Send Me 300 and I'll Start the World's Cultivation Era

It's very good-looking, I think it's very good-looking anyway. The protagonist transforms into a secret realm [the protagonist's theory, the real golden finger is a ring that can travel between two worlds with just one swipe, so he successfully deceived the first body [laughing evilly], and also brought a dog... Ah,... The white lion's body is still a child [laughing and crying]] drags characters from the mysterious land into it, controls their bodies, slays monsters and evil spirits, resists strange resurgences, and protects the world!

I hesitated for a long time between four stars or five stars! First of all, it is good to know how to create suspense! But the suspense is still being set up in Chapter 50, so you can consider whether the outline is being set, the whole chapter is very long, or the follow-up outline is still being improved... In short, overall, the opening chapter has a good introduction point. The first chapter takes "Jiang Ye" as the core, creating a "maybe a little bit exciting" suspense, and the subsequent "Butterfly Bone Weakness" are both remarkable and fascinating. As soon as the style of the novella changes and the main text begins, the "principle of suspense" has been followed to keep the reader's desire to continue reading. Next, let's talk about a few points that could be improved: The first point: Regarding the description of the protagonist Goldfinger and the opening environment of the protagonist in the opening chapter, it can actually be more streamlined. If it is a great essay or narrative essay, after having a good foundation, I can only say "awesome" for this kind of detailed description. But as far as the behind-the-scenes writing is concerned, I personally think it's still a bit too cumbersome. It could actually be more streamlined. The second point: In the interpenetrating description of the two backgrounds, your description of the different world is actually a little abrupt, or the change is too sudden, so that including me, after reading Chapter 52, the appearance of the different world in your novel is no longer in my mind. I hope the transition in this aspect can be made more natural. Of course, this also shows that your narrative in the main world is successful. Looking forward to the follow-up performance of this book... Support you, come on!

Originally I only wanted to give it three stars, but the extra one star is for the novel subject matter. The author has some plot designs that are rather inexplicable, as if he wrote them just for the sake of being happy. It's a comic book, but you have to grasp the degree of it, and don't go too far to describe the changes in the supporting characters' mentality, which will make it feel cumbersome. The progress of the protagonist has also been slowed down, and he has not made any achievements in the two worlds so far. Moreover, the monk, who was a level above Daqingxiazi, was actually killed by a mortal. Just like an ant knows the elephant's weakness, how could it possibly kill the elephant? But this book also has many shining points, and his descriptions of scenes can indeed touch people's happy points. I give you four stars and hope the author will keep up the good work.

Author, will you write another book after the last one?

The author's descriptions are very realistic. There are no logical errors so far. It is very satisfying to see the saints in front of people. Ordinary people's reactions to supernatural events are not abrupt. I mean, the author, don't you arrange supernatural events abroad? There are all dead people in the country, and there are not many dead points abroad. Moreover, there are ghosts only in the country. It is too weird. It feels like a primary school student of the Grim Reaper that wherever the protagonist goes, people die.

The description is really delicate, it's totally okay, I really like this Qingxiazi, the interaction between Qingxiazi and the protagonist really touched my heart, it's refreshing, funny, and touching. Apart from the shortcoming of being a new book and having few chapters, there's nothing bad about it [Learned]

It's been a long time since I've seen such high-quality work on Tomato, come on!

Come on, author, your writing is so wonderful. A different kind of book. I have already started promoting books.

It was well written, but the protagonist found out that he had occupied someone else's body. I didn't want to think about whether that person was dead or not. I was still panicking for a long time. Is Qingxiazi dead or not? And I feel that it would be better to add a setting where the wounds between the two worlds will not be brought back. The protagonist is using other people's bodies to explore the way. I feel that Qingxiazi has a good temper [face covering]. And if possible, I feel that the protagonist can also think about how to practice. It is not a problem to just use other people's bodies.

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