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It's very good-looking, I think it's very good-looking anyway. The protagonist transforms into a secret realm [the protagonist's theory, the real golden finger is a ring that can travel between two worlds with just one swipe, so he successfully deceived the first body [laughing evilly], and also brought a dog... Ah,... The white lion's body is still a child [laughing and crying]] drags characters from the mysterious land into it, controls their bodies, slays monsters and evil spirits, resists strange resurgences, and protects the world!

I hesitated for a long time between four stars or five stars! First of all, it is good to know how to create suspense! But the suspense is still being set up in Chapter 50, so you can consider whether the outline is being set, the whole chapter is very long, or the follow-up outline is still being improved... In short, overall, the opening chapter has a good introduction point. The first chapter takes "Jiang Ye" as the core, creating a "maybe a little bit exciting" suspense, and the subsequent "Butterfly Bone Weakness" are both remarkable and fascinating. As soon as the style of the novella changes and the main text begins, the "principle of suspense" has been followed to keep the reader's desire to continue reading. Next, let's talk about a few points that could be improved: The first point: Regarding the description of the protagonist Goldfinger and the opening environment of the protagonist in the opening chapter, it can actually be more streamlined. If it is a great essay or narrative essay, after having a good foundation, I can only say "awesome" for this kind of detailed description. But as far as the behind-the-scenes writing is concerned, I personally think it's still a bit too cumbersome. It could actually be more streamlined. The second point: In the interpenetrating description of the two backgrounds, your description of the different world is actually a little abrupt, or the change is too sudden, so that including me, after reading Chapter 52, the appearance of the different world in your novel is no longer in my mind. I hope the transition in this aspect can be made more natural. Of course, this also shows that your narrative in the main world is successful. Looking forward to the follow-up performance of this book... Support you, come on!

Originally I only wanted to give it three stars, but the extra one star is for the novel subject matter. The author has some plot designs that are rather inexplicable, as if he wrote them just for the sake of being happy. It's a comic book, but you have to grasp the degree of it, and don't go too far to describe the changes in the supporting characters' mentality, which will make it feel cumbersome. The progress of the protagonist has also been slowed down, and he has not made any achievements in the two worlds so far. Moreover, the monk, who was a level above Daqingxiazi, was actually killed by a mortal. Just like an ant knows the elephant's weakness, how could it possibly kill the elephant? But this book also has many shining points, and his descriptions of scenes can indeed touch people's happy points. I give you four stars and hope the author will keep up the good work.

Author, will you write another book after the last one?

The author's descriptions are very realistic. There are no logical errors so far. It is very satisfying to see the saints in front of people. Ordinary people's reactions to supernatural events are not abrupt. I mean, the author, don't you arrange supernatural events abroad? There are all dead people in the country, and there are not many dead points abroad. Moreover, there are ghosts only in the country. It is too weird. It feels like a primary school student of the Grim Reaper that wherever the protagonist goes, people die.

The description is really delicate, it's totally okay, I really like this Qingxiazi, the interaction between Qingxiazi and the protagonist really touched my heart, it's refreshing, funny, and touching. Apart from the shortcoming of being a new book and having few chapters, there's nothing bad about it [Learned]

It's been a long time since I've seen such high-quality work on Tomato, come on!

Come on, author, your writing is so wonderful. A different kind of book. I have already started promoting books.

It was well written, but the protagonist found out that he had occupied someone else's body. I didn't want to think about whether that person was dead or not. I was still panicking for a long time. Is Qingxiazi dead or not? And I feel that it would be better to add a setting where the wounds between the two worlds will not be brought back. The protagonist is using other people's bodies to explore the way. I feel that Qingxiazi has a good temper [face covering]. And if possible, I feel that the protagonist can also think about how to practice. It is not a problem to just use other people's bodies.

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The writing is very good! You can become a god in Tomato! Not bad compared to a certain great master! As long as you keep it up, you can become a god!

It's so good. I thought it was a routine article, but I didn't expect that it actually made me see all living beings. The male protagonist is pretty good, but without the Virgin, I believe no one would be indifferent after seeing such a tragic situation. The fight scenes are also very well written!

It's well written, but it's this multi-threaded narrative that makes it easy to get confused. . Especially in the case of serialization, when the first paragraph is written to a high level, the second paragraph can easily make readers unhappy. Moreover, once you read it for a while, you may forget the previous plot and feel incoherent when you continue reading. . Also, I personally prefer salvation stories that don't kill so many people. . If a large number of people died for every strange thing, it might be hard to watch. . Especially writing about children. . It's easy to feel uncomfortable But overall, this book is very good, the writing is good, and the reading is very immersive. Come on

It's so good. When I read the update, I discovered that it's the author of the book Ming Ming Final Clothes Immortal. I've read that book several times. It's great that there's a new work now! Pay attention this time! I just hate the lack of financial resources, so I watch more videos!

It's really good, but the front is a little messy.

Damn it, can you imagine listening to a novel in the middle of the night and suddenly a shrill cat meows? It's not the kind of fighting, it's the kind of roaring. It scared me to death and I quickly closed the door. It happened to be the elevator shock [crying]

It's great. This is the first time I've read a novel like this.

I read it in one day. The subject matter is novel and the content is well written.

It's well written, but I'm still waiting for the game book [Send Heart]

It feels good. Can the title of the book be changed? It's really not possible to write an introduction directly. It's also okay to draw a picture of a key plot item and use it as the title of the book. "Starting from Bai Jie to control the immortals and slayers" It really doesn't work, it should be more concise. <The Immortal comes out to slay the ghost to death. Starting from Bai Jie, the spiritual energy is revived. Of course, I'm just reminding you. Just think about it carefully.

Please update it quickly. Author, I have read your book from the beginning two or three times, but there is still no update. It keeps getting stuck [crying][crying][crying]

What the hell, it's only 50 chapters (´◑д◐｀) How many times a day are there updates?

Win with quantity, author. If you quantity too much, you can reduce the number of people who support books [crying]

However, although there are some minor flaws, they are innocuous and the author will keep up the good work.

Come on, author, your book. It really has a chance to become a masterpiece. It depends on how you write it. Keep the previous writing method and it will really take flight. It depends on you whether it will be popular or spicy, or it will be boring.

The plot is relaxed and tense, and the characters are detailed and vivid. Overall, Zhong Zai Tomato is a rare fairy grass. It is highly recommended.

Madam! ! ! ! Looks good! ! I finished reading it in one go. The plot is very good. I hope the protagonist will shine in the country! If you don't want to accept the king as your disciple, you can teach the national skills so that all the people can become immortals.

It's wonderful, but the title of the book is a bit discouraging. After reading the first ten chapters patiently, you can feel a completely different experience [Adoration] [Adoration]

In the first few chapters, I didn't feel much about it, but in the later chapters, the show of sage is really cool to me.

Very good book worth reading