Sun Wukong Refused to Be a Scum and Was Banned by the Dragon God

This book is comfortable to read just because it retains the original character of Goku. . Unlike other time travel novels, Invincible System Diaosi's selfish soul is so disgusting.

It's pretty good. It's pretty good among Dragon Ball novels. Anyway, I don't really like novels where Blue Star's soul travels through time. It's completely tasteless. I'd rather the characters in this kind of novels travel to other worlds.

This is a very good story about Goukong. The author has grasped the character of Sun Wukong. The Dragon Ball novel in Tomato is very good. I hope the author can write a better plot again.

If you have any questions, you can post them on this floor Regarding plot and character issues, the author will make modifications as appropriate. If you can, please help me click on the c update button every time you watch it. Thank you very much [blowing kiss] Regarding Chapter 57, which many people criticized in the comments, I feel it is necessary to explain and clarify the true content of the text: 1. Sun Wukong is not without resistance. He activated the original strength of the universe at the first time, but in order to brush the Saiyan's passive near-death resurrection, so that the effect of improving the strength is better, he also released the original strength state, and took the initiative to receive more damage. 2. The reason why Sun Wukong gave up the resistance was because he considered the new friends he had made in the new world and did not want to implicate these people (considering that the people of the empire would settle accounts later, it would be useless to use their original strength to warn people in person, and they might do the same thing in front of their faces but behind their backs, which would be self-defeating). This also reflects Sun Wukong's mature side when it comes to things, and his character that is not selfish. 3. Sun Wukong used the time of the seventh universe to kick and injure the little fairy, and used his momentum to scare her away from her advances. It was not that there was no resistance. I hope that book friends will try to be careful when reading. It is not easy to write a book. The author is very grateful to the readers for their support and understanding.

This thing mainly depends on the freshness. Wukong travels through various worlds to adventure. It feels very similar to the new big demon that is about to be released. The most important thing is that it is not like some time-travel novels. I know everything and feel an objective perspective. It is only a little bit more refreshing. The personality charm of the rest of the people is gone. And this is wearing Wukong. His big nervous mind really looks very good in some places, so give it a try.

"But as long as I see it, it is impossible to ignore it. I only know that it is best to have as few bad guys as possible in this world, otherwise there will be more and more bad guys, and one day they will hurt the things I value." Kakarot Sun Wukong

Wukong's character is very restored. Come on, author. There's a lot of originality [laughing and crying]

The character's personality is quite restored, and it is unavoidable to be slightly OOC. After all, the author is not Akira Toriyama himself. If GT is written in the introduction, how will GT appear? If possible, I would like to see Super Sky help GT Air counterattack and kill the One Star Dragon [Blow a kiss] What a pity, let's take a look at the duration

Very well written, keep it up!

It's actually pretty good. As long as the main world doesn't drag on too many chapters and the anime world is written more, it'll be fine. (Super Wukong is quite restorative, allowing Wukong to slowly transform his character back to Z Wukong, so that he doesn't appear to be a loser when he makes sense) [Sneaky laugh] I will forever commemorate Mr. Akira Toriyama [crying]

It's really good

It's rare to find such a beautiful book. [Smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] Why did Hao Duanduan's rating drop so much? It really is.

I don't quite agree with some of what the author wrote, but it's really interesting. This is probably the conservatism of a Dragon Ball fan.

The battle scenes are well written, I wish there were more punches and flesh.

With 24,000 combat power, you can explode stars. Vegeta, who just came to Earth, also has such a combat power. 150,000,000 Combat power is actually a relatively standard combat power that can destroy multiple planets at the same time.

I like the book very much. The protagonist of Dragon Ball has a second dimension, which is perfect. There is no need to be a stallion like some protagonists who travel through the second dimension.

It's still pretty good. The combat power is so different from the original version. Kame Sennin can blast the moon with just a few hundred combat power. When will One Piece come out? Goku still knows Luffy.

When I read the Fate chapter, I felt that there weren't many highlights of the Saiyans. The main thing I wanted to see was that there were too few Super Saiyan transformations. No matter how strong and invincible the normal state was, transformation was not as satisfying. Inuyasha's transformation into the Super Saiyan God was really exciting for me to see. The transformation I wanted to see was to be shown to others. Byd author, you won't write the fate chapter, right? Every time this Sun Wukong leaves, he just says a few words and leaves without caring about anything. That Matou Sakura really likes this Sun Wukong. But in the end, you told me that Sakura has been training for more than ten years and you can't squeeze out a little time to make Sun Wukong funny? There are also many gaps in the dialogue with the characters that have not been filled in. For example, Matou Sakura felt sad because Goku would disappear after the Holy Grail disappeared. However, Goku did not disappear later, but his reactions and scenes were gone. He acted like a tool man who could be thrown away after use. There are many characters who are like this, and feel too much like a tool man. [Laughing awkwardly]

Suddenly I want to see what it would be like if the real great sage went into fate [face covering]

It's quite interesting, although it's obvious that the author is a new author, so many of the treatments have to be a little rough. But it is obvious that the author is carefully writing various settings, plots, and characters. It will definitely get better gradually

Okay, the author writes well

It very much restores Wukong's martial arts idiot character and innocent heart [laughing evilly]

Very interesting, I don't know why the score is so low

Although, which anime is the first world? I saw that I still haven't figured it out [what]

Sun Wukong's character is very reductive. The characters of Inuyasha's characters are also very restored. After reading your book, I figured out my own path. Every book I write has a purpose and something I need. I'll keep at it.

It's pretty good. Goku's character design is between Z and super anime. It's a bit like a master, but also a bit of a super-animated idiot [facepalm]. The shortcoming of this book is that Goku has too little interaction with the characters in each world, and he seems to be a bit of a tool. Overall, this book is pretty good. If the author makes Vegeta the protagonist in some new books (super comic character), I will definitely support it.

I haven't seen such a well-written Dragon Ball fanfic in a long time.

I really like this type of novels. Many fans have basically read them. Character time travel, chat groups and screens are my favorite types, but there are too few. Come on, author [love] [love] [love].

I think it's okay, it's more to my liking.

Yes, the author wrote Wukong's character well