
The New Game-Plus Trainer Who Came from Alola
阿罗拉走出的二周目训练家
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 175k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
82Chapters
2Reads
66.9kReads · all time
In booklists 5
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Pokemon Stories Set in the Alola Region, and Only the Alola Region
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Reader comments 26
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I highly recommend several elves to the author. I really hope that the protagonist can conquer these elves. The first phantom beast "Zeraora", the second boxing master "Martial Arts Bear Master", the third fire swordsman "Blue Flame Blade Demon", the fourth fire warrior "Red Lotus Armored Cavalry", and the fifth wave guide hero "Lucario". I highly recommend these elves to the author. If the protagonist wants to conquer the first phantom beast or mythical beast, I will recommend it to the author. The reader highly recommends "Zeraora", and the protagonist is originally from the Alola region. It is perfect to conquer the seventh-generation fantasy beast "Zeraora". Whether it is in the anime or the theatrical version, "Zeraora" is very impressive in terms of strength, and its appearance is super high. It also has the exclusive move "Plasma Lightning Punch", so I really hope that the author can consider my suggestion. Thank you.
Let me help you avoid pitfalls. The author set up the protagonist to be a Kalos who settled in Alola. He was childhood sweethearts with Serena and Suiren. Serena's childhood sweetheart was snatched away by Master Zhi from the sky. I guess that Master Zhi in Alola can also abduct a group of girls. I seriously suspect that the author has a special hobby.
Author, I counted the Z obtained by the protagonist. You misremembered the number. They are Zangweilin Ankylosaurus Z, Dragon Z, Steel Z, Grass Z and River Z. So, author, do you remember it? It's five yuan, not four.
There is not even one elf at the age of 15. What kind of challenge is this? A 10-year-old wants to go on a trip and has to postpone it until the age of 15. There are no Pokémon. The whimsical challenge of conquering the giant mantis is obviously going to be a challenge. Why don't you prepare it in advance? You tell me if there is no illustrated book or something 🙂🙂
Overall, the writing is good. This kind of Pokémon writing should focus more on daily interactions with Pokémon. One disadvantage is that in Chapter 40, there are problems with attributes. It is recommended to read the attribute table while writing when writing battles to prevent mistakes. If there are no mistakes here, there will be five stars. I will look at it later [Learned]
When the protagonist meets Xiaozhi, it is like meeting his father. Serena has to write about Serena, who is accompanied by Calumu even though she and the protagonist are childhood sweethearts. Will she fall in love with a benefactor whom she has only met once and has not seen him for 10 years? When Xiaozhi arrives in the Alola region, will he have to be chased by the water-enabled Olilie?
Genius. A childhood sweetheart for a protagonist is no match for a gift from the sky. Talent.
I can't think of a comment, but I just want to give it five stars.
I think it's pretty good. I read about other Pokémon, and some of them are very speechless. A Pokémon novel is said to be slow to catch on. It's true that Pokémon grow slowly, and Pokémon are still in their initial form. Then the protagonist's superpowers directly reach the King of Heaven. I'm speechless. If you want to write about superpowers, please change the subject and don't come to Pokémon Hoho fanfics. The author doesn't know if you will write about whether the protagonist has superpowers in the future, so you should pay attention to this. Pokémon is, after all, a world where Pokémon are the mainstay and superpowers are supplemented.
Unexpectedly, the green plum cannot be defeated by the sky.