A Magical Phone, A Life of Immortal Cultivation

The writing style is average, and encouragement is needed. Try your best to finish it, don't finish it, come on. After watching it, there are no obvious highlights. It is quite mediocre and the details are not in place. I hope the plot will be better later.

I've already read Chapter 17, why is it that the cheating pig's feet are worse than me? [Shocked]

I have seen this type of movies, but there are very few that write about this kind of subject matter. The subject matter is very attractive, but it feels strange to watch, not refreshing, and it feels like a mechanical application. Brothers who like to watch it are cool, you can quit. It can be read, but it is average. Generally speaking, it is okay. In summary, I like your subject matter very much, but there is room for improvement in the content of the story, so please do it⛽. 🤔🤔🤔

It's very well written, but it's too short and not enjoyable to read.

Not to mention other things, at least it is a complete long story, which beats 99% of similar novels.

Quick update! ! ! It looks pretty good now, with no flaws. I hope to add more heroines. Are you not accepting the heroines from Magic Phone?

After watching a little bit, although the technique is relatively immature, the overall structure is okay and the subject matter is very attractive. It is worth watching.

So beautiful, my first time commenting

The author is okay, keep up the good work

Too immature. I'm trying very hard to write, but it's not enough yet