Street Stall: Boss, You're Such a Jerk. You Left Before I Even Finished Eating

[Awkward laugh] I think it was well written. When the villain knew the plot, he didn't have an anti-social personality, and he didn't want to take revenge on anyone. He just wanted to change his own future, and he also hoped that his parents would have a better future. It was pretty good.

Awesome, super pretty, I really like it. The only shortcoming is that the author is too short. I have never seen such a short one. His ability needs to be improved. Author [smile][smile]

It's not a particularly pure food novel, because it contains quite a lot of plot content, such as traveling through books, rebirth, and other elements. However, it is a bit too complicated and too much. Mainly because it is not arranged particularly well. It can be seen that if he can write it more completely, in fact, these settings are pretty good. , But, many things have a feeling that they want to write, but are unable to do so. For example, if you put a few points of a child's report of a mistake into a book and rebirth together, it can be very exciting. But as for this piece, it has a lead underneath, but it does not detonate. A lot of things are laid out, but it is very uncomfortable if it does not explode in the end. For example, the male protagonist of this article has a system from his perspective, and then the system tells him that they are a novel, and then he is the villain in the novel, and then he is the fake son, and the real son is the male protagonist in the novel, and then the villain's ex-girlfriend is the female protagonist in the novel. This setting is very interesting, in the novel Li Li, or fighting for his son, he was reborn. In his previous life, these two real and fake sons fought to the death, and then after rebirth, you want to write about the two of them, but later they woke up, got along peacefully, and took a different path. This is good, but there is no follow-up. For example, what about the heroine? This fake son didn't arrange a girlfriend or a partner for him, but there were always many girls around him. According to the previous formula or the content in the book, the real son should be paired with the heroine, but they were not together in the end. The real son was with another character who may not even exist in the original book, and then what about the heroine? She is the heroine, but she no longer has a role in the show. Moreover, a so-called female protagonist appears in this film, and every time she appears, she is a very annoying character. When she sees the male protagonist setting up a stall, she is belittled in various ways. When she sees the male protagonist setting up a stall, she feels that the male protagonist has been kicked out of a rich family and is in despair. The vicious male supporting character in the movie, and then asked the male protagonist to go out to set up a stall, but after setting up the stall, the reward for setting up the stall was not money, but a non-realizable house. Of course, he was later given a very valuable building, which could collect rent. In addition, he only had 5 million, The rest have nothing to do with money. They are all fortune-telling skills and talisman-drawing skills. For such things, I can feel that the author wants to integrate many elements into it, but it can be seen that he must be a novice and the integration is not particularly good. Then the attitude of the male protagonist is very obvious. It can be seen that he is not happy to set up a stall, but for the sake of this system, he has been setting up a stall, and has changed from a playboy to one. Even if he is not happy, even if he wakes up early and works late at night, these things may not even be available for a long time and half a month. Even when he was resting, he could still treat customers cheerfully and with a smile every day. The distance between him becoming a pure villain and a pure character was only a dream, that is, he saw the content of the book in his dream, and then he had the system, and then he completely changed all of a sudden. This transformation was a bit abrupt. Give it four stars and encourage it. The author's idea is good, but he needs to work harder on his basic skills. There may be less writing in this type, and there are also typos and omissions. In some sentences, if a word is omitted, the meaning may be completely different. Although you can understand what the author wants to do, it is a missing word, but such small mistakes still need to be checked more. By the way, this novel also gave me the feeling that it is just a matter of spreading rumors and then trying to refute them. Although the author may want to show that it is fun, so that all kinds of audiences and customers, including his parents, will all misunderstand that the male protagonist is gay and likes men, but two people at once It might be funny to do this for the first time, but every time when talking about similar things, I have to write about this situation, that is, everyone surrounds the male protagonist, and then says that he is gay or something, and then the male protagonist can't say anything about it, but after seeing it, I will have a feeling, isn't this a rumor? And no matter what the male protagonist says, no one will listen to him, and no one will believe him. His mother even asked him privately that even if he really likes men, it doesn't matter. It just feels very powerless. I don't think spreading rumors can be used as a fun thing.

I like the plot very much. Although this is mainly based on the original writing, you can understand it, but the author also has his own ideas. Personally, I think it is quite interesting.

The main storyline is pretty good, and the setting of the rebirth and awakening + random stall setting system is also very interesting. I personally like random stall setting, so I think it's pretty good. The author also writes in great detail about making delicious food. Of course, I read more about the eating part. Lin Mo himself should be great, and regulating family relationships is also a highlight. The writing style is basically satisfactory, so the shortcomings mainly lie in the plot. One is that it is about a younger sister and an idol falling in love, which is relatively unpopular. The other is that there is a reward that can reverse uncontrollable plot points, which is not used. Finally, some plot points are forgotten by the author after writing them. Everyone has also discovered this in the paragraph comments╮(╯_╰)╭ Although it's not as good as the most popular Boss Lin's book, it's still pretty good.

This is my first time reading this kind of work about food. New, unique and interesting. My rating would be 9.5 Or higher [Eating Melon] It's just too short and not enough to read [Sneaky Smile] Author, you don't want readers to say you are incompetent and short and weak, right?

It's a very good book. If it weren't for the disturbing plot line of the sister and the star, it would be worthy of five stars.

The plot is similar to that of a certain author's article. It's a good meal replacement article. If a certain author doesn't update it, you can read this article when you have time. The sixth customer in this article is also quite interesting. The plot has a bit more metaphysics, a bit of solving the case, and a suspenseful plot about the real and fake young master.

The content is very funny, but the title was poorly chosen. When I looked at the title, I thought it was a showdown between real and fake rich people, but it turned out to be a stall novel. I think the title should be "My stall-setting life after knowing the future." I think this web article is actually less distinctive than other web articles, and the content is similar. The main character sets up stalls everywhere. Normally, I shouldn't read this kind of web article until I see 50 photos, but I don't know why I read this web article to the end.

It's okay. I finished it after listening to it. It's hard to finish a novel in its entirety. There was a small problem in the middle when my sister fell in love. But in the end, there wasn't much of a problem. It was a warm daily life with customers chasing after the stall owner.