon!

Not bad, keep up the good work

It's a good book with novel material and wonderful ideas.

I really love it and I just hope it gets better and better in the future. Hang Shuzhang feels that men have better thoughts than women, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable😔

A thoughtful article, I hope the writing will be more refined. It is not yet mature, but it is still higher than the average. If you stick to it, your achievements will not be low.

Not bad, the story told by the storyteller is also great [blowing kiss]

The two heroines are so good-looking, I want to see more of their daily lives.

The opening angle is novel and engaging. I like the protagonist's 'ordinary' setting, which is good for growth. The author's words and sentences are witty, and the heroine's ideological positioning is for women to speak out and wave the flag, which won my heart. At present, the plot of the reunion of the two heroines is slightly lacking in excitement, and the main plot is a bit tired. Overall, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Good book. Born from the grassroots, step by step, there is no golden finger, no one person is inferior to ten thousand people, and there is no protagonist halo. There are twists and turns in the middle, ups and downs, and a living person. With shortcomings, is life? The reason why there are fewer readers may be because this article is a narrative and the plot is gentle. Keep reading carefully, don't feel bad in your heart

The author is very thoughtful. I read a lot of story books and they are very attractive! But it would be better if it was a little sweeter. There are slight flaws in the author's writing, and the book and the comments are a bit confused, but it's still very interesting! Alas, although I really look forward to seeing the two of them getting married happily, it should be the end by then, and I feel a little reluctant to let go. Speaking of which, the story about traveling through modern times has always puzzled me, but it doesn't matter, just think of it as Nan Ke Yimeng.

It is difficult for a woman to get up in the world and achieve a career; women are happy with each other but always have to be torn apart by the world. It is sad and lamentable. I just hope they can have a good ending...

Good, good, good, well written. In the later stage, the intention must be good, "Women are never anyone's vassals, and they can also make their own day." It would be better if the expression could be more powerful. Each character has its own shining and unique points. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The author wrote it very well, thank you for your hard work! But in the early stage of storytelling, there were too many and too many plots, so I forced myself to read back. I had to give up after more than 220 chapters. It was my problem. I don't like to read stories with too long plots. I recommend it to friends who are patient and want to read it.

Then the princess of some country also has a secret crush (girl) (from the chapter where she was drunk), it should be said that there is a pair of deputy CPs, and they should also be very sad.

Treasure books. Totally not enough! Strong recommendation [asking for more updates] [top post]

It's so beautiful, I love it so much, neither of them wants to be [crying] in the end

The story-telling plot in the novel is very exciting, the story within the story is brilliant, and the jokes are also funny. Lily is so fragrant. I support it! The score is too low. I gave it 9.2 Points for the paper. The storyline is still acceptable!

The logic is clear and the details are exquisitely drawn. It is a good book so far.

Looks good (*/∇＼*) Looks good! ! ! [Love][love][love]

Novel and good-looking, good

Nice. Very nice to look at.

Nice book, keep it up! Be optimistic about the author!

It's good-looking, the plot is well-written, and it looks very comfortable.

It looks good, but my little heart really can't stand it [crying] [crying] [crying]

Nice! Come on yesterday!

It's beautiful, come and see it all Five-star praise[note]