Beast Control: the Eliminated System and My Sudden Death

To be honest, the fact that the system occupies the space of autonomously awakened beast masters is quite unfavorable. It can even be said to be a poisonous point. This is because it allows the heroine to change from a genius who has autonomously awakened to an ordinary person who is artificially awakened. Because it advances quickly, I still have to find excuses. But I can't say it is too useful when I see it later, but it's okay. I'm not that annoying anymore. There are many restrictions and there are gods. If the beast appears, it will be discovered. I don't dare to come out at all. I don't dare to think about it. If the heroine needs to use the system urgently and there happens to be an existence equal to the mythical beast, how should the heroine deal with it? Others are okay. It is not too exaggerated to win sometimes in the battle. I still hope that the heroine can occasionally collect more information and learn more about various beast control knowledge. The system is unreliable and its information cannot be updated all the time.

There is actually an author who is willing to play with the insect type. There are no big problems with the setting and writing, and the heroine is also very likable. Moreover, as a beast-control novel, it is normal that the novel does not revolve around the protagonist, but mainly focuses on animal spirits. Because a female channel's beast-taming novel became popular, and there were many imitations of it. When I went in, I saw that the beast pets were not lifelike at all. When I read the comments, some of the authors didn't even know about Pokémon and were imitating others' writing. So I really feel that this book is really good. The only shortcoming is that there is too little content [shy]

I don't give myself too much praise [shy] If you have a good plot, you can leave me a message. If I think it makes sense, I will write it. Although my writing skills are mediocre [shy] (If you are good at writing, just write it yourself! Do you understand?)

I've only read more than ten chapters and can't get into it. I can't say it's not good, I can only say it's not great. I think it's very ordinary so far. The introduction gave me the feeling that the system and the heroine are bad friends, but the article didn't make me feel that (there is indeed a plot of cricketing each other in the article) , but this kind of plot should make people feel beautiful or laugh or yearn for it, but it is not reflected. It makes me feel that it is just for the sake of fighting each other. Although it is this setting, readers can see that this is a setting, and it is obvious, so there is no way to insert it.) I've also seen the introduction say "slow heat", but "slow heat" doesn't mean a running story, it doesn't mean it has no characteristics. The protagonist's daily life gives me the feeling of a running list, including the subsequent plot, it's like a story. This plot needs to be talked about but there is nothing attractive, so the author just talks about it. (Maybe it's because of poor writing. Some people say that it gets better later, but I can't read it now [crying]) Seeing that the current combat power, fun, warmth, characteristics, and plot are not there, or in other words, they are all a little bit but too ordinary. If there is any outstanding point, I will continue to watch it enthusiastically. Now it is like eating a meal that is not full and tasteless. The bond with the beast is not deep. To put it bluntly, there is no cool point. The real slow-burning novel has the cool bit at the end. , But it was able to capture the reader's heart in the early stage and make them look forward to the follow-up excitement, but it did not capture the reader, at least it did not capture me [crying] It's very uncomfortable when a slow-burning novel becomes unpopular (parallel comparison, compared to the pet beast novels I have read, the protagonist has less bonds and connections with the second team, and there is no feeling that the pet beast is alive, it is still a paper man... Animal) Also, there are more than ten chapters in which the Taming Beast has no name. Generally speaking, in the Taming Beast novel, only the author of Taming Taming who appears rarely will not waste words and ink on writing names... Or the character who only regards the Taming Beast as a Taming Beast or even a tool should not have a name, otherwise all the supporting characters would have names. I also comforted myself that maybe the setting in this article was nameless, and then I saw that the system had a name, but the beast control was still nameless. The system also occupies a position. I know that the system has given the protagonist a lot of conveniences, but the original genius turned out to be an ordinary person. There is currently no setting to suppress geniuses in the text, so why not let the heroine be a genius from the beginning, even if the system is to detect beasts and has no combat power or other functions. Forget it if you don't have talent. If you have talent and don't show it or can't show it, you will have to worry about it, ugh. To be honest, I decided to read this article after reading the comments section and the introduction. Although some people denounced it, I still came with great expectations. After all, if the animal pet article is written in a warm and heartwarming way, it will be very attractive, or the harmful friends falling in love and killing each other in the introduction can also be written... Maybe I will read it again in the future. It is very common. The rating in my mind is three stars, but it is not easy to write the article. Think about it, so I give it four stars.

It's a pretty good beast-control novel. The writing style was poor in the early stage, but it gets better and better later on. I can clearly feel the author's progress. Come on, author. I suggest the author change the first few chapters when he has time. Otherwise, it will be easy to dissuade newcomers. The later chapters will become more and more exciting, so to speak. It is a very good beast-controlling novel. Maybe the writing at the beginning is too discouraging and the results are not very satisfactory. In today's online novels, the first few chapters are too important. In the fast-paced era, many people basically give up after reading the beginning if they are not satisfied. However, this novel really gets better as it goes on. I feel that it should have better results. I saved up for half a month and finished it in 20 minutes. It's so hard to follow up [crying][crying][crying]

It's really hard to name a pet Baozhong. Zhongbao and Diebao are better. I couldn't read it after a few chapters after naming it. As a name, Zhong either reminds me of a zhongma or a miscellaneous zhong. The author has no other problems. I'll give you a five-star goodbye [love]

It's really good-looking, I like the heroine very much, and the system is also good. The system is equivalent to occupying a space, which is equivalent to another beast of the heroine, so it's not really a loss, and I know a lot about the system. Then the heroine's other pre-sales are also very good, she is very obedient and well-behaved, and the heroine treats them equally, and then there is the interaction between them, and they are also very loving. They are also very powerful when fighting. I like it very much, I like it, I like it, and I want to watch it.

Is the heroine too objectively not courageous enough? Or why does he always feel that he can't get this result? The character of the heroine is indeed very consistent with that of an ordinary person in reality, but she is the heroine, how can she behave like an ordinary person?

I like it, Feng Ling is warm and has a high talent for language. She not only regards Congcong and the beasts as partners, I think she regards them as family members. Finally, cheers [laughs]! (Only personal opinion)

I really like this kind of article that describes the daily life of ordinary people controlling beasts. It is not about geniuses who are always different, but millions of you and me who will become luckier as long as they work harder. The heroine is an orphan, and Congcong is a system that was forced to be destroyed. Two ignorant souls came together. To this world, they are just two newborns, working together and exploring together. Although sometimes they dislike each other and sometimes they are inadequate, they never deny themselves and give up on each other. It is a very healing article on beast control [Love]

Can the author include more battles with girls? I feel like the women who appear more often now are all coordinated. Although girls are more fond of beauty, there are also many who like to play against each other, and if you set it up to coordinate, you may spend more energy and money than playing against each other. With a large base, I should still choose to fight.

It's okay. The writing alone is much improved compared to the previous chapters; it's not a brainless article, although there are cheats, but it's logical, and you don't have to be the champion just because you are the protagonist, regardless of the protagonist's own strength (the protagonist is only third in the freshman competition, which is in line with his own strength); the first spiritual beast is an insect type, good review, it is the first time I have seen the protagonist's contract with an insect type spiritual beast.

I feel that the usefulness of the system has not been fully utilized by the protagonist. You can kill spirit beasts in the secret realm to obtain points, but there is no digitized explanation of how to obtain points. Moreover, the author arranges for the protagonist to obtain points with few plots, which makes the acquisition of points a bit confusing. It makes people feel that the author is pressing the schedule. At the same time, there are some typos and sentences in the article, and the author's writing style is also poor. It needs to be improved, more detailed descriptions should be added, and the length of some unnecessary plots should be shortened, otherwise it will make people feel like they are watching a running account. There are also some personal opinions. When the heroine's spiritual beast was captured, I felt that the protagonist was not decisive enough. If it were me, I would give priority to controlling the person and wait for the police to arrive. The protagonist is not incapable of this ability, but he did not implement it. But this book also has many advantages, including the daily life and emotions between people and spirit beasts, and the common growth between spirit beasts. The world view of this book is an urban novel similar to Pokémon. When reading, you can feel the author's care in portraying the bond between people and spirit beasts, which makes people feel warm and familiar with the Pokémon Unseal chapter for the first time. As for some readers who think that the system occupies a spiritual beast position and that using the system to take exams is not good, I think there is no problem with this. We can understand the system as a knowledge-based spiritual beast, so the protagonist brings a spiritual beast with him when he awakens. I think there is no problem with using the ability of his own spiritual beast to get good grades in the exam. Summary: This book is an excellent elf novel despite its flaws. I think the current rating is still low for the true level of the article (mainly due to the author's name). I hope the author can write better and better, and I hereby give you a five-star review.

This book is very interesting. Unlike other books, the protagonist contracts an insect-type unloading beast at the beginning, which has a fresh feel. The writing is also very good, and I feel that it highlights the character of the pet beast. Among them, Baodie was the one who left the deepest impression on me.

There are no top-notch plots and characters, just ordinary writing. I really like the heroine and her elves, especially there is no cijin. The gender of the pet is never emphasized, and the gender of the characters is never emphasized. Just focus on this. It's great.

Love to watch. I just feel that the protagonist has not integrated into this world. I know that he has come back as an adult, but the female protagonist has a feeling of using tools to the spiritual beasts, and does not really have the feeling of treating them as her own family? (Perhaps)

After reading the author's comments, I found that this is my first book. The writing style at the beginning is really not that good, but it gradually gets better at the end. It's not just mindless writing, it's logical and reasonable. The loss of wealth and honor in the introduction is an exchange of equal value, which makes it seem real and gives something in return. There is a feeling of laying a foundation in the early stage and soaring in the later stage, but the heroine does not feel aggrieved.

Ah, this is my favorite type. Compared to the exaggerated beast control stories that are obviously a weak race but are made to look like quasi-gods, it is better to have a loser and a win, with the winner mostly beating the same race and the same level but not being too exaggerated. Mainly playing battles, I also participated in a gorgeous competition in order to accompany my friends to save money on tickets, and then returned to playing battles.

Up to chapter 30 review, this article is okay. The heroine is very in line with the reaction of ordinary people traveling through the world of beast control. She has not really integrated into the world of beast control yet, so she is not sincere about her own beast control (a bit like a tool), and she also relies heavily on the golden finger of the system (not learning on her own), so the heroine seems to have no character charm. But the author said that when you become mentally strong, you will study hard and grow. I will take a look. I saw the pet beast was named. Baodie and Baozhong don't sound good, and the author won't change them. Baozhong is like a curse word here. I searched and found that there are more than two thousand... In fact, a lot of people quit here (the author said that it was too much to change). I would say that in any game, let the opponent's pet laugh at it and change it. Or if the next pet says that it doesn't like Bao*'s name, it's okay to change it all to *Bao or something like that. When someone first mentioned it, the author just arranged some small things and made some reasonable changes (no need to change them all). Now the delay is getting longer and longer. It makes me feel tired just looking at it, and I have no expectations anymore...

Recommended for old bookworms. I found this article when I was in a book shortage. It's not the kind of template article. It's really good.

Now that I have read Chapter 7, I feel that the world view is quite clear. Then, the protagonist's first pet animal is a bug. To be honest, I didn't expect it, because in other stories I read, the first protagonist was quite awesome. The author of the copy said it was a slow one. I hope the protagonist will become more and more powerful in the future.

It's tied once. Don't read this book with low ratings. It's actually very good-looking. It's not brainless or cp-y. There's no strange male gaze angle. It's all about the female protagonist and the beast master, and the friendly interaction of the lovely system. It's not too toxic. In my opinion, some people may think that the system takes up the innate space of the heroine and feels that the heroine is wronged. In fact, I think meeting the system is the biggest luck for the heroine. The system and the heroine All the same, they all grow up slowly. In the process of the heroine becoming stronger, the system plays an indispensable or even main role. Although you may think that the system is not good at first, as long as you look at it later, you will find that under the author's writing, the system has also changed from a machine to a human. It is amazing. Come on, the author, please don't give up. I hope there will be more updates. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's very well written. It's one of my favorite books and I read it every day. First of all, the beginning was a bit dull, but then it became more and more exciting, very exciting, and the plot did not make me feel useless! ! Secondly, the characterization is really good, and the heroine is not forced to force Long Aotian, which is a kind of 🧠. The other matching characters are also very good, especially the heroine's contracted beast, which is really super cute and hardworking. In the end, it wasn't enough! Big, please update soon, Wadasi, I'm hungry [I'm about to cry] Come and see them all! ! ! Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people

There really weren't many bright spots in the early stage. The heroine was poor and the system lacked energy. It was really accumulated bit by bit. Everyone likes to watch something fun and cheat from the beginning. However, the character of the pet beast is quite delicate and cute, so I slowly got into it. The description of the battle is still a bit responsible. Without any imagination and sense of graphics, it may be difficult to understand. But the author is a newcomer and his writing style is okay. Looking forward to the author's next novels! (=^▽^=)(=^▽^=)

It looks good, the heroine is getting stronger all the time, and she is not proud of her talent at all. Instead, she can pretend to be weak, sinister, smart, planning, and humane. I like her, let's lead my friends to fight together

Five points for encouragement. The author himself said that he watched Beast Control from Zero and learned some worldviews and frameworks from it. I think overall it is good. His writing skills were not very good at the beginning but gradually improved. Unfortunately, it suddenly started to accelerate in the middle and late stages. In fact, it could have been expanded more, and the ending was a bit hasty (the same is true for the extra chapter); in fact, the interactions between the heroine and the various pet beasts are quite cute ~ some words and the like can be modified (for example, boy actually refers to girls and boys, you can use girl boy, or boy boy)

It looks good, why don't many people watch it? [Thinking] I still hope it will be more popular [Send heart] It's not enough to watch [laughing] [Fulled]

To be honest, this book is really good, I don't know why it's not rated highly.

Pretty good, come on It seems that there are no big problems so far, but the progress of the plot is a bit slow. However, the author has been insisting on updating. Don't worry about tj problems. It doesn't matter if the plot is slow.

It looks good, and you won't lose money if you invest in it.