[Red Mansion] Qiongshan Dyed with Indigo

The mixed story structure of the original Red Mansions was shattered with one stick, and it didn't break down. It was actually the first time I saw it, and it was quite interesting. I'll give it another try.

The writing is very good, although there are some typos, but it does not affect the reading. After reading it in one go, I felt a little disappointed. The author wrote the Jia family's defeat really well, making people feel like a rabbit is dead and a fox is sad. The plot setting is also very reasonable, but the ending is a bit hasty. I am quite looking forward to the fate of Twelve Hairpins. The relationship between Du Shaoqiong and Daiyu is also very sweet, and their daily interactions are very cute. Du Shaoqiong will pass the tea that he thinks is delicious to Daiyu, and will also eat the leftover food of Daiyu. There are also some small details, and you can feel Du Shaoqiong's love for Daiyu. The Daiyu portrayed by the author is also very cute, can be petty, and can act coquettishly. I am really good at writing emotional lines. It would be great if I could write some extras. Du Shaoqiong has always said that I want to show Daiyu the beauty of the mountains and rivers. I am really looking forward to this extra! The word Du means small stone, which also coincides with the former alliance between wood and stone. I think this little detail is quite interesting. Later, Daiyu calls herself the owner of Jiangzhu and teases Du Shaoqiong, saying that he is Jiangzhu. This part looks really cute. I hope the author can write some sweet extras😭

Still a good Red Mansion article! The author did not overly favor the fate of several women because of Jinling's few hairpins, but made some small changes as much as possible. What I like most is the portrayal of Xue Baochai. In the past, most people who watched The Red Mansion were people who admired Daiyu and stepped on Baochai. Most of them gave this ambitious and good at dealing with the girl as greedy for power and hypocritical, so she was often unpopular. But the novel's portrayal of Baochai became much richer during that meeting. Baochai is indeed extremely ambitious because she has no brothers in the family to take responsibility for and wants to make her own efforts for the family. She just didn't want to let her relatives fall into the dust and used the female generation to help the family in the feudal era, which is worthy of admiration. Furthermore, the relationship between Lin Daiyu and the male protagonist is also very well created. The male protagonist did not come with a filter for Lin Daiyu. He gradually changed from a goddess to a wife while getting along with Lin Daiyu. He was very kind to Sister Lin and was an extremely upright male protagonist. Love this novel!

I like all the articles about Daiyu with a single heroine [full]

Support the author for his hard work. Hope to see you in the future! It's a nice alternative Red Mansion fanfic. The writing is good, don't be a eunuch! What I am most afraid of when reading a book is that it will be interrupted. Just tell me if you have any questions.

A very nice Red Mansions novel. It is meticulous and unhurried. It has the feeling of strolling in a garden. It is eloquent and neither depressing nor arrogant. It is a stable, intelligent but emotionally self-loving and slightly slow protagonist! I like this very much. I like sister Lin, and the fact that she didn't have a relationship before marriage shows Lin's self-esteem and self-love. The fact that she doesn't rush to consummate the marriage after marriage shows the protagonist's self-esteem, self-love and respect for Lin! Nice!

There are no big openings, no particularly golden golden fingers, and no specially distorted villains. Using a normal and smart protagonist to improve the golden hairpins, Lin Daiyu is a bit petty and ice-smart like in the original work, and she is real. Great writing! The rating is so low probably because it doesn't satisfy most people.

It is rare that the character design is close to the original work. There is no change in the character design because of subjective preferences to be completely positive and have no personality shortcomings or completely negative and no one's interests. Then it is given a direction that does not deviate but is idealistic. In addition, the current vision leaves a wise direction and idealism, but it is too short and can explain everyone's whereabouts.

It was the first time I watched Dream of Red Mansions from this perspective, and it gave me a lot of novelty. This is not like God's perspective, it is rather one-sided, and it may be because there are too few chapters, and the characters are well portrayed. I look forward to the author's new work [Like]

This is a good book for those who only like Daiyu

The author is very innovative

It's still good, but the ending is a little rushed.

It was a bit boring at first, but after getting married, Daiyu was so cute and her little temper made life come true.

Seeing a common man without a crown? The thorny people are anxious, and the hard work is unbearable. See you in plain clothes? My heart is sad and sad, and I want to talk about returning home with my son. Is it a common sight? My heart is full of knots, and I talk to my son as one.

The ending is pretty good. It's all the fault of Jia's family. The male and female protagonists are just like embellishments.

It's pretty good. I think this Daiyu is more like the weak and quiet version of Guo Xiang, but coincidentally I also like Guo Xiang. Baochai's place is very good, very Xue Baochai, at least that's Xue Baochai in my heart

One chapter a day is not enough

It's great, but it's a pity there's no extras

It's good-looking, but not enough.

It's so well written.

Nice! Please give me a spin-off or a sequel

I heard you like it. It's a big regret for me that I didn't kiss, hug, and hold you up.

It's quite to my taste, but the relationship with Daiyu isn't very sweet.

I think the writing style is quite good, but most of the content is about Ning Rong's second mansion. There are not many stories about the protagonist. Overall, the story is quite good.

It's my second time, I like it very much, marriage comes first, then love, Daiyu's little temper is also very cute, I like it~

I like it so much, I like it so much, I like it so much, I like it so much! ! !

The writing is very good, it can be considered as fitting the original characters, and it also gives a similar ending.

It's very beautiful, and the writing really has its own thoughts.

It's beautiful. I like watching Daiyu grow up slowly. Please give me more encouragement.

It's very well written, but a little lacking. It would be nice if there were some extras.