The story of an ordinary disciple of a cultivating immortal family who entered the cultivating sect! Let's see how he makes trouble in this world of immortality with such an identity, and whether he can step into the path of immortality!
Reader comments
The content was originally good, but after seeing a few dialogues that didn't even have punctuation marks, it affected the aesthetics.
Very good, come on!
Not enough, write more
Work overtime quickly [cool] [cool]
It's okay. I haven't seen this kind of thing for a long time. The bad thing is that it looks awkward without punctuation. Come on, the author.
Where is the Immortal Mansion? Title party? Is Xianfu just an air purifier? Shouldn't there be a small world where all kinds of elixirs can store living creatures?
It's all about heroes saving beauties.
It's only true if it's plain and simple.
Are you copying Mo Tian Ji?
Getting married is a direct poison
Married at 13 years old. It was also a very explosive thing in ancient times. Or is it the past for modern people? If you can't write, don't write this kind of harem novel
Pretty good, just a little missing
Good, come on, well written
It's okay, but it's a little awkward in some places.
The content was originally good, but after seeing a few dialogues that didn't even have punctuation marks, it affected the aesthetics.
Very good, come on!
Not enough, write more Work overtime quickly [cool] [cool]
It's okay. I haven't seen this kind of thing for a long time. The bad thing is that it looks awkward without punctuation. Come on, the author.
Where is the Immortal Mansion? Title party? Is Xianfu just an air purifier? Shouldn't there be a small world where all kinds of elixirs can store living creatures?
It's all about heroes saving beauties.
It's only true if it's plain and simple.
Are you copying Mo Tian Ji?
Getting married is a direct poison
Married at 13 years old. It was also a very explosive thing in ancient times. Or is it the past for modern people? If you can't write, don't write this kind of harem novel
Pretty good, just a little missing
Good, come on, well written
It's okay, but it's a little awkward in some places.