[Main Spring World + Angel Next Door + Daily]
Loneliness is a lack of the ability to love. ——Marquez
Linqi, who was also lonely and longed to be Hikigaya Hachiman, finally got the chance to travel to the world of Harmono in the second dimension.
And knowing the development trajectory of the world line, he is also looking for his own "real thing" to make up for his inner regrets.
Ps: 1. I am a newbie. Whether it is a novel or a drama, Chunwu has too many regrets for the author, so I came up with the idea of writing an article. If the writing is not good, I will criticize it lightly.
2. Originally I wanted to write it as a comprehensive comic, but because there were too many harmono characters that I liked and wanted to write about, I simply changed it from scratch to the main harmono.
3. After all, it is a pure love story, to make up for regrets, so it must still be the beginning of joining the service department. Please forgive me if you don't like it.
4. Although the God Killer has been added, it only has power settings and is almost a background board. After all, it is mainly about daily life. If there are conflicting bugs in abilities, this book shall prevail.
Reader comments
After reading it, I felt: "Not bad."
But I don't think the whole book should need the setting of a god-killer.
After all, relatively speaking, I was a little uncomfortable watching the beginning.
It's just a daily show, so there's no need to add some extra settings.
Moreover, there are too few original plots in this book, and it basically follows the main line of Harmono.
You have added other chapters, you can start from other chapters and follow the main line of Harmono, giving you the illusion of watching it all over again.
And original plots need to be appropriately introduced.
Also, this book should introduce the concept of "counterfeit" at appropriate places.
Although it is said that "fake things" and "real things" run through the whole spring thing, they should not be introduced directly, it is best to be introduced indirectly.
In fact, this book is quite good in terms of writing style. However, many details in this book have not been handled well, and this is also an area that needs to be corrected.
Moreover, subjective thoughts should be added to the character setting.
Overall, this book is relatively excellent.
However, due to the lack of original plot and lack of good character development, the rating was too low.
I hope the author can properly handle these things in the later stages.
This book is also very good, come on! [Top post][top post][top post]
It's such a strong sense of déjà vu. As for what looks familiar, I can only say that I understand everything. I almost thought... This is another timeline (face covering). Let's keep it for now. I'm also curious whether this book is popular in the comic circle. The author may have the same intention in opening a trumpet ~
When will piling start?
Nowadays, it's not easy for Tomato to find comprehensive comic novels that are pleasing to the eye, so go for it. Also, if the name is labeled as God Killer, it would be interesting to add more "restless" plots. If the writing is not strong enough, just let nature take its course and be lighter.
Five-star praise, good luck in the Year of the Dragon!
Very youthful
This book written by the author describes the delicacy of youth, the confusion of youth, and the emotions of youth very well. I like it very much.
Can you add some God Eater performance? So far, there's a Mimi.
The emotional lines and characters are well drawn, and the writing is also very good. Don't stop updating.
The author writes very well, keep up the good work
Five-star support
Five-star support
What can I say, it's okay.
The feeling is gone, kick me alive. Thanks 🙏
Welcome back the author.
Welcome back the author
Where did Shiina go?
It is recommended to skip the first chapter, the rest of the plot is okay
Except for the difficulty of soul penetration, other settings are considered good in the same type.
It looks good, but come on, author, please update me as soon as possible.
Adding more combat, or [note] traveling through time to fight monsters, I personally think it's better
It's the type I'm looking for, just don't write half of it! At least finish it for me!
The author is great and very good-looking, keep up the good work!
How can I say, not bad
It's cold, I guess it needs to be cut.
Spring things are great, they can be good
Looks good, stop being a eunuch
Beautiful, five-star rating.
The writing is good, but the names should be unified.
Not bad, but just not bad
I'm so happy when I see my Yukino, she looks so good and I love watching it
Quickly updated, the subject matter is very good, and it makes me want to read more. It has been a long time since I have seen such a book that makes my eyes light up.
After reading it, I felt: "Not bad." But I don't think the whole book should need the setting of a god-killer. After all, relatively speaking, I was a little uncomfortable watching the beginning. It's just a daily show, so there's no need to add some extra settings. Moreover, there are too few original plots in this book, and it basically follows the main line of Harmono. You have added other chapters, you can start from other chapters and follow the main line of Harmono, giving you the illusion of watching it all over again. And original plots need to be appropriately introduced. Also, this book should introduce the concept of "counterfeit" at appropriate places. Although it is said that "fake things" and "real things" run through the whole spring thing, they should not be introduced directly, it is best to be introduced indirectly. In fact, this book is quite good in terms of writing style. However, many details in this book have not been handled well, and this is also an area that needs to be corrected. Moreover, subjective thoughts should be added to the character setting. Overall, this book is relatively excellent. However, due to the lack of original plot and lack of good character development, the rating was too low. I hope the author can properly handle these things in the later stages. This book is also very good, come on! [Top post][top post][top post]
It's such a strong sense of déjà vu. As for what looks familiar, I can only say that I understand everything. I almost thought... This is another timeline (face covering). Let's keep it for now. I'm also curious whether this book is popular in the comic circle. The author may have the same intention in opening a trumpet ~
When will piling start?
Nowadays, it's not easy for Tomato to find comprehensive comic novels that are pleasing to the eye, so go for it. Also, if the name is labeled as God Killer, it would be interesting to add more "restless" plots. If the writing is not strong enough, just let nature take its course and be lighter.
Five-star praise, good luck in the Year of the Dragon!
Very youthful This book written by the author describes the delicacy of youth, the confusion of youth, and the emotions of youth very well. I like it very much.
Can you add some God Eater performance? So far, there's a Mimi.
The emotional lines and characters are well drawn, and the writing is also very good. Don't stop updating.
The author writes very well, keep up the good work
Five-star support
Five-star support
What can I say, it's okay. The feeling is gone, kick me alive. Thanks 🙏
Welcome back the author.
Welcome back the author
Where did Shiina go?
It is recommended to skip the first chapter, the rest of the plot is okay
Except for the difficulty of soul penetration, other settings are considered good in the same type.
It looks good, but come on, author, please update me as soon as possible.
Adding more combat, or [note] traveling through time to fight monsters, I personally think it's better
It's the type I'm looking for, just don't write half of it! At least finish it for me!
The author is great and very good-looking, keep up the good work!
How can I say, not bad
It's cold, I guess it needs to be cut.
Spring things are great, they can be good
Looks good, stop being a eunuch
Beautiful, five-star rating.
The writing is good, but the names should be unified.
Not bad, but just not bad
I'm so happy when I see my Yukino, she looks so good and I love watching it
Quickly updated, the subject matter is very good, and it makes me want to read more. It has been a long time since I have seen such a book that makes my eyes light up.